Dao Lord of the Spirit Treasure

The protagonist or the author is a bit pretentious, and part of the plot has a formulaic feel for the sake of having the three views correct. For example: It is mentioned many times in the article that immortal cultivators do not treat mortals as the same kind. In and out of words, the protagonist treats mortals equally and does not forget his roots. But the author asked himself, can mortals really be equal to the immortal cultivators in the author's book? Even if it is equality in dignity and personality. It's like a tall person and a short person. If you don't allow the tall person to look down on the short person, do you have to make people bend down or even kneel to look at the short person at eye level to achieve equality? Under the analogy between ordinary people, this statement is already ridiculous. What is the gap between immortal cultivators and mortals in the article? Do we have to make some zzzq in this real world? Give the protagonist a radiance of greatness and righteousness? It's okay for you to do it, but please put your own thoughts into it!

I've finished the book, but I feel like there's a sense of disconnection between each chapter. I feel like the previous chapter hasn't been finished yet, and the next chapter has started again, and the following chapters have filled in what was missing from the previous ones, so it's not very coherent 🙂

It's a bit strange, why can't I write a way of writing with good qualifications + cheats? Why do I always like to write some useless + cheats?

This subject matter is really good, the logic and writing are so awesome, I finally don't have to read the kind of stuff about taking medicine to defeat monsters and leveling up, or the stuff about practicing Qi to help the foundation, only cultivating mana, not Taoism, and not knowing the number of days.

The writing is still a bit poor, the plot setting is a bit too confusing, and a large part of the plot is easily skipped, giving people an inexplicable feeling. For example, on the way to attend the conference, it was suddenly mentioned in one stroke. Isn't it the inheritance of the brothers? All of a sudden, there was a show

A low-level author will only use explanatory text to reflect the causal relationship between characters, while a high-level author will use the dialogue between the characters in the scene to reflect the relationship between the characters.

It just doesn't feel good. I came to see the magical treasures, the formations, and the Four Swords of Zhu Xian. It doesn't feel good at all.

The writing style is a bit poor. The foundation building that has been laid out for dozens of chapters has been mentioned in one stroke. Now I don't see a climax. It's too bland. It's a pity to abandon it if it's tasteless 😅

Two very important points are that the protagonist's story is too complicated, and the author's writing is inappropriately detailed. It should be written in detail and not written in detail, and too much ink should be written in one stroke. But overall it's still worth watching.

The author spent a lot of pen and ink writing content related to sect reform. Do you think it is interesting? It doesn't mean that the content you took the time to write will be good-looking. I don't know why you write such messy content.