Immortal Lord Xuanxiao

I wonder if the author will ever see this. I remember around 2011, when Wudao Zhe wrote "The Great Dao Contention," its initial performance wasn't good, and the author updated slowly, only once a day. However, Wudao Zhe rarely missed updates, and the quality was consistently high. Around a million words (I don't remember exactly), its performance improved significantly.

You had a spot to join the Party, a spot your parents risked their lives for. A distant relative snatched it away with a single, casual remark, threatening to kill you if you didn't give it to him. And you happily became that relative's son's servant, even genuinely thinking it was a great opportunity! You even smiled sincerely when you smiled at his son. Such a protagonist, such a magnanimous spirit! 🙂 I am ashamed to say I cannot match him… Let me repeat the keyword: "sincere and earnest".

It's great to have another cultivation novel to read 🤭. I love the names of these cultivation methods; they sound so sophisticated and high-class. Every time I see fireballs or ice spikes in mortal cultivation novels, I feel like spitting out a mouthful of blood. Therefore, I have basically never read any novels about ordinary people.

I couldn't stand it anymore ever since my senior sister became my boyfriend. Dual cultivation partners are fine in the world of cultivation, but when you apply modern love stories and emotions to them, it just doesn't feel right. What's with all this talk about the senior sister cultivating for her junior brother, and the junior brother doing all this for his senior sister?

The plot and writing are both quite good, but the part about dual cultivation with that Daoist from Taihua was truly toxic to me. She had such a good relationship with her senior sister before, and then suddenly she's dual cultivating with a Daoist from another sect with whom she doesn't have much interaction? Honestly, I could accept her being with a celestial maiden rather than with this Daoist. Extremely toxic.

After reading some people's thoughts, I have some things I want to say but can't help but feel compelled to speak out. Whether you think the protagonist is hypocritical and indecisive, or hesitant to kill his cousin and uncle, don't forget that he's a teenager, an orphan raised in a clan, already with an incomplete personality, and poisoned by the so-called "Thick Black Theory" for over a decade.

What will happen to the protagonist's family afterward? After all, their patriarch previously harbored murderous intentions towards the protagonist, but now, because of him, the family has benefited greatly… This seems rather troublesome.

This cultivation novel is very well written. I've read many cultivation novels, but many don't write this genre anymore. The protagonist's personality is decent, but it would be better to make the personalities of those around him more distinct so that readers can understand the story more clearly.

The protagonist, a Foundation Establishment cultivator, gets involved in the schemes of various powerful beings, yet he can see through situations that other powerful beings can't, and think of things that other powerful beings can't even imagine. Is it reasonable for a Foundation Establishment cultivator to laugh at an Earth Immortal? Did the author rush the writing? Shouldn't the schemes be discussed after the protagonist's cultivation level increases?

The Liu family harbored deep resentment towards the protagonist, having nearly killed him to seize the opportunity his parents had risked their lives for… yet they so easily let it go later. It's utterly baffling.