Arcane Glory Begins at the Throne

Chase customers at the beginning Boss, you have to understand, What you write is an online article. If you want to make money, you have to write cool articles You are not a master, and you don't have so many die-hard fans Just like a Hollywood blockbuster, you must arouse people's interest at the beginning and have a small climax within half an hour After all, you don't want to make a highbrow art film, do you?

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I feel that the author's writing has a very Western fantasy flavor. Nowadays, many Western fantasy mage protagonists rarely stay at the low level for too long, and the opponents they face are stronger than themselves. They basically do not face ordinary people. It is as if the whole world is full of powerful spellcasters. This gives people the feeling that ordinary spellcasters are rubbish and cheap. There will be a sense of fragmentation, and I will no longer feel the flavor of Western Fantasy before. I remember when I watched Western Fantasy, as long as a mage character appeared, I would think that he was a big boss who would help or bring danger to the protagonist. Even if the protagonist was very strong at the time, as for the gods, they were just background panels or appeared at the ending. Although I know that this kind of Western fantasy will disappear soon as the protagonist upgrades, I still hope that the author will write more plots of this kind of traveling in the mortal world.

It gave the protagonist an identity he shouldn't have! It is positioned as a high-level player, but in fact, it is just a newbie who has checked the guide.

I feel like the rhythm of the plot is so strange. Why is the protagonist facing racial conflicts again? In the last book, the protagonist chose to side with the elves and cooperate with humans, but that was before there was any deep hatred between the two sides. But in this book, I think the elves and humans are almost going to have their brains broken, and other races can't stand the alien race. What kind of plot is this? Racism? This is very different from the plot I originally thought of studying spells, going out on adventures, meeting partners, soul mates, creating a team, establishing an organization, fighting evil gods, defeating conspiracy, saving the world, traveling through the world, and becoming a legend 😰

After reading Chapter 46, the author's writing is quite good, but so far I feel that it is very depressing, and it has been very depressed, and there is no point to vent my emotions at all. Most people who read online articles may be like me, just for entertainment. The emotions have been stacked up for too long, so I am not happy to read it. Come on, author!

I really like Andrina, the heroine of the previous book! I hope this novel also has a good heroine! Also: Congratulations on the new book

After reading the novel, I just felt it was too heavy. I can accept the description of the tragedies caused by the war, the hatred between both sides, etc. However, I don't quite accept that the entire article is about tragedy. I think the writing style can be a little more relaxed, add some daily life, and let the protagonist build bonds with other people. Don't leave the protagonist alone, as this will look heavy. In addition, it is not necessarily the case that the characters who appear have depth and have goals that they have to do and complete. Since it is a DND system, people from the chaotic good camp should also exist, and believers of the Goddess of Joy also exist, so why can't there be more relaxed characters? He has no goals, is humorous, kind, and does whatever he wants. For example, an adventurer appears! Cat people are beautiful, wandering, simple, carefree, and adventurous. She has no goals, how can she be so happy? Another example is a talkative demon pet. Most of your characters are very naughty. Why aren't there those who see through everything, then firmly choose a path, and are more heroic? And why are there no honest adventurers, or brave adventurers, or naive adventurers. You can be depressed, but it is not necessary for everyone to be depressed. You can be wise, but it is not necessary for everyone to be wise. Many gods, such as gods on the chaotic side such as the God of Cats and Dances, have been gods for so long, but in the end they are still curious and playful, so why can't other people have some little hobbies of their own?

If possible, I hope the author can write more about the process of establishing his own wizard organization and the process of running the organization. If he can write it in detail, the effect will be very good The following content is used as an introduction, welcome to discuss

It's not exciting enough, and the characterization is not likable either.