Rendering a Real Game

There are no female characters. There is no real-world plot, only the game walks on one foot, which is a pity. I'm almost halfway through the book, and I'm feeling a little tired of reading. I hope the author will add a female character in the next book. If he doesn't know how to write about emotions, he can have a female apprentice. Younger sister. Or something like a pet that turns into a human in the later stage. There is only one female president in the whole book. I forgot her name.

Damn it! I am so excited about this book. I have read this book before, but I forgot about it as I read it. Who knew it was so good? I can't find the bad points. Except for the one who reported the protagonist in the early stage, who was a bit disgusting, but the later part is really good.

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I think this novel is the most outstanding among the current mage-style novels. A few suggestions: This novel has elements of farming style, and farming style has the characteristics of a snowball. It tends to snowball faster and faster, and the protagonist becomes stronger and stronger. In the later stage, the combat power system is prone to collapse, and the protagonist becomes more and more invincible. It is recommended to control the rhythm, or add some difficulty to the protagonist, and control the development speed of the Mage Association. The strength of the nobles of the northern and southern empires can be enhanced. The original and most complete warrior system can be described and strengthened. The tactics and weapons of group warfare can also be increased. The aboriginal mages' association can also be strengthened. Otherwise, there will always be a feeling that the current Mage Association can overwhelm an empire.

I am attracted by the introduction every time. Then I was repulsed by the three golden chapters and comments. It's an infinite loop. I can't stand the first dozen pictures anymore. How do you want me to look at the back ones?

I suddenly discovered that the Water Shield Technique can be used by others. Then if I develop a method to make the Water Shield Technique explode, for example, develop a spell, like Deidara's Clay Bomb, and fix it on the staff, because the Water Shield Technique distributes the power evenly to the entire shield. When fighting, first put a shield on the opponent, and then use the backhand to pull it over, let the Water Shield Technique spread the clay around the entire shield, and then blow it up with the backhand. Wouldn't the Water Shield Technique be a big bomb?

Seeing a group of people playing, I went in and took another look. The problem was that the first few pictures were too watery, eight-pointed. It makes people lose all their desires. How can I see the later stage?

Here are some of my opinions: First of all, the background of the book is a game jointly developed by governments around the world. The book also hints that there may be a scenario similar to the revival of spiritual energy in the future. This shows that countries should attach great importance to this opportunity to explore in advance, so it is unreasonable to not have forces organized by governments of various countries in the book. Secondly, the game is jointly developed by multiple countries, so why can only players in the national server play it in the book. Moreover, if this game is played by players all over the world, but the author did not describe it, it is possible that foreigners are all mentally retarded, and no one in so many countries has developed a new profession. My advice to the author: Find a way to round up the pits dug by these background settings. Write according to your current structure. Wait until readers are tired of this single model and leave. Join national organizations and international servers. These elements can not only fill the pits you dug before, but also pave the way for the revival of spiritual energy in the future. The most important thing is that if you really just want to write about climbing the technology tree, then there is really no need to make the background setting so big. There are only more than 300 chapters and the background setting has become a loophole. In the future, when you write more and more, it will be more difficult to round it up, and then it will collapse as you write. When the game comes to the real world, you can only come out to eat books, or force your wits down. The governments who developed the game don't even know how awesome the game is. When the game comes, the protagonist can only jump out to save the world, and the readers will scold it for being unfinished. Or just eat the book instead of writing the game and come to the real world. The protagonist is so awesome because he has an ancestral treasure. It is just his imagination that the game will come. Then the homepage introduction of the book is changed and it is finished. Of course, usually after the author fails to write, he will simply run away. I like this book very much, so I don't want this book to fall apart after writing. I hope the author can think carefully about how to fill in these holes.

This book is good. I just hope that I will stick to writing this kind of research articles in the future and not deviate from the topic. Personally, I like this style.

Why do I feel like the main character is a bit childish?