This Cheat Is Way Too Chuunibyou

I have read the novel for many years and rarely comment on it. Today I had the urge to complain. I also think it would be a pity for this book to continue to be like this. First, the problem of protagonist creation: Looking at it now, I really think that the protagonist is very poorly portrayed. After reading so many pictures, I have not analyzed the protagonist's character from the author's description. Is he kind? Or evil? Advocate strength? Or do you admire wisdom? A generous person? Or a stingy person? I can't tell. Second, the protagonist's purpose: What is his purpose? Or what is the main line of this novel? I now feel that the author writes whatever comes to mind, without any purpose at all. I suspect that you have changed your outline too many times and your ideas have been completely disrupted. Third, the problem with the combat power system: The author's setting at the beginning is that this is a battle flag game. The combat power of a single player is important, and the most important thing is the strength of the army under his command. Here's the problem. Until now, I haven't seen how much effort you put into describing the troops under your command and the battles between the troops. Instead, you focus on describing the protagonist's personal combat effectiveness, and you also spend a lot of time describing 1V1 battle scenes. Fourth, the issue of the protagonist's strength: He is still at level 2, but your level 2 can kill level 5! ! ! ! This combat power system is broken! Don't make any other excuses, it's just broken! You can find an excuse to kill level 5 at level 2, but don't you want to kill demigods at level 5? Doesn't level 8 require killing gods? It is necessary for the protagonist to fight across levels, but you are too outrageous! ! There is also the issue of the protagonist's sub-professions. Take a look for yourself. There are only so many sub-professions at level 2. How many more sub-professions do you need to add at level 3? Where is level 4? Have you ever thought, is this outrageous? Fifth, the setting problem is that the seven deadly sins create seven principalities, and the nobles of each principality have different personalities. The problem is that I don't see any use in your setting at all. This setting is good, but the author has written the setting and didn't spend any words to use this setting. Isn't it a waste? There is also the setting of family training. If you set it but don't use it, you will lose it twice. It is really a waste. So much for fishing during working hours. If the author sees it, I hope it can give you some inspiration. I don't mean any harm, I just don't want such a beautiful novel to be scrapped.

As of the final chapter, there is no new data in the legion panel, please scroll forward. Some pictures failed to upload, I sent them downstairs

It's a very bad book. The worldview tries to be big but the actual writing is very empty. I want to add various details but in the end they are just details. The plot is depressing. The protagonist group is always weak and grows slowly. It is always against the wind and relies on forced coincidences to create suffering. Difficult, and relying on more coincidences + deus ex machina to get through the difficulties, which shows that the author's writing style is really bad; he often creates misunderstandings like Qiong Yao dramas, the male and female protagonists are all YY monsters, and when others are talking, he is thinking in a long way and ignoring the key content. The inner thoughts of the quantitative cycle are meaningless, as empty as the number of words; the male protagonist is set to be a big boss in time travel + system, but the result is actually a gangster + taking one step at a time + being humble to the end (after all, the weak is always fighting the strong), such an annoying time travel novel is written It is rare that the combat power system collapses. This is inevitable. In order for the male protagonist to cross-level challenges and the protagonist group to survive, the enemy must do some secondary operations that damage their combat power. But the author, you have started to collapse from the early stage. Did you really write this book with your heart? Or is it that you don't know how to write settings at all, and you just expand a matter that has been explained in a few sentences into a long inner drama like a water essay? Overall, this is a below-average, nondescript time-travel game novel. The more you read it, the more uncomfortable it becomes, so I recommend you not to read it.

I recently read the book again and sorted out the sequences that appeared in the book. Let's find faults together~

This is called a queen

I just read it, and some people said that if you can't accept the heroine, you are a virgin. People nowadays can't even accept wives. In the past, wives were the standard in novels. Isn't the queen delicious? In reality, if such a good-looking wife comes to me, I will accept it 100%.

The writing is humorous and the characters are fleshed out. It is on the same level as "Once upon a time there was a Spirit Sword Mountain". It is a good book. The two heroines currently appearing have quite potential, one is a widow and the other is a girl. They are not like the kind of heroines where the protagonist is unparalleled and is ignored. If you don't want to poke the needle, by the way, I am the queen. Some people say that the author's pace is too slow, but I really like to watch the various daily interactions between the male and female protagonists. This can make the characters more fleshed out, but the battles can be less protracted. After all, the author also said that this is not a world where extraordinary people can do whatever they want, and some of the previous battles are too heavy-handed for the 1v1 plot. Maybe I'm just a novice who likes cool writing 😅 I hope the development of the story can be under William's control, and never lead to a tragic development like the Dragon Clan. What I want to see is the story of Queen William conquering the world, with a sword of 999, and a long-legged female knight will be given away with a click.

There is no sense of getting stronger, and there is no sense of urgency. A few years before the plot begins, I don't understand why I didn't open a sub-career to increase my level attributes. The protagonist just drifts with the crowd. The undisciplined plot is accompanied by the undisciplined protagonist. He is neither evil nor smart nor diligent, and is not even as charming as the big villain the system calls him. Originally, the beginning of this book was very attractive, and it had a lot of laughs, and the writing style was good, so it should have been popular. Unfortunately, the author didn't grasp it. There was no subjective initiative to guide the protagonist or the use of the plot line made it very boring to read. No matter how many laughs the protagonist lives purely by fate, it can't make people read happily. When I read more than a hundred chapters, I couldn't hold on. The protagonist (the author) thinks too much and does too little. The regiment's combat is neither fish nor fowl. I am not active in upgrading and tasks. I am undecided whether to open Wushuang or the torrent of war. The main plot of the book also seems nondescript. Describing too many characters, dialogues, and psychological activities in the early stage will make the plot drag out (to put it bluntly, it just feels watery). In addition, the protagonist without subjective initiative makes the book uninteresting (the laughter of the book cannot always be the interesting point). I kept skipping through several chapters and lost the desire to read further. It's a pity. It was very interesting to read at first. I originally thought it was a work that could be used to become a god. I think the protagonist can lead the queen to the ends of the world, fight monsters and upgrade along the way; or make suggestions, form forces, farm development, or go crazy in war. However, the system feels that there is no drama. The protagonist neither leaves the queen nor does anything, and is as pure as a bodyguard. . . There is only thinking about solving problems after encountering them (mostly relying on temporary cheats), and there is no thinking about becoming stronger or planning the plot or the future. The protagonist has no charm, the plot has no charm, and there is no fun, only laughter. The above are all personal opinions. As a reader (bookworm), I still hope that the author can write better and better, and that I can read more books.

So well written. The rhythm is well controlled, and the text reads without any translation accent or sluggishness. Moreover, some vulgar jokes/slangs/jokes will not make people feel uncomfortable when used, and they are even used brilliantly in some places (maybe the intensity can be controlled?). The character portrayal is also very good. Even the appearance is very different from those authors who pile up embarrassing rhetoric. The perspective of the portrayal is particularly original. The description of facial expressions (especially expressions) goes beyond the typical animation model created by ordinary online novels. In some places, it even feels like the characters are flowing naturally, which is beyond the ordinary text dimension and is very magical. However, some chapters feel like the pictures overlap when reading, and it is a bit confusing when switching scenes (it may also be because I read the book too quickly and missed some details). The title of the book is eye-catching, which will limit the audience to a certain extent. After all, the content is much better than the title of the book. Of course, the current results probably have little to do with this. As long as you keep writing down, there is a high probability that the orb will not become dusty. I won't talk about it anymore, it's so well written. Even if there are a few shortcomings listed above, they still outweigh the shortcomings. I even want to give the author money (but there is no such thing).

From now on, every time I go to the 100th floor, I will reveal something dirty about a fish