Drawing Cards to Exorcise Demons in Tokyo

It's too outrageous. The author's system is so messed up. In a small place in Japan, Buddhism, immortals, Japanese mythological gods, demons, and the emperor's forces are all written out in one go. The protagonist also practices training. The protagonist initially practices Onmyoji, swordsmanship, the Japanese god system, and later even Taoism. They practiced together with the Buddhists. They also practiced the Four Saints of Blue Dragon and White Tiger. The Buddhists also practiced the golden body. I had some insights and made a main god space. I looked stupid. The training was a mess. Except for the basic protagonists in the West, all of them have been cultivated. Wouldn't the author take a look at the reincarnation paradise? There are many other systems, but other people's protagonists just practice swordsmanship and stack passive systems, which is very comfortable to watch. The characters are also like you, who can freeze time and space at every turn, and big gods can change time and space. It's confusing to see. Changing time and space is not easy to write. You can be good at the beginning, and the gods can do it. I beg you to see how the Lord of Mysteries writes about time and space in the later period. Written by the author; power is in chaos, system is in chaos, and ability is in chaos. Anyone who accepts a few points can read on.

Author, I don't like to see how the supporting actor pretends to be awesome, I don't like to see how the supporting actor becomes invincible, and I don't like to see how the supporting actor takes Bai Fumei into his harem. Please consider it

Which one has been finished? Let me remind you, this guy is like a dead eunuch and a bad ass. Every book is bad and there is no reason at all. If you want to subscribe, I suggest you wait and see.

I liked it a lot before, but the more I write about it, the more I get stuck. There are so many messy systems and directions. Are you just not good at writing honestly? Why are you so big-hearted? Do you have the writing skills?

When everyone clicks on the title of the book, they want to see you draw cards quickly to upgrade, not to see your crotch extension design.

After reading a hundred chapters, what the hell is this? Forget about being forced to cooperate at the beginning. After all, your life is in other people's hands. What happened in the 13th lesson later? I was caught by this and that. There is obviously no shortage of ways to move forward. Why do you have to do all these useless things? Are you tired of it? Isn't it good to improve yourself honestly? There are a lot of skills on your body that you can't practice anymore. You can't survive in this place. It won't affect you if you change places. Those organizations won't make a big fuss about a small person.

This book is really a pity. The author's writing style is really good. Unfortunately, there are some problems with the idea of ​​writing the book. Many people complained that the system is chaotic. In fact, the power system is not chaotic. Looking at it along the way, in fact, each system has explanations and intersperses. However, this description actually has a problem, which will cause readers to feel disconnected from reading. In the first month of practicing in the virtual realm, the protagonist only needs to practice sword skills and body training. As a result, the author arranged for the protagonist to practice sword skills and Shinto Onmyoji shikigami for a month. The protagonist made some progress in sword skills yesterday, which made the readers feel itchy. They were preparing to see how the protagonist showed himself to others, but today the protagonist went to practice Shinto. . . It's really neither good nor bad. To use the right words, it's useless. . . If you have a good temper and patience, you can continue reading, but even if you continue reading, the reader's stickiness will not be high, and you will turn around and forget about it. There is actually another problem with writing the power system like this, which is a serious delay in promoting the plot. At the beginning of the book, I entered the virtual realm for a month, and this virtual realm is just an initial inheritance. The Black Iron Star is a place where it can be invincible. As a result, the author wrote a hundred chapters, interspersed with a lot of card drawing content and power system. The Black Iron Star left the virtual realm and sighed: He seems to be really strong... There is no need to be so procrastinating. , The opening introduces the situation, background, short-term goal of ten chapters, five or ten chapters of practicing sword skills and physical training a month before entering, practicing to the peak of one-star black iron, killing a wave of mobs to get a reward for breaking through two stars, opening a small hang-up second boost to get a reward of two-star peak, and leaving the virtual realm. The virtual realm can have a total of fifteen chapters, at most thirty-five to forty. The first small master is over, and the reader can be firmly attracted, and then slowly interpret the world view. During this process, in fact, apart from the sword skills and the body skills, the only trick in the protagonist's draws was the unconscious killing of Zenitsu Zenitsu, who required the Thunder Breathing Technique.

The protagonist's soul-cutting sword ability is too rubbish. First of all, the protagonist specializes in kendo, but since the pig's foot skill is a weapon that projects other worlds, unless the weapons from other worlds match the protagonist's kendo abilities, the protagonist will have to abandon his kendo and use the abilities of weapons from other worlds. I suggest that the author change the protagonist's soul-cutting sword's ability.

On a rainy night, hundreds of ghosts wander around at night, and some people sneak in and enjoy it; on a sunny day, when the streets are deserted, some ghosts sneak into them, and they are at a loss what to do. Yin and Yang are divided into two paths. Humans and ghosts end up in different paths. Humans know that ghosts are scary, and ghosts know that people's hearts are poisonous. People are 30% afraid of ghosts, and 70% of ghosts are afraid of people. The deep sea will eventually have a bottom, and the human heart cannot be touched within five inches

Is it true that everyone who has good grades at the beginning will like to ghostwrite later? After you put it on the shelves, each chapter got worse and worse, judging from the level of writing. What did you write? There is no kernel left at all. Draw a lottery, pretend to be a slap in the face, and continue to draw. What you wrote later is obviously a sign of co-operation, not wanting you to get better grades, and deliberately maintaining a good writing standard. I have been making nonsense, going up and down, beating around the bush, and talking nonsense. It's a very common article about upgrading the system with pretentiousness and slap in the face. What does this imply? It is also the heavens, gods, Buddhism, Taoism and Confucianism. Now the Lord God has come too. There is so much nonsense about cultivation, what do you mean by your cultivation? Others write like this after they have written more than 1,000 chapters, but you do it like this after two or three hundred chapters, is there anything wrong with you? If you write 700 pieces and can't write 800 pieces, I won't say anything if you write like this. Is the talent exhausted in the first two or three hundred cards? I don't think so. I think you are telling me that there is no one left. These people will not wish you well, and it won't matter how much money you give. Anyway, you have money, so come as you wish.