A Coin's Worth of Immortal Destiny

He saved the girl, even though he didn't want to, which isn't inherently wrong. Later, the girl asked for expensive cosmetics and toiletries, and the protagonist even found them for her. The crucial point is that the male lead doesn't even like her and doesn't really want to get involved. This part is going to turn off so many viewers; I've completely lost interest in watching.

To advance the plot, they made the protagonist lose his mind. Do you think this serves any purpose other than increasing the word count?

Some plot transitions were a bit abrupt, but it was still pretty good (*๓´╰╯`๓)♡ There were quite a few foreshadowing elements, like the chicken, the statue in the temple, the two people who came to buy the rooster at the beginning, the tiger demon lady, the stone monk, and the Qianqiu Society—quite a few!

Thankfully, there's not much to criticize. I finished reading it, and apart from a few typos, it's not a big deal. Some people say the chapter about the field mouse landlord is discouraging, but it depends on how you interpret it. Overall, the writing and plot are good, but there are quite a few minor flaws. I might criticize it, but I'll still read on patiently. Overall, there aren't many bad points.

Hongluan had been a prostitute for so long, yet her family had never found her. The protagonist just defeated the magistrate, and suddenly her family showed up? If Hongluan's family were just ordinary people, then while it might seem contrived, it wouldn't be unacceptable.

Goodbye if we disagree on ideas

The protagonist is practically schizophrenic. Sometimes he could easily save someone but he stands by and watches them die. Other times he risks his life to fight against thugs who have no impact on him whatsoever, and what's worse, he gets no benefit from it.

Putting aside the fact that the chicken suddenly became a big shot, they had to portray ordinary people as so miserable. You show off your house and spend so much money, but they only eat two meals a day? You think you're the only one who can afford white rice? That's hilarious!

He's gone, poisoned and gone. A junior officer wanted to kill him, but the key question is, did he even intend to? He did it, and then let him go. The crucial point is, he could kill everyone present and still let him go? Are you kidding me? Are you joking? And then there's the chicken. This amazing chicken could be defeated by an ordinary chicken, and captured by a mere mortal? Are you kidding me? Are you joking? The poison has worn off.

After reading several chapters, I was speechless. I know the author wanted to highlight the protagonist's final appearance, but couldn't the plot be a little less contrived? The protagonist had already killed so many top-tier sorcerers, his reputation was already widespread, and yet this plot twist made all the characters seem utterly stupid.