Dao Lord of the Spirit Treasure

The protagonist, or rather the author, is a bit pretentious, and some parts of the plot feel formulaic, as if they're trying to be morally correct for the sake of being morally correct. For example, the text repeatedly mentions that cultivators don't treat mortals as equals, implying that the protagonist treats all mortals equally and doesn't forget his roots.

It's a bit strange. Why can't you write a story with good aptitude and a secret technique? Why do you always prefer to write stories with useless characters and secret techniques?

I've subscribed to the whole thing, but I feel a disconnect between each chapter. It's like the previous chapter hadn't finished before the next one started, and later chapters were filling in the gaps from the earlier ones. It doesn't feel very coherent. 🙂

This is a great subject matter, the logic and writing are superb. Finally, I don't have to read those drug-fueled, monster-slaying, level-up stories anymore, or those stories about cultivating qi and strengthening the foundation but only focusing on magical power without cultivating spiritual cultivation or understanding destiny.

The author spent a lot of time writing about sect reforms; did they even find it engaging? Just because you spend time writing doesn't mean it's good. I don't know why they bothered writing all this random, nonsensical content.

There's nothing satisfying about it. I came to see the magic weapons, the formations, and the Four Swords of Zhuxian, but I wasn't satisfied at all.

The writing is still a bit weak; the plot is too confusing, easily skipping large sections and leaving the reader feeling bewildered. For example, the journey to the conference is suddenly glossed over – where's the proper structure? It immediately breaks the immersion in the story.

Less skilled authors merely use descriptive language to illustrate cause-and-effect relationships between characters, while more skilled authors use dialogue within scenes to reveal these relationships.

The writing is rather poor. The foundation-building process, which took dozens of chapters to build, is glossed over in a single sentence. There hasn't been a single climax yet; it's too bland, neither enjoyable nor worth abandoning. 😅

He inexplicably went to the Nine Wheels Sect to cause trouble.