The Eerie Theater That Began in London

Alas, I originally wanted to keep diving and silently pursue books, but I just checked the out-of-circuit index and found that the number of fans of this book is not bad, but the comment interaction is too low, it is more than one million words, and the comments are less than 200. There are too many book lovers who are deep divers, and they don't go ashore to bask in the sun. I'm here to help the author throw a torpedo to explode the wave fish. I hope that all deep divers can become seals and make the comment area of ​​this book lively. It can help the book's out-of-circle index reach at least level 3 and expand its influence. Otherwise, I am really afraid that the author will not be able to persevere at some point and resolutely kill himself from the palace and enter the palace to serve the emperor (I was scared out of the original Three Kingdoms copy when the author said he wanted to give up writing). In addition, as long as the author insists on updating continuously, millions of alliances will not dare to say so at the end of this month, but ordinary alliances will still be able to reward one, and I will post a post as proof! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

He is so pitiful, I try my best to help him - Ordinary people He is so pitiful, I try my best to help him - Holy Mother He is so pitiful, you must do your best to help him - Holy Mother Bitch Holy Mother - Tan Sitong: Reforms in all countries are all caused by bloodshed. Today, China has not heard of anyone bleeding due to reform. This country is not prosperous; if there is, please start from the same heir. Holy Mother Bitch—— Kang Youwei: Reforms in various countries are all caused by bloodshed. Today, China has not heard of anyone bleeding due to reforms. This is why this country is not prosperous; if there is, please start from the same heir. Just to clarify: the protagonist is not the Virgin!

The background of the story is that the protagonist is an art student who failed the college entrance examination. When he was desperately preparing to re-study, he received an admission notice from Pinnacle Art Academy. However, when the protagonist came to this school, he discovered the strangeness of this school, but by this time he had already fallen into terror. The novel is an unlimited flow in colleges and universities. Specifically, each copy is acted as a script. By completing the tasks published in the script, you can improve your strength and gain an advantage in the competition in the school. So far, the plots of each dungeon are mainly based on some important or special events that occurred in foreign countries in the modern period. The rationality of these story plots is quite good, and the power system is relatively stable. However, it may be because the dungeon plot is relatively niche, the author's writing style is relatively average, and the male protagonist's evolution direction is a werewolf that most book friends do not like, so the appeal of the story is relatively average. However, it can be seen that the author is still working hard to improve this aspect, and the sense of substitution is getting better and better. It is estimated that there will be a qualitative improvement in about one million words. ---Recommended from the WeChat public account Da Shuhuang Thirty-Six Strategies Shuhuang comes to us! ! !

I really like watching the Eastern version, and I especially want to watch the Tang Dynasty one. Why did you forcefully cut it and change the script just because someone else said it?

My personal suggestion is to write less Eastern fantasy, because I'm tired of reading it. Personally, I feel that even old bookworms don't like Eastern fantasy. The routines are all the same. What you write is infinite flow, with different world views and different plots, which can give readers a sense of expectation. This is the second time I've written Eastern fantasy (Three Kingdoms is not included, and history and fantasy are not included). Same), it's repeated. You don't have many copies at the moment, and it doesn't feel good to have a repeated world view. Well, in summary, I feel sick after watching Eastern fantasy. A routine cannot reflect the author's sense of open innovation. Of course, everyone's interests are different. If you don't agree with my point of view, you can refute it.

First of all, the author's expressive ability and writing style are both good, at least above the passing mark and can be understood clearly. Secondly, the selection of the first few dungeons is pretty good, at least I have the desire to read on. Of course, there are disadvantages. First of all, the plot is too flat. There is no distinction between climax and dullness. This is a very important point. It will give people the feeling that they have watched it but not watched it. For example, let's take the first copy, the one playing the detective. The case design is good, but there is no thrilling feeling. Just imagine, in this kind of suspense-oriented script, what readers want to see is not that the protagonist describes the case in a few sentences, finds the murderer, and then leaves coolly as if he is pretending. Of course, I can't say that everyone likes thrilling, at least I do. In the suspense category, whether it is a novel or a TV series, shouldn't everyone be immersed in the tense atmosphere along with the readers, and then watch the protagonist step by step while investigating the case, confronting the criminals, and then completing the task? Although it is used a lot, the more it is used, the more people like it. The other one is about the protagonist exchanging things in school. I don't know that for others, at least for me, in a novel similar to Mugen-ryu or Bankai-ryu, after finishing the script, the most anticipated thing is to see the protagonist improve his strength. In short, it is what the protagonist redeemed, which aspect of strength he gained, or what unique thing he got. It's very vulgar, but it's also one of the cool things. I don't know if it's because I read ten lines at a time, or if the author didn't write it at all. I didn't see how the protagonist's werewolf talent was redeemed. He used it directly in the war copy and then introduced it. I was a little confused. More importantly, I don't know if the author knows that after redeeming the werewolf, the attribute of [No Demon] made me almost give up the book at that time. Yes, I am the kind of person who likes to be a fort. I like to read novels and play games [😂] So, do you know how many readers like me will be discouraged by just these two words? This is why, if you read many books by old authors, when giving the protagonist's abilities in the early stage, they will never give an absolute definition. It's all similar to physical first, then spiritual. Or maybe you wait until the reader gets into the book and then say that this is a book that only focuses on the physical or magical aspects. Because by that time, most of the remaining readers will not subscribe because of the protagonist's ability, but because of the plot of your book. This is important! ! ! Finally, there is the senior who has the same blood as the protagonist. How can I put it, I mentioned uniqueness before, but then there comes a person with the same bloodline, who is 10,000 times stronger than the protagonist, and even the protagonist's bloodline was taken from his body. How can I put it, at least when I see that, I will be a little hesitant to continue. Then, there are descriptions of certain plots. In my opinion, the author gave too many descriptions to the supporting characters. The reader's perspective must follow the protagonist. Everyone hopes that the protagonist can solve everything, and even the protagonist is the most brilliant. The supporting characters you described seem to add support to the protagonist, but in fact they spread the excitement of the plot instead of focusing on the protagonist. Actually, there are only so many, and these are my personal opinions. You can just watch and have fun. I just saw that the author's updates were intermittently, and I thought it was a recommendation problem that it didn't take off, so I just wanted to talk about it. Of course, there is a high probability that my suggestions are useless. The author can just take a look.

Infinite streaming, what everyone sees is not only going to various dungeons to have various stories, completing tasks, and then returning to gain benefits and improve yourself. But this book, it feels like there are three chapters of Infinite Flow Classic Returns. There is no such thing. How to improve the power system is very confusing. It seems that the credits and evaluation cards are earned, and money is spent in the pocket, but it is not spent and I don't know how to spend it. Moreover, the own power system is very vague and has no expressiveness at all. The first time I went to the library, I felt even more magical. After searching for a long time, I read a book. As mentioned before, it is omnipotent and has no writing at all. Anyway, it feels quite strange. It is the type I like, but I can't read it and it feels bland and tasteless.

To be honest, this book is quite unique in writing. The only thing that doesn't work well is that the main character's own combat power system is confusing (there are a lot of invisible werewolves, fighting spirits, the art of transformation, and the practice of covering the sky). However, the author's writing skills are actually very good, and he can hold on until now without making people feel that he is in trouble. There is another book by the author that I have read better than this one. Not many people in Maoshan Shengzhuan System have written it. It is thoughtful, interesting, and clear at a glance. Come on, author.

，，，，Cp，，，，，，，，，，     Also about someone saying that the protagonist is a eunuch, I want to say, do you know of a book? It is very well written, and it can be a masterpiece of a fan. Then the author said that some readers said that the protagonist is a eunuch, so he [couldn't help it] [half-heroine], the readers rioted, countless people retreated, and several hall leaders ran away I'm not talking about the harem problem, but if the heroine appears because of the readers' request rather than the plot arrangement, the author can consider it carefully. And regarding the heroine, the author can look at his emotional line writing ability. I will read it if it is good, but I am afraid that it will be pornographic if it is not good. The first thing is to describe how good the figure is, how good the appearance is, and leave a deep impression on the protagonist. If the heroine is not well written, you can downplay or skip it. I just want to ask the author what he thinks. Is the reader requesting the heroine to appear or should it be arranged according to the plot, and whether the heroine's appearance will change the proportion of the plot too much? I like the status quo very much, and seriously promote the career line. The emotional line is secondary, but not necessary. I hope the author can take a look and say something. Some articles are just unclear, and then maliciously control and add LSP descriptions. This will easily cause different types of readers to quarrel. It is better to avoid lightning in advance. Thank you

The third copy is set to be the American drama "Bloodline" The fourth copy is set in the Cthulhu setting and is temporarily named "Crazy Novelist". If you have any Cthulhu movies, you can recommend them to Poujie for reference, crab~