Love in a Mental Hospital

I started reading Crow's books from Lianyou. I was really shocked when I saw it. The dazzling characters of the three protagonists, the silky reading experience, the exciting and unique writing style, the anime-like plot design and the slight but just right astringency all danced crazily on my reading xp, so much so that Crow used Lianyou to be directly promoted to my T0 level author. He is the only author who can let me pay attention to whether there are new works. It can be said that he has put on a thick fan filter. To be fair, Lianyou actually has some problems, big and small, both inside and outside the book. However, readers are probably always kind-hearted. As long as you write well, no matter what problems you have, they will spontaneously help you solve them and even provide you with self-brain correction settings for loopholes in the text (don't laugh, that's just the way I am). Therefore, the completion of the final stage of Love Game may seem unsatisfactory to some people, but I only feel regretful and satisfied. The story of Toru Watanabe and the three of them is finished, but I can no longer glimpse this happiness and feel melancholy. So much so that I have completely rewatched Love Game more than ten times, and the number of times I have just clicked on a chapter of Love Game and started reading are countless times, haha. Love Travel is really a good work. It is good because it has raised my threshold, but it is cruel to never be able to have this happy reading experience again. Every time I think about this, I can only sigh. Shortly after the love game ended, Crow opened a new pit for the witch. "Tokyo", "Everyday Life", "One Man and Two Women", all the elements make me excited. Is Yasang going to continue this glory? ! Wait, why is there an extra "battle"? Oh~ It turns out that Crow wants to challenge himself. As a fan who wears thick filters, of course he supports it. After all, it is really commendable that the main recommended author is so motivated. And this thought at the time... Sigh. Let's talk about the results directly (the following is purely my subjective opinion, sorry if it offends) - the witch is really terrible, just like you thought that what the chef served was a cream cake. After you licked the delicious cream on the surface, the cake part became more and more strange. Finally, you found out that it was a sponge disguised and mixed with hair and cockroach legs. It was disgusting. Sorry, I seem to be an extreme reader haha. There are too many problems with Miko, including the reproduction (or copying) of the protagonist's character from the previous game, poor description of battle scenes, childish plot design, casually placed emotional lines, the heavyweight unfinished ending, and the declaration of "Although I don't think it is unfinished, but since you said it is, then so be it". In fact, it's not that I can't understand copying the characters. After all, the previous work is so successful that there is inevitably some path dependence. Readers are not forcing you to introduce new things. As long as you write well and give readers a good reading experience, there will be a lot of people who are willing to buy tickets. The author of Qidian is resting on his laurels (especially in the fantasy area, haha). As for the description of the battle scenes, readers have actually given them full tolerance. Most of the chapters and comment sections are filled with encouragement and ridicule, and there are very few sharp criticisms and accusations. Although the crow's battle scene cannot be said to have stopped at the end of the book, it can also be said to have made no progress at all (laughs). If the above two points are still within the reader's tolerance range, then the plot and emotional line are so bad that it can be said that there is no cure. Here I have also forgotten the shortcomings of the plot and setting of the miko. After all, I have not replayed it once in two years. I will only mention that it is still a bit impressive. The unfinished part - the male protagonist Minamoto Kiyoshi went crazy and ended up overturning. It was one of the female protagonists who wiped his ass, which directly turned the "arrogant", "genius" and "omnipotent" protagonist throughout the entire work into a complete clown who relied on women until the end. As for the emotional line, I would forget that this book has five female protagonists if I don't go back and read it! ? There is also a pair of sisters! ? Ah? ! It can be said that the witch made me disenchanted with crows, so that I heard that the future Lord of the Black Mist was another fantasy and did not read a chapter. No evaluation here. Finally, it's time to "Love in a Mental Hospital". (I've been talking about it for so long and finally got to the point) Let me just talk about my feelings in detail. The bad thing is that this book gave me a similar feeling to Miko. What makes it better than Miko is that the world view is not that big, the setting is a bit problematic but not intolerable, and the book is not finished yet and I don't know how it will land in the end. Therefore, the protagonist Gu Ran gave me a feeling that is a bit ugly but not ugly. It is better than Minamoto Kiyoshi, but far worse than Toru Watanabe. Let me talk about the shortcomings that I think: 1. For the separation of the protagonist's background, you might as well write it as if both parents have died, and design it as a foster home, so that his mother-like admiration for Zhuang Jing is more logical, and the settings of the four spiritual hells are more convincing. Now... Except for mentioning it at the beginning on the way to Jinghai to share the experience with the family, I think it is because of your "no outline, just slap on the head every day" method? (Small question) 2. Is there too many female protagonists? Although the heroine team still has some traces of love games, there are not many of them anymore (such as the setting of two main palaces and multiple "concubines", and also such as the main palace with one white and one black, "good women and bad women", etc., Of course this is a personal opinion). Can Crow's writing skills make so many female protagonists stand out? I take a pessimistic view. Not to mention the weak character design of Su Qing in the early stage of the emotional line, which is not as good as Qingyan's brilliance. Ke Ke's role... Is vague and non-existent, and JK's role is even more feather-level, although it seems that it will be strengthened in the near future. But in general, none of the female protagonists can attract me. The most eye-catching female character is the nefarious mother-in-law Xiangxiang🤣. (Big problem) 3. The part involving fantasy (dream) is as hazy as ever. I'm afraid Crow himself doesn't have a complete and rigorous setting. He often writes whatever comes to mind. This problem becomes more serious as it goes on. I often feel like I've read a chapter but what exactly have I read. (Big question) 4. Can you, I mean, can you stop linking with the King of Black Mist? Do you think your writing is very good? Why don't you use it to commemorate it? People use the sect's heritage to link subscriptions and monthly tickets. When you pull this thing out, I just feel confused and want to laugh. What is your heritage? Don't you have any idea? (Small question) 5What the hell is Liang Qing? I haven't figured it out yet. (Big question) 6 When Gu Ran kissed Zhuang Jing during the voyeurism period, didn't you feel that it was separated from the previous plot? Gu Ran admired Zhuang Jing so much, why did he suddenly kiss her? And why did Zhuang Jing ask Gu Ran to receive the reward in the dream? Is it what I think? But is the emotional foreshadowing enough for Zhuang Jing to make such a move? I still found it baffling when I read it. (Big Problem) There are other problems that I won't list one by one. In summary, this book can be tentatively evaluated as a mid-term open and a continued downturn. Also, if you can't write emotional dramas well, please come up with more dramas like Bei Cheng Meng. Although it relies on a sinister tone, maybe this is what readers like to watch (laughs). In the end, I will insist on fully ordering and witnessing the ending of this book, and I will still read the next book of Crow and the next one, but I may not necessarily follow it as I do now (Lianyou, you are so powerful). Finally, I wish Crow a great success in his writing.

Let's talk about the overall impression first. Not to mention Love Game, I feel that even Miko can't compare to it (personal evaluation). Romance and fantasy elements are completely mixed together, the daily writing is sparse, and the settings before and after are not consistent. The settings I just wrote are forgotten when I turn around (Story Club, Little Women...) It feels very confusing, which affects the viewing experience. . Disadvantages (personal feeling): 1. The relationship between Gu Ran and Zhuang Jing. The relationship between the two is already a "morbid" relationship. In the early days, it could be seen as gratitude and communication between people, but now it is simply a cross-species dialogue. To put it more concretely, it is a "parasite" (ask who has this kind of relationship with the benefactor). Gu Ran is completely an accessory of Zhuang Jing, like a thoughtless puppet. All actions come from Zhuang Jing's instructions (of course Gu Ran doesn't think so, he only thinks it is an "oracle"). Even the love for Su Qing seems to be the impure part transferred from Zhuang Jing (after all, Zhuang Jing is a "goddess" who cannot be desecrated). She obviously didn't dare to hide it from Zhuang Jing, so she even told the truth about her dreams with Chen Ke and He Qingyan, and she didn't mention the ambiguity with Yan Hanxiang at all. If Su Qing leaves one day, Gu Ran may be sad, but he still has Zhuang Jing (perhaps Zhuang Jing will even enlighten him to open a harem happily). But Zhuang Jing left, and Gu Ran would go crazy sooner or later. Perhaps the relationship between the two is also related to Gu Ran's psychological shadow. Because of excessive mental pressure, he became increasingly dependent on Zhuang Jing. Moreover, Gu Ran also referred to "Protagonist Therapy", but his thoughts lacked independence. There may be a conflict between the two, and he became more and more crazy day by day. The most important thing is that Zhuang Jing himself is not normal (personal opinion), his marriage is unhappy, and he has a crazy pursuit of the spiritual world. Therefore, his interpretation of Gu Ran can hardly be said to be purely for his own good or mixed with the induction of spiritual ability growth. If things go on like this, Gu Ran's situation will only get worse. Perhaps the highlight of the later plot is that Gu Ran becomes ill (guess), and then the harem group is treated together, and Zhuang Jing's obsession is also resolved. Then Gu Ran regains his personality independence, no longer relies on anyone, and has his own responsibilities (everyone is happy👏🏻). 2The relationship between Gu Ran and Su Qing. The way these two get along is also very strange. They dump each other's burdens, and after the dumping, they still struggle for a long time (whether she is angry, will she leave...), And it feels like they don't understand each other at all. Su Qing didn't understand Gu Ran's suffering, and Gu Ran didn't understand Su Qing's thoughts. Then the relationship becomes stagnant and stretched, and all the readers see is a mess. Perhaps Su Qing's early descriptions are not rich enough, so it is difficult for readers to guess her thoughts. All her expressions come from Gu Ran's eyes, and this is what readers see: extremely arrogant (not arrogant, but not coquettish), entangled, and lack of opinion (blaming everything on Gu Ran). There is a sense of pretentiousness. At the same time, her reaction also caused Gu Ran's conflict (harem and pure love), and then a long chapter passed... I thought Wu Wu might consider taking a leave and writing a few extra stories for Su Qing and Gu Ran to explain their thoughts from their respective perspectives (and also explain the background of Gu Ran and Su Qing's acquaintance...), Which would also enrich the character and make Su Qing's character fuller and less pretentious. It also makes Gu Ran's "Ideological Seal" (with Su Qing) more reasonable. And you can also think carefully about how to write the follow-up, stroke the outline, recall the character, think about the priority of the fantasy line and the love line... 3 Gu Ran's relationship with other female protagonists. Let's talk about Yan Hanxiang first. Has the author ever thought about the future ending of Gu Ran and her? Unlike Zhuang Jing, Yan's husband has not died and has not been divorced. Now that she is ambiguous with Gu Ran, what will she do in the future? Between these two people, one of them must make up his mind and either act decisively or withdraw. Otherwise, Gu Ran's willpower as described in the book will be over sooner or later. Then there are the other female protagonists. I feel that their offensive is a bit too gentle. It feels like they are giving way to Gu Ran and Su Qing. The attack is all oral pleasure, and the progress is all based on dreams, which is not enough at all. I personally think that Shura Field is what readers want to see! If it is just because Gu Ran is dating Su Qing, this reason may not be sufficient (after all, she has some mental problems, Su Qing is the most ordinary). Maybe she should not be so honest in secret even though she is not robbing her openly. ·Alas, has the Crow's peak period finally passed? This book had a good start, but ended up like this. I hope to work harder in the later stage, at least it will land smoothly.

It's an extremely ugly and bad ending. It really doesn't look like it was written by someone who can write about Love Travel. With so many books, there is only one Love Travel, and that's it.

Crow, this is my first time.

Why do I feel that the writing style of this book is not as good as the previous ones? I feel that this book is the pinnacle of Wuya compared to the previous ones.

Overall good. Personally, I would rate it a nine out of ten. It has many advantages, such as smooth writing, clear logic, and vivid characterization, so I won't go into details. What needs to be expanded on in detail is the shortcomings part. First of all, the male protagonist Gu Ran is considered to be a dog-licker by many comments. I am opposed to most of the dog-licker comments. Gu Ran's licking was mainly for Zhuang Jing and Su Qing. As for Zhuang Jing's licking, I think there is no problem at all. Just providing support when you can't afford to study is a gift of renewal. Not to mention continuing to exchange letters for life guidance. Even when Gu Ran was a child, Zhuang Jing would put a green light on the way to school because he was afraid of darkness. To Gu Ran, Zhuang Jing was his God. With so much kindness, Gu Ran should not hesitate even if he asked Gu Ran to die for him, not to mention that Zhuang Jing still provided guidance and accommodation to Gu after seeing him. For Amelia Su, it was indeed a bit too licking. Su Qing is a classical tsundere. Modern tsunderes are mainly coquettish, but she is far more arrogant than coquettish. At first, when I saw Gu Ran saying that he was willing to give up other heroines for Su Qing, I thought it was because something unforgettable happened between them when they were children, but it turned out that they just fell in love at first sight when they were children. What begins with appearance will also end with appearance. So when He Qingyan and Chen Ke, who are as beautiful as Su Qing, confessed to Gu Ran, I didn't understand why they refused: they are both equally beautiful, and they have just been together for a short time. One side is a tsundere who doesn't respond to you no matter how hard you lick her, and the other side is a passionate beauty who takes the initiative to pursue you. There should be no need to say which is the normal candidate. But Gu Ran just licked Su Qing and refused to let go. He really didn't understand where his feelings for Su Qing came from.

Day! I haven't watched the college entrance examination since June 2024, and it's now February 20, 2025. It ended after half a year without watching it. The beginning of this book really attracted me, and reading it every day gave me a sense of daily life. This book is over, and so is my high school. Looking forward to Crow's next book being better written, now look at the end of this book

More updates! More updates. I'm really looking forward to the following plot, please Crow-san show it quickly.

Good. The plot has not unfolded yet, so look forward to it. (

When will the extras for Book Friends be released?

Recommended and praised

Keep it up, give me your monthly ticket to extend your life, don't let it go unfinished

First of all, let me talk about my personal reasons for abandoning the book: I like the protagonist in the Crow book very much. Until I abandoned the book, I had tolerance and goodwill towards the character creation of Gu Ran and Su Qing. Until the actress Liang Qing appears, it's okay for you to have multiple female protagonists in your harem. I really like to watch it, but why do you want an "actress" who appeared from nowhere and only appeared twice to have a relationship with Gu Ran under the persona of Gu Ran who "says he loves Su Qing the most every day"? You made Gu Ran a duck, and you made Su Qing a clown. My feeling is that this plot trampled Su Qing's reserve, Zhuang Jing's restraint, and Gu Ran's self-improvement and self-esteem to pieces, and destroyed the character's dignity to nothing. From the perspective of a male reader, I can understand "I want to bring happiness to every girl around me who likes me, so I opened a harem." When you wrote "Gu Ran said every day that he only likes Su Qing, but in his heart he wants it all," I would only joke and mock the male protagonist. But what you wrote is that several female protagonists are fighting wits and courage to share the love of the male protagonist, and then a supporting character who has no feelings for the male protagonist and just wants to borrow money comes out and plays with the male protagonist? ? ! You also wrote Su Qing as a clown: Gu Ran said he was devoted to her every day before, and then Aunt Xiang, Chen Ke, the actress... Now you apologize to the readers and say, "I am a person who likes characters very much, especially the male and female protagonists"? ! Gu Ran: I have become a duck that can be ridden casually. Thank you so much! Su Qing: I have become the clown who suffers, thank you so much! I rarely abandon a book that I have ordered to Deacon, and so far I have only two books: the first is called "The King of Black Mist", and the second is called "Love in a Mental Hospital" The two consecutive books completely shattered my filter on you because of "Love Travel". . .

The success of Lianyou is only 20% because of Crow's talent, and 80% of it is the result of copying the plots of various dramas and modifying them. It cannot be said that Crow is great, but the editors and authors of various dramas are great. Crow just spliced ​​the famous scenes, characters, and plots of all the dramas together to create Lianyou. Our expectations for Crow are indeed too high, and he can't write his own plot at all.

The shaping of the male protagonist in this book is really good. Like Watanabe's book, there are baseball games, musical performance competitions, staged goals, self-discipline, hard work and struggle, and the vision of becoming a handsome guy in Tokyo. However, the male protagonist in this book feels like he is reincarnated. He goes to work every day and fishes, and his biggest pursuit is to marry Su Qing? There is no drama between men and women, and there are still a group of girls who are cheating, as if they have been poisoned, and would rather be mistresses... Is this the benefit of being handsome?

Le, I browsed around the comment area, why are there so many deacons scolding me?

Drama therapy Drama therapy uses drama and film processes to achieve the therapeutic goals of symptom reduction, emotional physiological integration and personal growth. Role play, dramatic games, mock comedy, puppet theater and other improvisational performance techniques can be used. Psychiatrist Moreno proposed psychodrama therapy in 1921 and pointed out in 1959: The goal of psychodrama is to induce the patient's spontaneous behavior in order to directly observe his condition. Psychodrama therapy, also called stage therapy and performance therapy, is a kind of drama that allows patients to vent their emotions and achieve therapeutic effects. By playing a certain role, patients can experience the character's emotions and thoughts, thereby changing their previous behavioral habits. Natural Therapy Natural therapy is a scientific art that uses substances and methods that are directly related to human life, such as food, air, water, sunlight, gymnastics, sleep, rest, and spiritual factors that are beneficial to health, such as hope and faith, to maintain and restore health. Western alternative medicine that originated in the 18th and 19th centuries. The term naturopathy did not come into use until the late 19th century. But its philosophical guiding ideology can be traced back to the Hippocratic school of medicine in 400 BC. Believe deeply in the body's self-healing ability, and try to avoid using any medical methods that weaken the body's self-healing ability during the medical treatment process. You cannot ignore the body's self-healing ability, let alone use various therapies to replace it. Educate patients to adopt a healthy lifestyle, enhance the body's self-healing ability, and apply natural and non-toxic therapies. Hypnotherapy Hypnotherapy generally refers to hypnotherapy, which is the application of hypnosis in clinical work and is one of many psychological treatment methods. Psychiatrists who master hypnotherapy can cure many difficult-to-treat diseases and disorders without drugs, including psychological disorders such as anxiety, depression, fear, obsessive-compulsive disorder, hysteria, and other physical disorders such as sleep disorders, eating disorders, sexual dysfunction, hypertension, diabetes, obesity, chronic fatigue syndrome, and behavioral disorders such as aversion to learning, impulsivity, stuttering, various addictive behaviors, bad habits, etc. Hypnosis is an ancient concept that is still used today because there is no better word to replace it. Hypnosis in a broad sense refers to all cultural phenomena related to hypnosis in human activities, including witchcraft, qigong, yoga, Zen, meditation, religion, special functions of the human body, various mysterious phenomena, etc. Hypnosis in the narrow sense refers to the entire process of hypnosis. Being hypnotized and self-hypnotizing are both instincts of living things. Living things can avoid danger, protect themselves, maintain health, and extend their lives through hypnosis. Hypnosis is a special method used by hypnotists, whereby the hypnotized person can enter and remain in a hypnotic state, and achieve preset goals, such as treating diseases, communicating emotions, deciphering secrets, performing stunts, developing potential, etc. Hypnosis refers to a special state of consciousness that the hypnotized person enters during hypnosis. In this state, the hypnotized person's suggestibility is significantly improved, he can maintain a close induction relationship with the hypnotist, and he will accept his suggestive instructions uncritically; the hypnotist can systematically regulate the hypnotized person's feeling threshold and tolerance threshold, so that he can display incredible functions in the waking state. Heart Drawing Therapy Painting therapy is one of the methods of mental health counseling and treatment. In the process of painting, the painter uses painting tools to present the suppressed feelings and conflicts in the subconscious. At the same time, in the process of painting, the painter will release negative energy mentally, emotionally, and mentally, decompress, vent emotions, adjust emotions and mentality, repair spiritual trauma, fill the gaps in the inner world, and gain a sense of satisfaction, accomplishment, and self-confidence, thereby achieving good results in diagnosis and treatment. There is no age limit for painting therapy. Adults or children can obtain any good psychological needs through painting therapy. The art of painting is a mysterious but magical language. Through painting, psychological counselors can interpret the spiritual codes of the interviewees and analyze the "cruxes" that deeply trouble people, so as to solve the problems and allow the interviewees to get help and relief within a certain period of time. This is one of the methods of mental health recovery. Iceberg Therapy Iceberg Theory: It is an important theory in Satir family therapy. It is actually a metaphor. It means that a person's "self" is like an iceberg. What we can see is only a small part of the surface - behavior, while a larger part of the inner world is hidden deeper and invisible to others, just like an iceberg. It includes seven levels: behavior, coping style, feelings, opinions, expectations, desires, and self. Virginia Satir is the name of a woman who is the most influential chief psychotherapist in the United States. It also represents a growth model named after Virginia Satir. According to Satir's theory, a person is inextricably linked to his family of origin, and this link may affect his life. Satir used a very vivid metaphor: It is like a huge iceberg floating on the water. Only a small part of the behavior or coping methods that can be seen by the outside world is exposed on the water. Only about one-eighth is exposed above the water, and the other seven-eighths are hidden under the water. The larger mountains under the water are the "inside" that has been suppressed for a long time and ignored by us. Uncovering the secrets of the iceberg, we will see the desires, expectations, opinions and feelings in life, and see the true self.

What on earth is Crow writing? It's over 400,000 words, what's the main line? Is it really just a matter of treating patients one by one? The emotional writing is also a mess, the progress is ridiculously slow, and the protagonist's perception is also very poor. He is completely Zhuang Jing's lapdog.

The ten regular attendants of online articles should be gathered soon, right? I think there are three that can be included in everyday essays: first love is as bright as a summer flower, a firefly in the space of feet, and a passing crow. Any other great eunuchs you can add?

I recommend a novel to you. Go and learn the beginning of it. I loaded up the love game and now renamed it My Girlfriend is the Bad Miss. The author is The Flying Crow. This ends the clever chat. Isn't what you wrote last time you opened a trumpet long enough to remember? The readers didn't buy it at all. They went to the big account to ask old book friends for support before passing the recommendation on PK. I read three chapters of this work. To be honest, if you are not a crow, I have no desire to continue reading. The three golden chapters are indeed one-sided, but they can always explain some problems, right? Attract me first before talking about anything else! Even if those masters who are qualified to try and make mistakes willfully write a book about what they like, or practice and make mistakes, or seek breakthroughs and find other directions, it is gratifying to succeed, but once the readers don't like it, won't they still come back to write what they are good at in the next book? You have two books in a row! We are just asking, can we write a Japanese novel first to satisfy the readers? You can also spend more money and work hard to make a big appointment. Whether you write what you want to write in the next book or seek breakthroughs, I will definitely not say too much about the results. If you write well, I will applaud and spend money. If you write poorly, I can also have a tolerant attitude. The extra chapter of the love game update, to be honest, it really makes me feel bad, I give it a thumbs up. I praise you for being the crow-san, Sbarasi! Then I was extremely looking forward to the new work, but I opened it with joy, but was disappointed at first glance. I hope I am wrong. I hope this book is indeed a slow-burning book. I hope it will become more and more exciting in the future. I will keep it for now.

It's quite outrageous. It can be seen that the author has tried his best to avoid the surprise brought by Chen Ke's boyfriend, but I didn't understand the part about the boyfriend breaking up and chasing after her. The first is the way the heroine went to college. In order not to owe a favor, she bought breakfast and watched a movie. The easiest way is to just exchange it for money and return it. The logic is a bit far-fetched. Also, how could heroine Chen, as a psychiatrist, choose the most misunderstood way to return this favor? The image is torn. It can only be said that the author in order to maintain the positive image of the heroine has torn the image of her previously portrayed. The second thing is the way the male protagonist dealt with this boyfriend. To be honest, it was a bit frustrating. The male protagonist was already paying attention to keeping a distance, but in the end he still got angry. To be honest, if the male protagonist really fell in love with him, the readers of this plot would definitely feel happy. Does this make readers happy? There may be a follow-up later, and it better be, otherwise the male protagonist will be pointed at the nose and scolded by people on the road for no apparent reason, and he will have to laugh in apology.

I was completely sprayed at that time

If the introduction of Lord of the Black Mist has zero effect, this introduction has side effects.

I agree to be boyfriend and girlfriend ≠ I like him 😜 I accept gifts ≠ I agree 😁

To be honest, I don't see the point of the author writing about Chen Ke's boyfriend. Up to now, it seems that even if this character is deleted, Chen Ke's frigidity can still be used to explain a series of awkward interactions with the male protagonist in the early stage, which will lead to the male protagonist later using psychodrama therapy to treat Chen Ke, making it reasonable for Chen Ke to become an emotional line. After all, there are conflicts and interactions. However, the boyfriend has almost left the scene since his appearance (doubtful, he may still have a role). Apart from being disgusting, he seems to have no idea what the role is. The male protagonist has not grown because of it, nor has it promoted the progress of any emotional line. If you say this is the author playing a big game, just pretend I didn't say it🙂🙂🙂

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A friend's Amway

The male protagonist is both serious and upright, and his dog-licking nature is the purest among the novels I have ever read.

This book can be regarded as Crow's pinnacle work in terms of writing style, material selection, and story arrangement. The writing style surpasses the slightly immature "Seiyuu" and "Love Travel". The theme of "Dream" is also a good blend of reality and fantasy, which can greatly enrich the diversity of the plot and promote emotions, far more than "Black Mist" and "Miko". The early and middle stages of the plot are very good. Why is the reputation so bad? First, most readers read too fast, and many carefully arranged words and sentences affect reading and have a counterproductive effect. The second is that many light novel readers don't like this genre. Third, the portrayal of the heroine was slightly inadequate. Later, it appeared that her character was too weak and her image was flat. Fourth, it is a standard mess. In addition, the author's use of metaphors has reached the point of terminal illness, but the flaws do not hide the flaws.

I feel that the author treats the protagonist as a dog too much. Whether it is the heroine or Zhuang Jing, love and respect are one thing, and being a dog is another. The two are not directly connected, because in several descriptions, it is said that the protagonist subconsciously thinks that he is their dog. This cannot be said to be funny. In general, it is better to talk about Lianyou, not about the characters, but about the performance of the writing.