The Mysterious Ruler

The biggest failure of this book is that the author chose the Divine Comedy as the core original text for the protagonist in the early stage. The translation of the Divine Comedy is not easy for Chinese people to read, not to mention the mysterious deconstruction of the novel. In the end, the author's deconstructive explanation of the characteristics of the original text through the description of the protagonist's ability to use the Divine Comedy became very vague and obscure. To be honest, it is better to set the early core original text for the protagonist to be a hundred thousand whys.

I feel that these original canons are really wasted by the protagonist. Other organizations have played with the original canons and wish they could divide them into chapters and sentences, but the protagonist is still using the original canons to release fireballs.

Hello everyone, this is the author himself who is not very good at writing novels~~ If you have any comments, you can leave them here! I definitely won't listen anyway

It's a pity to throw away food if it's tasteless. I don't know if it's because the world view has not been fully developed. After reading more than 90 chapters, it was just mediocre, with no excitement or climax. After reading dozens of chapters, it was such a wonderful and mysterious world, and the protagonist had such a powerful "golden finger" (as a time traveler, he has the understanding of the original scriptures and the ability to read the original scriptures and the knowledge beyond ordinary people). However, the protagonist seemed to me to be a person without a spirit of exploration and curiosity. As I become stronger, I am always passively involved in events. The original scripture is very powerful and mysterious, but I didn't see the protagonist exploring, understanding and developing the original scripture that I got. It seems that getting an original scripture is just a few skills learned in the game, and the explanation of the original scripture in my hand is finished with a few comments. It doesn't make people see how powerful and mysterious it is. It gives people the feeling that the protagonist is using a machine gun as a mallet... The book is a good book and has the potential to become a god. However, it feels too bland and fails to grab readers. It makes me want to skip chapters while reading it. It does not affect reading. I hope the author will write more wonderfully and write better... 1000 reward, small support, see you again in the future.        ，， Also, I would like to ask book friends to recommend supernatural, mysterious and horror novels, thank you...

It's a big curse for the protagonist to give up the original text that is readily available every time. It's understandable if he doesn't take the initiative to search for it, but it's really disgusting if he doesn't take it when he has it at hand.

Pig's feet lack initiative. I really don't know what the pig's feet want. The readers are brought into the perspective of Pig's Feet. If Pig's Feet has no initiative and just follows the crowd, the readers will also feel that there is no main line. I saw chapter 500. Tell me how I feel. 1. The first is that there is no clear main line. I can't help but wonder, what on earth do pig's feet want to do? What do you want? As soon as Pigfoot traveled through time, he learned that this world had superpowers, and strange phenomena appeared in his town. He was afraid and ran away. It is said that pig's feet should be insecure, which is when they crave power. But when Pigfoot went after the Divine Comedy trilogy, he only wanted to complete it, not pursue power, because later when he clearly killed the owner of The Theory of Welfare, he didn't take it, and let the people from the Investigation Bureau take it, but he didn't want it. 2. Because pig's feet have no thoughts of their own, the development of the plot is driven by events. When there is nothing going on, Pig's Feet is fishing. When there is trouble, others come to Pig's Feet to participate or are forced to join. So what's the point of the author writing this story? 3. The author likes to omit plot. There are some plots, all arrived. The result is skipped directly, and the result is given directly in the middle of the next chapter. If you do this, sometimes you can't connect to the above, and you think you've skipped a chapter, and the only fun part is gone. (Although the author of this book marked it as a non-refreshing article, your general direction was already not a great read, but you eliminated the only interesting points. I want to ask the author, did you do it on purpose? Because your introduction marked it as a non-enjoyable article, you wanted to eliminate the remaining enjoyable points.) 4. It is still a problem, the main line, the main line, and the tm is the main line. This extraordinary system set up by the author is very interesting, which is why I was attracted to read it. But the upgrade path for this extraordinary system is unclear. What is the strength of a grimoire owner? Why don't non-grime casters go to grimoire owners. Is it because the owner of the grimoire can fully unleash the power of the grimoire's spells, while non- grimoire owners can only borrow them? Then why can Nicole use the power of the magic book owner's spell? Nicole's genius, where is the genius? Why can she do it? There are so many old pedantic researchers, but none of them are as good as Nicole? The Lord of Mysteries has a potion system that goes up step by step from 9 to 0. The reader has a goal. So what is the goal of your system, pig's feet? Just collecting grimoires? Then why didn't you take The Rich Country? If it focuses on spiritual music, then I haven't seen Pigfoot carefully studying the use of divine music? Every time I have a flash of inspiration during battle, I think of other ways to use it. Or is it that the author has omitted the process of thinking about and using the Divine Comedy? The author wants to create a super-powered system where logical thinking is greater than academic research. That is to say, no matter how much you study a superpower, it will not be as powerful as a logical genius who has a flash of inspiration. This book makes me feel bored. The more I look, the less I know the direction. I don't know what to do with pig's feet.

The protagonist seems to be drifting with the crowd and being led by various people.

Why do you give me the feeling that the subject matter is very good, but the author is not skilled enough and can't express it well?

It is better to feel first about yourself

Same as above, the book is a good book, the creativity is very good, the power system is thoughtful, and the early writing is also good. But it fell apart in the later stages, especially when there were too many female supporting characters. One would appear every once in a while, and the female supporting characters kept leading the show, making the plot drag on.