Cultivating Immortality, Starting with Butchering Pigs

Since the separation of the protagonist and his savior, grandfather and grandson, this book has been like an essay that has gone off topic and lost its direction. . Completely lost the heroic spirit and cheerfulness of Yan people Zhang Yide at the beginning. The male protagonist at the beginning of the book is both beautiful on the outside and showy on the inside. He has the characteristics that make readers shine and want to read on. But as the story progresses, it can be said that it becomes more and more boring. . It has become a featureless article about the cliche process of upgrading, killing monsters and changing maps. . So my opinion is divided into two points. Either there is something wrong with the author's outline and the character image is ruined, and the story goes off topic and becomes cliché. Or the person you hired at the beginning to write it for you.

My hands were clumsy and I painted one 😁

Along the way, Zhang Kui's chivalry has not changed, he has not been dazzled by power, and has not been corrupted by power. He has been a guest who has been blinded by lard. The author's line of blood smeared with weeds, and the jackal's crown is full of tassels really describes the darkness of the old society. Zhang Kui may seem to some people to have survived the crisis entirely by relying on the halo of the protagonist, but he did not escape. He is a real man and a pure man. Reading this novel really reminds me of my dream of being a hero when I was a child. The dynasty is fatuous and the building is about to collapse. Evil monsters are running rampant. People are in dire straits. There are so-called immortal cultivators who stay behind closed doors, and evil spirits who take advantage of the opportunity to harm the world. In this environment, Zhang Kui's courage to fight evil is really passionate. As for the issue of the brother dying at the beginning, some people are just talking nonsense. If Zhang Kui dies later, why should I write about it? I think everyone knows the three elements of the novel. Even the protagonist is dead. What else is there to do? The dead brother is completely a clue to promote the development of the storyline.

In the secret realm of Ji Temple, the ancient spirit will bind the locust demon

If your magical powers are strong, don't restrict them. You'd rather have a few rubbish magical powers than restrict high-level magical powers, otherwise you'll get criticized.

Combined with the title of the book, I read the book again. The beginning of the book is good and I can give it 90 points. After more than ten chapters, the maximum score is 60 points. What the hell, isn't this a trick? I thought that the main character killed pigs on the surface and practiced secretly. By the time he came out of the mountain, he had become a great person and reached the peak of his career, like Yan Chixia and Zhong Kui. It turned out that he was just fighting monsters and upgrading on an assembly line. During the Qi training period, he ran out to have fun with a group of thieves of the same level. In the foundation building stage, he had a lively fight with a group of thieves of the same level. The whole book is about fighting and leveling up. He killed a pig in the first two chapters. . . .

To be honest, the writing is pretty good. I've seen a lot of handsome young people, cool and unrestrained cultivating immortals, and all I encountered were trashy subjects, strong and evil people, with disgusting faces, and a solid life.

It was okay at first, but then it got worse and worse. Is it true that the main character in a book doesn't grow in intelligence and experience? You always get angry when something happens. What is your experience? It's the same character from beginning to end, I'm convinced

Is it similar? Net map.

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