The Immortal Master's Persona

The writing is actually quite good, so why is there no one posting about it? Although it has a feel of ancient cultivation novels, it's handled reasonably well and not disgusting. It's really tragic that there are only eight posts despite the decent writing.

The same old trick: be merciful to the enemy, and take advantage of the fact that the book is abandoned and the trashy novel can't become popular.

The author isn't doing enough! Give me some votes, let's go! 🤓

Keep it up, it's better than many of the best writers.

To be honest, it was actually quite well-written. I was planning to raise it to about ten chapters, but it suddenly ended. 😅

Honestly, the protagonist is a romantic, and he's a time traveler. In this world, a wife is everything, especially since they're not even married yet. The protagonist has a sect, friends, and other romantic interests. Since he can't get married anytime soon, couldn't he secretly use that earthly spiritual vein for his sect?

I still miss the Heavenly Dao Scanner. Maybe I should start a second book and continue writing about Qi Ye!!!

Character design, character design, you just add a background character design to the protagonist. The first one is a background, fine, but the second one is also a background, and now there's even an illegitimate child. Can't you make your character design more comprehensive? Behavior, speech, and personality are also part of the character design.

Now it's two-in-one? No wonder it had so many words! Keep it up!

Dude, be careful! Without this system, you'd be dead so many times. You only get one life, and there's no save function.