The Heavenly Dao Scanner

There is a reason for the poor performance of this book. Take the character Tao Banxian as an example. A person who can adopt many children will kill the protagonist just because he accidentally blocked his way of making money? And the protagonist actually gave up on killing the person who almost killed him twice in a row just because the enemy was a man who adopted some children? Haven't you heard of His Heroes and My Enemies? I was so poisoned that I died when I saw this! The author still has some skills in writing, but some plots and characters need to be learned from other popular books!

The first part of this book is okay, but the quality in the later part is not good. For example, he refuses to kneel when receiving an imperial edict and talks back. A small fifth-level Qi practitioner dare not say he is invincible in the mortal world. How can he have such a bad temper? In the past, he stole alchemy books from an official's house, encountered the tenth level of Qi training, and almost died. However, he didn't improve his memory, supported the court, and used rigid logic to force the halo of the protagonist. .

The author himself goes back and reads what he wrote 😁.

After reading novels for so long, I have rarely seen such a disgusting plot. People want to kill you twice, and you let them go. No matter what the reason is, people are already trying to kill you. If you didn't have some strength and luck, you would have died. Can you be more careful? In reality, if someone wants to kill me, it will happen twice. I don't care what the reason is, whether it is the law or the police. I must kill the other person first. If you don't kill the snake, you will suffer the consequences. I believe that a normal person will understand. Only those with abnormal brains will let the other person go. Are there any benefits to doing this? Are you looking like a saint?

I have written 4 books with almost 7 million words, and I know it is still v1. Thanks to Shen Nong in the comment area 😁

The heart is as high as the sky, and the life is as thin as paper. If it weren't for the halo of the protagonist, he would have been reincarnated long ago.

I didn't understand the ending. . . . . Can anyone explain it?

There are all kinds of poisonous spots. Suppress the bandits. Just follow the army and don't help. If all of them die, go to the **** alone.

The killing of bandits has become level 5 in the front, but it has become level 6 inexplicably later, and the reward has become level 5 again. There are many places where the author is inconsistent.

I feel that the plot of this book, Holy Mother, is unreasonable. Generally, in novels, the court does not require practitioners to kneel to receive the imperial edict, but this book requires kneeling. Although the protagonist does not kneel, there is Tao Banxian, and the woman who steals the side is watching. I guess I won't like reading the following chapters.