The Tiger Taoist

. . . . . . Opinion: Since the protagonist takes the tiger as the basis for his spiritual practice, he should make an article around the tiger instead of a hammer in the east and a mallet in the west. 1: Going to Huju Temple to gain experience in the mortal kingdom, and practicing with the silver from the treasury, is part of the main plot, but learning the Jinyunshao magic weapon deviates from the main plot. 2: Learn the formation method to make money from ghost silk, which deviates from the main line again, but fortunately there are not many chapters, so it is acceptable. 3: Traveling to the tribe to see monsters, sword cultivators, and treasures is an expansion of the world view. I used to think it was strange to expand downwards, but the author can actually write in detail if he is willing. 4: The story about the siege and killing of loose cultivators and the feeding of Burmese gold to tigers belongs to the main context. The story about Buddhism using the breath of wine and joy to practice Buddhism belongs to the perfection of the world view. 5: But spending a lot of time writing symbols to make money deviates from the main line again and makes people confused. Suggestion: Xianxia novels are no longer like those of the time when mortals were cultivating immortals. They must clearly describe how the protagonist uses his side job to earn spiritual stones and how many spiritual stones he earns at one time. The protagonist has a golden finger of enlightenment, but he always uses it to improve his side job skills. At best, it expands the richness of the novel, but at worst, it means the word count is low. Actually, there are still many things that can be explored in the novel, such as the improvement of skills and spells, how to fight and get along with monsters, Buddhists, and swordsmen. As a reader, I don't want to see how the protagonist makes money or picks up the slack. If the novel goes in this direction, why don't I read a tomb-robbing novel? The author should think about it, what is the most attractive thing for readers in "Tiger Taoist"? Is it that the protagonist lights up the skills of refining weapons, setting up formations, drawing talismans, and maybe even alchemy in the future? The name of the novel is "Taoist Tiger", not Taoist Fu, Taoist Dan, Taoist Qi, or Taoist Formation. If the author is not aware of this yet, then the novel will be lost to everyone, and it will be seen in the future.

The plot since leaving the mountain is really crappy

By the way, can the author tell me who wrote the first forty chapters of this book? Has the ghostwriter written his own book? If so, please let me know. Thank you.

I just want to know if the vitality pills that the protagonist earns in the sect can only be used as decorations? You keep saying that you are short of gold energy to practice, so you should go buy it! ! The money 💰 is being kept for the New Year!

I have tried the poison, and the first 40 pictures are okay, but the rest should be sold to rubbish writers. The spiritual tiger that depends on itself for life and death can be lent to others for just one silver coin. What else was said later about tigers being around people, I was speechless.

The first forty chapters are great, even a little bit shocking to me. After the forty chapters, the descent from the mountain is purely disgusting. The tiger and the tiger are one and the same, and they share the road. In the end, the tiger is like a tool. He said he was borrowed by a kid and went to ride it. Is this a partner in monasticism? It's funny If you don't want to write about tigers, don't call them Tiger Taoist! Here are my suggestions 1. It is okay to be in danger for the first time in the temple, but it is meaningless to arrange a vulgar two uninitiated young monks to be the enemies in the future. They go to learn their skills and take revenge. This is really vulgar, but if you write it well in the back, or if you describe the young monk in the front as being very clever, it will be fine 2. If you are called by passers-by and ambushed by a formation, then He was rescued by a passing sword cultivator. It would be better to change it to the male protagonist who discovered something was wrong and deliberately entered the trap to catch them all, because your tiger has a keen sense of smell. Did you forget about him? If you want to lure the sword cultivator and his gang, they can leave the factory later 3. Do you have to make the male protagonist a person with insufficient IQ? How many people who traveled through the modern era didn't know that they were naughty children, and even let their fellow Taoist friend Akashio ride on them? ! What do you think? 4. It's best to write about Tiger's character and growth, including some of his thoughts, because he's not a spiritual beast. He's very smart, okay? If you change it, please let me know. I'll delete the comment and apologize.

A tiger should be like his brother, right? Brothers may not always be together for the rest of their lives, but this tiger will be with you for the rest of your life. Just borrow it? Would you be happy if your brother lent you to a child to play with?

He is a mentally retarded person who can do all kinds of stupid things. He even lent his protective spirit beast to someone he had just met. Just like the swordsman lending his sword to a stranger, the president lends his black box to others. The author lent his wife to someone else. The live broadcast of drawing symbols is so cool, don't show off your IQ, you have never eaten pork and you should have seen pigs running. You are not an ancient person, and the information explosion cannot save you. You are really a waste. They also said that the senior sister has a bad brain, and the protagonist's intelligence is not very high. He is really defenseless when he goes to a strange place. Why are there so many such garbage articles. Some people also recommended it, and it was written in such a cool way, and I had the nerve to recommend it.

No wonder the results are mediocre. I suspect that the author changed after these forty chapters. Forcibly creating poison points just to select readers.

Sure enough, I saw that silly junior sister Baitian became a Taoist couple and then abandoned a lot of books. This is a highly toxic spot, but everything else is fine. Yo-yo. The author writes it himself and reads it yourself.