My Right Eye Sees the Forbidden

Is Daki some kind of powerful figure? I feel like I can't continue reading unless someone explains it clearly. I'm completely stuck on the first chapter.

Hey bro, I also want some photos of me cosplaying in a school swimsuit. Could you please send me a copy?

This book seems to resemble the newspaper vendor's tale of a spiritual traveler. Both have cheats/hacks. Both are the first S-rank missions. Both have female friends from the Public Security Bureau.

Dear author, is there a second part to Immortal Sword Pavilion?

They won first place

The quality of the author's novels seems to fluctuate.

The previous book, *Tian Gang Di Sha*, had clear logic, a reasonable story, all characters with decent intelligence, and a comfortable narrative style. However, the inconsistent way the characters were addressed—sometimes calling him Zhou Changqing and sometimes Changqing—was a flaw. I hope your new book can avoid these pitfalls and focus on its strengths.

I was drawn in by the author's advertisement, read two chapters and thought it was pretty good, I'll let it accumulate for now.

After reading the author's Immortal Sword Pavilion, I noticed a serious weakness: a lack of vocabulary. The author repeatedly uses phrases like "pupils suddenly contracted" (instantly, immediately, suddenly…), "aggressively," "at the same time," "abruptly," etc.

When I got to page 6 of chapter 17, good heavens, the plot was exactly the same as that of Spirit Realm Walker, and even the lines were the same. Author, you've written several novels before, was this really necessary?