Creepy Cultivation: I Have a Temple of Five Viscera

In ancient times, "Humble family" refers to a once prestigious family that has fallen on hard times. Common people refer to those who own houses and land. No house, no land, no life; no house, no land, no life.

The parents' characterization is flawed. They should be portrayed as wealthy merchants, landlords, or constables. Even Constable Ma's expenses amount to 80 taels of silver, so the protagonist's parents must have spent even more, including the cost of martial arts training. This is something that farming parents couldn't possibly afford.

This protagonist is a goofy, immature teenager, behaving like a middle schooler. The author is definitely a virgin; he's never even been in a relationship.

It must have been quite a feat to embody all these traits in the protagonist: a freeloader, a mama's boy, an ordinary guy, and a reckless brute.

Even returning to town caused trouble; wherever the protagonist went, trouble followed.

Starting a book with the wife is a mistake; you need to consider how much of the plot involves her.

It's getting a bit tiring to read so many books by so many authors. It's always foreigners, outsiders causing trouble. The protagonist is always some kind of firefighter. Are there any books where the protagonist goes out and causes trouble? Murder, arson, rape, kidnapping—anything goes.

The protagonist is a complete goofball and a mama's boy; he wouldn't have survived three chapters without his third wife.

To say the author's writing is excellent is something only a human could come up with? This ghost just barges in like that without any explanation?

Adding one feels really weird.