A Coin's Worth of Immortal Destiny

I saved the girl, I didn't want to save it, but I saved it, there's nothing wrong with it. Later, the girl asked for high-end cosmetics and toiletries, and the key protagonist found them for her. The key hero didn't like her, and he didn't want to care about it. How many people had to be persuaded in this paragraph, I didn't even have the desire to continue reading.

In order to advance the plot, the protagonist lost his mind. Do you think this has any other effect besides increasing the number of words?

Some plot transitions are a bit abrupt but still good (*๓´╰╯`๓)♡ There are also a lot of foreshadowings, the chicken, the statue in the temple, the two people who came to buy the rooster at the beginning, the tiger demon lady, the stone monk, and the Qianqiu Society, there are a lot of them!

Fortunately, there is nothing to complain about. After reading it, except for some typos, it is harmless. Some people say that the field mouse landlord's family is trying to persuade them to quit. It depends on how you interpret it. The overall writing and plot are good, but there are many small flaws. You may complain, but I still read it patiently. There are not many poisonous points overall.

Hong Luan has been a prostitute for so long, but her family has never found her. The protagonist just knocked down the county magistrate, and her family came to find her? If the Hongluan family are just ordinary people, then although it is a bit deliberate, it is not unacceptable. However, in the author's writing, the Hongluan family's magic power is unpredictable, and the protagonist is even worse than an ant in the eyes of others. So the question is, is it so difficult for such an awesome character to find a blood relative? Even the protagonist has a way of attracting incense to find people, but there are no higher-level members of the Taoist family? He also wrote that the Taoist sect was inferior to the nouveau riche, and could not even learn basic ways to behave in the world. How did that sect be passed down? Just forcefully create a conflict 😅

Goodbye for discord of ideas

The protagonist is simply schizophrenic. Sometimes he can save people by helping but watch them die. Sometimes he risks his life to fight against the evil forces that have no impact on him at all. The key is that there is no benefit. Sometimes he uses a bead that he knows is extremely dangerous and can kill people if he is not careful. He just accepts the protection fee paid by the businessman when he begs not to hurt him. Aren't you a moral model? Aren't you sworn in with the evil forces? Aren't you the Holy Mother?

Let's not talk about the chicken who suddenly became a big boss. You have to make the common people so miserable. You spend so much money to show off your house, but they end up having two meals a day? Are you the only one who can afford white rice? It made me laugh so hard

He left, was poisoned, and a young general wanted to kill him. The key is to think about it? But after doing this, you let them go. The key is to kill everyone present and then let them go? How about playing? What's going on? Let's talk about chickens. Can this awesome chicken be beaten to death by ordinary chickens? Can it be caught by mortals? How about playing? What's going on? The poison is gone

After reading more than a chapter, the protagonist was invited to compete in martial arts. I was so speechless. I knew the author wanted to highlight the final appearance of the protagonist. But can the plot not be so blunt? The protagonist has killed so many first-class warlocks before, and his reputation has spread. In such a plot, various characters directly subdue their wits. They all pretended not to know or heard of it, ignoring and ridiculing the protagonist. Forcing the protagonist to show off. Really speechless! I remember Squid said that various characters take part in the story, and after writing to a certain extent, their actions will no longer be dominated by the author. Instead, it is performed based on the character settings. Author, you can write better, why not? The character settings are always vague, especially the protagonist, whose personality traits are simply more changeable than a woman's. Sometimes she is stupid and wise, sometimes she is stupid and cute, and sometimes she is reckless. For a while, the clouds of chivalrous and courageous spirit filled the air. There is simply no certainty, and the various plot twists are extremely blunt.