Sean's Struggle

A touch of Western humor, the character of the time traveler helps the online novel readers feel immersed in it, and the writing is very good. I will give you 4 nemesis and wait for your follow-up. Once the follow-up is written, it will be a 5-star review. Note: Full level 5 stars

This book has potential. Although I don't know why the author hasn't written a book for so long, I feel that there are many potential readers and everyone is eager to invest 😂😁😁

I kept seeing the first order, but it was still taken off the shelves! The author should have absolutely no understanding of Western culture and military history! Or maybe he has some misunderstanding about the feudal monarchy system! Moreover, it is difficult to find the main line of this book, and it is impossible to understand what the author wants to express. It is a serious logical confusion! Completely disregarding the background of the times and taking it for granted to develop the territory according to the humanistic ideas of modern society! Perhaps the author should learn about the fate of the Ruhr region in Germany, and the fate of the Ruhr region known as the East! This is what happens to your territory in real society! It's not you who is so interested in whetting your appetite. You've already put this on the shelves, what on earth do you want to write?

Since leaving the army, the situation has taken a turn for the worse. It feels like it no longer has the same style as before. It's just another pretentious and slap-in-the-face white novel. It's a pity. . . . . . . By the way, for all kinds of words such as "you can do it, you can't do it, don't do it", etc. I have prepared an answer template in advance and asked my philosophy and logic teachers at the university to revise it, so if you want to say something like this, please just say it, I won't care.

The writing is very good and tasteful, but the writing should pay attention to the distinction between Chinese and Western. For example, the word imperial court is not suitable, and can be changed to government. Neither Chinese nor Western is a taboo in Western fantasy.

The writing style is at the big brother level from the beginning, and the plot doesn't have much problem The background knowledge may need to be recharged, and the historical determinism throughout the article is, of course, orthodox in the Chinese context. But these are not problems, the problem is that they are not updatedˊ_>ˋ

The writing is good and the concept is good, but it would be nice if the author could replace the terms of the Dragon Age and the Dragon River with Western fantasy terms such as the Shire Era and the Lakeland River. Otherwise, it would be weird to combine Chinese and Western names without the Western flavor. Come on author, I recommend it to you

What about the book Rebirth of Passion and Burning Years?

I was really disgusted by trying to lick an emperor who regarded himself as an ant! You are a time traveler! Not a local aborigine! ! The mentality between the two is different! ! !

Can the author use the word empire instead of court? I always feel that it is very inconsistent. The setting is obviously a Western country.