Half-Elf Ranger

It's well written. I've read many books about the fourth natural disaster ravaging the game's other world, and it's rare to find a book that's thoughtful. In fact, most players in the peaceful world without resurrection and plug-ins are not as good as the natives.

It is a good book, but the results are probably not very good. I vaguely remember that there was an old book many years ago that seemed to be in this style. Could it be that some big shot opened the vest? This book is very well written, but there are some flaws that are not suitable for the serialization system of online writing. I won't go into the advantages, there are many, and it is suitable for friends who have some knowledge of DND or are interested in DND. It is also suitable for some elderly readers who can concentrate on reading. Let me talk about some things that the author can change a little bit. Some of them may affect the outline. I hope it will be helpful to the author. First point, there is no clear main line. The protagonist seems mature, but in fact he is always confused. He seems to grow very slowly, which will not be a good experience for some readers. The author probably wanted to construct a story about struggling to survive the fourth natural disaster. This is inherently difficult to write and sell well, so you should be mentally prepared before starting the book. But what kind of person the protagonist should be in this process, I didn't see a little bit of it until Chapter 189; Second point, the upgrade pace is too slow, which may have something to do with cheats. It's like this without powerful plug-ins. It's not like Xiaobaiwen's level improvement is obvious, which is also a common problem in DND; so now many DND types speed up the pace and then slow down before and after the legend. The third point is that the plot does not have much ups and downs, which must be related to the narrative technique and mental growth. There is no special explosive point. To put it simply, the b decoration is not round enough. The author should know better than me what is so exciting about the DND genre; The fourth point is that it may be difficult to read without some knowledge of DND, which is also a common problem with this type of work. In fact, I personally think that there must be a reason why this kind of works are difficult to write and sell nowadays. Sometimes you can consider adding some notes at the end of the chapters. Fifth point, people nowadays like to watch the grumpy old man, who is so called decisive in killing, and they would like to kill the supporting character with just one word. In the eyes of many people, calmness = indecisiveness, that's how true it is. The protagonist is still growing, but his character is also limited by the dnd camp system. In my opinion, the author chose the hell-level difficulty to open the book. I don't know if the author can persist. After all, I have seen countless bad endings. I just want to say that there are people reading what you write. If so, please hold on. . The flag of dnd, to put it more broadly, the flag of the traditional game, really no one can catch it now. You can count it clearly with one hand. Others are short and tall.

After reading all the chapters so far, give your opinion. First of all, this is an author with very strong writing skills. The coherence of the plot, the structure of the story, and the description of the scenes, especially the description of the big move scene in the middle, are very enjoyable to watch. You can almost have a detailed picture in your mind. Among 100 authors, there are no more than 10 with such good writing skills. Maybe it is too much, less than 5. Secondly, all aspects of the settings are also very nice. The protagonists and supporting characters all have enough but not too much redundant portrayal settings. It simply lets you know what kind of character this is without being verbose. Then, the layering of the story is great, that is, the popular transition is not blunt, which is attributed to the author's control ability. In a different world, the aborigines have their own unique advantages. It is a world of high martial arts, full of gods and demons, and the players are struggling to survive and work hard to find their own way. Come on! I also hope that the author will not be proud, causing his ability to control words to decline. As a reader, I like your book very much. I will order it in full to show my support. I will give it 95 points out of 100 and 5 points. As you said in your book, people should be in awe. There is almost no poisonous point in a million words. It is a wonderful novel and I hope it will attract more people's attention. .

No eunuch, no eunuch, no eunuch. Say important things three times. Please improve.

I have regained the feeling I had when watching "Lord of the Abyss" and "Rise of the Throne", with a sense of immersion and substitution. I like novels about farming upgrades and obscene development. I hope that the protagonist will not become a eunuch while pursuing strength.

The author wants to be omnipotent, but you are taking the path of the physics department. The author has a somewhat biased understanding of the core of the ranger profession. He has not played high-level books and has too high expectations for the ranger's combat power. The essence of the Ranger profession is physical output. Divine magic mainly assists oneself. The output and control are not good in the middle and late stages. It lacks necessary expertise and perception attribute support, and cannot penetrate the spell resistance of monsters. Level 20 ranger (14 perception), divine magic level 5 to 6. The protagonist, a ranger, plans to work part-time as a kendo master, and plans to become a master of nine swords in the future. His expertise is basically physical, and he does not have any magic expertise. Why should his perception point be so high? His strength and agility are a bit low. Moreover, physical professions can either specialize in melee/ranged/defense. Choose one of the three. Your core and future plans have shown that melee is the core. Why choose so many ranged specialties in the early stage? Ranger + half-elf, just use a longbow from a distance to rest on your laurels, and the hit is guaranteed. The most important thing is that in the early stage, the protagonist basically relies on melee combat from fighting to facing danger. In terms of games, the protagonist is playable, but weak in the mid-term and not strong enough in the later stage.

After reading it, I would like to make a brief review. At around 300,000 words, it is still relatively young. I have no apprentices after finishing it. However, since I am more interested in related themes, I still finished the updates in one go. Based on personal taste, it can be regarded as food There is no special poisonous point, but there is no special breaking point. The protagonist is from the arena to the invasion of demons. The development of the jackals, lizards, etc. Can be said to be quite satisfactory, neither promiscuous nor coquettish, and cautious From the point of view of telling the master that the town of Fushang has the ability to establish a foothold before leaving, it is estimated that they will farm and develop in the town for a period of time, and may also conduct some exploration in the surroundings The plot promotion can be said to be relatively As is common, most of the development of the plot can be guessed without any surprises. After all, the main plot of these hundreds of thousands of words is just that the protagonist wants to return to the town of his birth. Then through the dialogue and foreshadowing of different characters, part of the protagonist's background and the shaping of the character are simply revealed. Among other characters, the suspected heroine gradually The process of understanding and admiration is non-toxic and has no bright spots. The Nine Swords Masters are definitely foreshadowing and they will meet again. Most of the bosses in Twilight Town who want to unite with other towns still have operations. I don't know if the old troll housekeeper will sacrifice. That old friend of the ranger may also help Waterfall Town or something...

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Women really affect the speed of drawing a sword. The protagonist in the article explains this sentence very well.