Zhong Kui Calls Me His Dear Nephew

I feel that Zhang Guolao's writing is quite ridiculous. He didn't meet the protagonist to ask whether he would sell the donkey. He came to the house and was sent away by the housekeeper, saying that the donkey had been given away. A normal person would ask the housekeeper if he could meet the man and discuss it. After all, it is the foundation of his own enlightenment. Without saying anything, he visited Du Mansion at night and wanted to steal it. Is this Zhang Guo, one of the Eight Immortals? This is a bandit! In our words, you have gone crazy and still want to become a fairy. Just dream.

I couldn't stand it when I read the second chapter. "The family has only a small amount of property." The result was ten acres of land and several tenants were hired. It made me laugh. It's so cool. One person cultivates one acre of land, right? Author, do you want to check the yield of one acre of land in the Tang Dynasty?

When writing Zhong Sheng, the author should not forget that the protagonist is a time traveler, and his original body is dead. If he can't control even a little residual influence, the character of being a native and a time traveler alternates back and forth. It will be too dramatic. If you want to write, write it well.

Will you die if you don't drink? You have traveled through time, and your dominant thoughts are ringing.

Good guy, luckily you are Zhong Kui's nephew. I thought you were a fool in modern society!

The underworld cultivating immortals insults the meaning of the word immortal in the dictionary. It is the same if you replace the immortal with something else. For example, the purpose is to become a five-spice defense, but it is difficult. During the process, you are intrigued and deceived. In order to become a five-spice defense, you will do anything. The system is one fragrance and two fragrances, and finally you become a five-spice defense that has the same life span as heaven and earth. So is there any difference between doing the defense this way and being an immortal?

It's better to write the male protagonist as an aboriginal, a native who wears time-travel skin.

Are you a time traveler? After being beaten to death at the beginning of the game, the protagonist was able to break into the governor's mansion alone the next day. You got it for your martial arts skills

To be honest, the author, you are not a murderer, you write about killing as if you are playing. It is recommended that the relevant departments check

The more I look at it, the weirder it becomes. I am always open to 55 with everyone, and later on I am also 55 with my children. The protagonist's last name is Zhong Ming55.