Alchemy Notes

The extraordinary person made handprints on the steel pipe and frightened the beautiful woman into licking the mud off the car in public. Well, here comes the question. With such a level of personality gap, how could a parade like this happen? There are still a lot of people talking about social experience, social darkness, aristocratic rule, ugh~~ Let's make a simple assumption, assuming that "immortal cultivation is a real existence and is known to the world" 1. Country The family explicitly prohibits the cultivation of immortals 2. Anyone who secretly cultivates immortality will be killed by official immortal cultivators once discovered 3. (The most important one) Official immortal cultivators have the rights of the extraordinary people in this book Two questions: 1. Can this society exist stably? 2. What would you do if you lived in this country?

The writing is good, and the plot foreshadowing is also well handled. The setting is really attractive. The formation formation, the medium, the evil wind, and the principle of displacement are all bonus points that make people get involved. There is actually nothing unreasonable about why they are special forces. It is to pave the way for the next chapter. After all, ordinary people's psychological quality is not strong, and it can also avoid excessive explanations. For example, if you suddenly know something, can you say that you learned it in Hawaii? The plot is reasonable enough. After all, there is nothing incredible that people cannot accept. You can find an explanation by comparing the context. I like this book very much. The last time I had this feeling was when I was watching The Witch. Alchemy plus evil is not simply one plus one equals two. She has a unique charm. I will not overestimate my ability to give the author any advice. The author should have his own decision in mind, so I won't show off. Thank you to the author for the wonderful story he presented to us. I have a feeling that you are going to become a god!

The characters are all female supporting characters... Isn't it another story about a novice picking up girls in skin?

Even though I had been on hiatus for a year, I still ordered and read the entire first volume. The writing is really good, the scenes and characters are delicately portrayed, the occult setting is very rich, the plot has tension and relaxation, and the foreshadowing is also well wrapped up. One drawback is that I feel that the supporting characters are a bit lacking. Claire at the beginning is really amazing. Although some of the subsequent characters are well-shaped, they are all NPCs with not much writing. Portia is quite important, but she doesn't have a specific image yet. Let's order the second volume. I'll come back and update it after I finish writing The Demon Painter, right? Don't lie 😭

First, I subscribe automatically Second, there are a lot of monthly recommended tickets Third, I promote them when I have the opportunity Fourth, I think the most important point is! I won't read your updates. Hey, I'll slaughter them when they're fattened up!

1. I feel that the world of this book is too small. Everything that happens can be answered in this city, and as expected, the protagonists all know each other. For example: I found two keys to the door of the world in a short time. 2. There are too few people staying at the Anomaly Investigation Center at night. It is impossible to send just one person to guard the first floor. 3. If there is no means to suppress the extraordinary items in the anomaly investigation office, at least they should be stored separately.

Too slow😭😭😭

I feel that the emotional drama in the early part of the book is really a bit redundant and affects the reading experience.

The big guys (who wrote well) started to stop updating the chapters.

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Goldfinger: Emerald Slate Talent: Heart of Apprentice (Garkandasos of Valor Dynasty) Soul Place: Tower of Pavmos (Pavmos of Elling Dynasty) —————— Basic Refining Formation (Foundation, Beacon, Secret Contract, Notarization , material symbol): hope Iron (100%) (circle, Fensa language, omniscient eye) Crown of Blood (74%) (circular six turbines, Danting text, scarlet chalice) Moth dung soil (lightless moon) Dragon's breath grass (Danting text) , Omniscient Eye) Water Ghost Bronze (Fensa Language) —————— Soul Refining Array: "Gambler" advanced to "Crooked Man" (Three Rings Inlaid) —————— Spiritual Medium: White Sage, Smoked graphite powder, a small amount of pure white crystal powder Pigeon blood ink, bat blood ink, dragon blood ink —————— Alchemy potion: The King's Downfall (Bone Moss + Abraham Flame Stone + Blood Crown) Spiritual Vision Potion (Dragon) Silk grass essential oil + pearl liquid + Jiebro sesame oil + taurine) —————— Extraordinary items: Xitie equipment Twenty-four black dice (obtained from dealer Anthony) "Black Elf" Horvajic (obtained from the thief Horius/Gordon) Tower of Paumos: Emerald Gate (Moonlight Road, Ray Bedivere) Pure White Gate (Stone Statue Holding a Lamp, Nancy) Stone Statue of Writing (Servadra Goinman) Oro Continent —————— Gods: "Invisible Mist" Neog Tossos (Phile Empire) "Moon God" Selunane (Elling Dynasty) Naduyoun (Hungarian Dynasty) "Dark Sun" "Saturnus The Tangle of Cause and Effect (Polish Cult) Dragon of the Void (Elemental Cult) Scarlet Holy Grail (Blood Cup Cult) Omniscient Eye Lightless Moon —————— Touch of the Evil God: —— ———— The Hungarian and Tang Dynasties (appeared in ancient books, there is no archaeological evidence to prove its existence, worshiping mermaids) The Ailing Dynasty (destroyed by an unknown disaster more than 3,500 years ago) The Valo Dynasty (more than 400 years after the fall of Ailing, and 3,000 years ago, One of the many kingdoms during the barbaric period for more than a thousand years) Bori Kingdom (same period as the Valo Dynasty) Obai Empire (established at the end of the barbaric period after the Elgar family conquered twenty-six countries, large and small, and inexplicably collapsed after ruling the continent for more than ten years) Bolkan Empire (the end of the period of ignorance, destroyed more than 900 years ago) Philid Empire (Philid I destroyed the Bolkan Empire more than 900 years ago, the Philid Empire unified the Western Continent and survives to this day) Losvac Kingdom (during the period of Philid II, was deceived out of pocket) Empty treasury) Byron Empire (Twelve years ago, the Philae Empire Alchemy Association and the Byron Empire Gnostic Sect held an exchange meeting) —————— Elling Dynasty: "Great Sage", "Master of Alchemy" Paumos Varo Dynasty: "Sound The famous master of alchemy" Galkandarsos Phile Empire (Western Continent): Imperial Government, Primitive Church (Gluttony), Gray Knights (Church Heresy Tribunal and Imperial Law Enforcement Agency), Alchemy Association, Tacos Byron Empire: Gnostic Sect Overseas: Spiritual Practitioners —————— Underground** Members: Angelet, "Pastry" Jerry Vadanli, Giant, Bullet, Allen Language: Emon (circulated on the continent, common in Gunburg) Old Aeling Funsa (evolution of ancient Aeling, Valo dynasty) Dantine (Pelian upper class, primitive church) Polish Old Nic script Soul form: gaseous (Plain Tongren), Liquid (Fifth Level), Solid (Fourth Level) Career Path: Apprentice Gambler, Trickster, Trickster, Controller, Destiny Magician Invisible Man Grey Knight (Glutton)

The novel is well written, but the updates are not strong enough.

I understand that many of these authors want to become famous with one book, quickly become a great master, and then immediately resign to become a full-time author. However, in the current online novel environment, this is difficult to achieve. If your own conditions are met, the plot and writing are all right, but there is no promotion, no money to write or advertise, then you can only do it step by step. This is very embarrassing. On the one hand, I can't achieve the idea of ​​becoming famous with one book. On the other hand, I have no money for publicity. I rely on one book to accumulate fans. One book is updated with two chapters a day, basically two years. It takes a long time and I can't make much money. I still take up time every day to write novels. There is no rest time, and I basically work overtime every day to write.        ，，，，，，，，，，，，，，， There is another situation, that is, the author is pure and can't write much, so he can only cheat and subscribe. See you in the next account and continue to cheat and subscribe. If the author really wants to make some pocket money from this, at least insist on finishing one book. If you don't want to spend more time writing, keep at least one update a day. This way there will still be hope. It's better than your eunuch who won't even have a subscription in the future.

With the best-selling of Lord of Mysteries, Kremlin novels have gradually become popular, and various mash-up styles have emerged one after another, such as Cthulhu the Immortal, Cthulhu the light novel, and now Cthulhu the Academic. However, many authors do not have enough writing skills, so some Grammar novels lose their original flavor when read. Personally, I still prefer fantasy novels, because this genre of genre novels has that flavor. I like both Lord of Mysteries and this novel, but if I have to put it down, I still like this one very much. The reason is also very cliché. This book has some emotional drama. I personally prefer to intersperse some emotional drama with the compact plot, even in this kind of genre novel. To be honest, the author's writing is very smooth, and the plot arrangement is also very careful, without any flaws. I don't quite understand the people who talk about awkwardness in this chapter. Because most people are like this, they just say that the plot is awkward, but they don't say why. The tone of being high-minded and high-minded really affects the viewing experience. I took a look at some of the people who expressed their own opinions. It should be their own problem. They read the book carelessly and without thinking. They turned around and forgot what the author said so clearly. However, I can't say it's all their fault, because I read it in one night. Many of the foreshadowings and names of people seemed right to me, but the person I was chasing might not be the same. So the author, hurry up. The difference between you and the master lies in your coding speed.

There are many comments in the comment area expressing dissatisfaction, but I want to say that this book is really good and has the potential to become a god. It is just because the author has a weak foundation and a small fan base. But I can honestly say that this book is one of the best in the same genre so far. The setting of alchemy alone has made this book half a success. But the pace of novels with similar themes is always slow. Just like the squid, it needs to be unfolded slowly. On the contrary, if you write it quickly, I really can't stand it like Super Dawn, Lord of the Secret Witch and so on. Support the author. I hope the author can finish this book well and not be affected by the comments. Gold will always shine. When the time comes, the book will become a god. I will order all of them 🤭

Recently, because there are too few updates, I took the time to read "The Lord of Mystery" so far. I have no say in this kind of work because I have read relatively few similar works. However, I think the big difference lies in the maturity of the author. The author of Mystery, Squid, is a very mature author. He has a very clear self-awareness of his own time management, the structure of his works, and the direction of the story. He will also share and write a summary with readers after each chapter. In summary, he is a very mature author, which is worth learning and learning from. The reason why I talk about this here is because I feel that the work "Alchemy" still has great potential. The readability of the story from the beginning to the present is also very good, and the rhythm is also very good. I still hope that the author can adjust his state and continue on this road! Come on!

Just made up the full order. . . The writing is wonderful, but the updates are too... I almost forgot about the plot setting once I stopped it, so I finally picked it up. The author needs to hold on. Jian Kui felt something but didn't write it out before. Come on, this one is better.

I recommended it directly on the app without changing the status. It's awesome, I admire you.

When I was a child, procrastination was a short day, I was on Saturday, updated on Sunday. After growing up, drag is silent for a week, I am in this week, updated in the next week. Now, Mogging is a knife in my hand. I am outside the door, The author is inside the door. The future Mogging is like an iron fence, I am in prison The author is above the sky

I have always felt that the owner of the old ship bar hanging the painting outside was a very unreasonable plot. The alchemist can understand it, but the official extraordinary person can't understand it? Isn't this a self-inflicted trap?

For suspense and reasoning works, it is really painful to catch up 😭. It seems that I have to save some and read them once a week. It feels like I am catching up with American dramas at that time 😭 The author is working hard!

From Heng Dao to Jian Kui and then to this book, the author has never updated and stabilized the book, and they all start high and start low, and readers will not be able to do it before they come out. How do you cultivate your own readers like this? Sooner or later, your popularity will be ruined. After reading this new book for a while, I stopped reading it because I didn't believe you. 😜

The writing is smooth and beautiful, with an authentic British style. It is a very comfortable-looking text. The plot has ups and downs, the rhythm of daily life and conflicts is well grasped, and the characters on the stage have distinct personalities in just a few sentences. Judging from these aspects alone, the author's writing skills are not generally profound, and in some aspects he can compete with the Lord of Mysteries on the same stage.

There are some settings of the Esoteric Cult simulator. I have a story. It is very well written and fluent. It incorporates many other elements into the background of the Esoteric Cult. It is really good.

I saw Chapter Thirty-Nine and it was really well written. If you keep your level up and maintain your mentality, your grades will not be bad.

The books he writes are all eunuchs. No matter how good an author like you is, I will never pay for them.

I like this book very much. I started reading Mystery some time ago. After reading it for a while, I opened another book. I chose this book after reading the title. I feel that the author's writing style is great. There are a lot of bad things on the market now. I am really lucky to see a book like this. I hope the author can work hard to update it. Come on!

The update is too slow and slows down the rhythm of the plot. Keep it up and I'm afraid you'll die if you keep it up. Alas.

I originally wanted to read a book related to alchemy, but I felt super good after reading the first volume in one go The foreshadowing is well arranged, and various clues are interspersed. The part about the woman who killed the dealer is very shocking. The various clues and foreshadowing at the end of the volume basically fill up all the loopholes in the early stage, and the descriptions of various details are in place, giving people a sense of the unfolding of the real world. I hope the author can grasp this sense of realism in the future. After all, the Alchemy Association is a large organization, and many people cannot write with a sense of realism. If double updates can be guaranteed, this would be a surefire success.