Detective Conan: Starting with a Chat Group

Can you please stop being Xiao Ai, the heroine?

I always feel that I dare not write many descriptions, such as being held by Xiaolan, just two words, it smells so good Is the author also afraid of being banned? There is also Koizumi Hongzi, the big murder weapon, but I don't write it Many descriptions are not written, the sense of substitution is not good Describe more about women

Character solicitation post, the author didn't create it, I created it

Let's talk about the shortcomings of this book... I like Joten-ryu, and I also like Conan. People who read this book must only like one of them, so there are many people who were abandoned midway. After all, the author has focused on writing both Joten and urban light novels... For example, if you write Conan alone, I can read it, and I can also write Joten alone. I can continue watching, but I have clearly watched a section of the heavens where gods and demons are everywhere, and suddenly jump to urban life. The contrast is huge... I have to wait patiently to adjust my mentality to watch urban life, and then jump to the heavens... It is difficult for people to have a sense of substitution for both at the same time... The more times I watch it, the more I feel tired... Some people will say that you don't have to watch the part you don't like! I thought so too at first! But the author's other operation is the same... He has cities and heavens at the same time... And there is no twist in it... If you skip it, you will easily miss the content. If you don't skip it, just reading ten lines at a glance will gradually make people feel bored... Finally, in fact, the content written by the author is good on its own, but... Hey... It's like tofu... Some people like sweet and some like salty... But the author adds sugar and salt to a bowl at the same time... This is a bit speechless.

I finally got promoted to a higher level, to commemorate it Then I discovered that there was an extra recommendation ticket Grass******************

Finally I can speak. I have read about 400 chapters, and I really want to say something. There is really no need to write about your chat group. It is not as good as World of Conan. You write a chat group and a world of Conan. You have forgotten some of the people in the chat group. Also, if you say that you cannot tell the detailed futures of the people in the group, talking too much is interference. But after joining the group, it is already interfering with the future. It is better to give them some suggestions. The sexual choice is for them to refer to, and you don't give them anything. Their strength allows them to increase their own speed, but their combat power has not increased yet. In comparison, what I read in this novel is not the chat group, but the funny arguments in World of Conan. I personally think that World of Conan is well written, but the group writing is broken. This is my personal opinion, and I am not saying that the work is not good. World of Conan is well written, but the chat group is a bit messy.

If you see what the author said, please let me know. Zhizhizhi(*/ω＼*)

The writing is okay, but there are still a lot of poisonous points and a lot of water. It feels like a kindergarten. It's like raising a bunch of daughters. Saga kills a few people and is fined 100,000 points. A group of people say I hate you. There is really no need to add such descriptions. According to this logic, there is no need to die in the entire group, and the group leader has become a nanny.

I keep playing detective games with those kids, pretending to be helpless even if I have the strength to refuse, it feels very nt.

After reading two chapters, I felt familiar. After thinking for a while, I remembered that I had read it before. I gave up after reading two chapters. The reason for giving up was that the protagonist wanted to join forces with Xiaomao to sell Pokémon 🙂