The Infinite Worlds Chat Group

At this stage, the advantages and disadvantages of this book are obvious. Advantages: 1. First of all, it is a magically modified version of Naruto and Pirates. It has some imagination and the author's decent writing style, which also brings out the excitement. For example, Marshal Luffy traveled to Pirate Luffy, and the battle on the top was good. 2. There are dull and excessive ones, and there are also small ones, which are attractive to read. For example, Yitian Zhang Junbao (Hong Junbao version) **The World and Qin Shi Mingyue Emperor Qin ascended the throne, which are very exciting and explosive. 3. For Zhutian, I personally like the magic modification of the original plot. Because the magic modification is fun, otherwise we would just watch the original work. The author of this book writes about his own imagination, and the writing control is quite good. The magic modification and imagination parts can be self-explanatory, and it is not just nonsense and self-pleasure. For example, the changes in HP. Disadvantages: 1. The writing style and control of the plot are okay, but they are passable, not great, so there are some places that are not pleasing to the eye. For example, the interaction between characters in the early stages of the real world. It can be seen that the author tried hard to write a plain and warm scene. Unfortunately, the writing style is not good and the writing is not good. For example, the interaction between three women in real life. I personally recommend the author to read the book "Infinite Fun in a Small World". In the article, making trouble is secondary, and falling in love is the main thing. The description of the interaction between the protagonist and supporting characters is very well written and captures the hearts of readers and fans. 2. The historical part is not good for the senses, such as the task part of the Ming Dynasty Emperors. Because history is heavy and grand, and the author, in pursuit of fun, writes it too plainly. It's okay for novices, but it means readers don't have any brains and can read ten lines at a glance. Once readers read this book carefully and start to think about it, they will feel that this part seems shallow and has no depth, which drags down the quality of the book. In addition, the author also expresses some of his own opinions in the article, which can easily lead to conflicts and 404. My personal suggestion is that you can write about reality, and it is best to focus on the emotional aspect. If your writing skills are not good, you can practice it. We can just brush aside other political and economic issues in one go. Everyone knows the reasons. If you really can't avoid these, you can refer to the content in the "Learning Power" APP 🤭 for description. Finally, if you are able, please subscribe to the genuine chapters to support the author. I hope the author will continue to create, improve his writing skills, and write a wonderful world

Author, please come out and I have a big treasure for you to take a look at. I admire the author very much. This is the most profound prose about Journey to the West that I have ever seen. But it is also the most uncomfortable one I have ever seen, even more uncomfortable than The Legend of Wukong in some places. Brother Monkey's love is both false and real. At the end it was empty again. It really matched his name Wukong. Tangtang is also quite awesome. She can die when she wants to, without anyone else having to do anything. I hope the author will ask other big guys to help this Wukong, otherwise it will be too uncomfortable to watch.

Except for the 7-in-1 main world plot, this book is undoubtedly the fairy grass. The creative modifications, rhythm control, and emotional rendering of each copy are all top-notch. It is like a two-dimensional fan who has known each other for many years and wrote an infinite flow specially for a friend. It allows people to easily join the plot. Even though they only wrote a small amount of content, they can quickly establish the characters, make the plot self-consistent, and guide readers to figure out the plot on their own. This eliminates the biggest poisonous point of fan fiction - the collapse of characters. This is the best part of this book. The plot of Marine Marshal Luffy, the Emperor of Humans, and Nobita Kami is even more memorable. The only flaw is that the author's writing experience is slightly lacking. Firstly, inappropriate spoken words frequently appear in the text, which is very inconsistent whether you are reading or listening to the book. Then there is the deliberate piling up to pursue the uniqueness of the setting. This is especially obvious in the development of the protagonist's plug-in. Fortunately, this is a chat group fanfic. Excellent content is the key, and the underlying background setting is not so important. If you write originality, it will be very fatal. I don't know if the author will see it. When you have free time, you can still come back and write a book. A glimpse of the leopard shows that the author is quite capable in the two-dimensional infinite flow branch. With one or two excellent books by your side, you can completely escape the fate of cannon fodder and open up your own world. The future is promising, isn't it? In this era, it is quite difficult to find a side job that is self-fulfilling and enjoyable. The current situation of the entire online literature industry is that the cake is getting smaller and smaller, and the leeks are being cut more and more diligently. Every inch of the starting field is already precious, and if you can take the first step, you will have surpassed the vast majority of people. Doesn't the author really feel that it is a pity? That's it. An ordinary reader's random thoughts…

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Has the author applied for a contract? I personally think this book is better than 90% of the same type of books from Qidian. I want to become a fan.

To be honest, there are many novels about the Black Jade Emperor. How many times has he been reincarnated and how many years he has lived? He can't be so brainless. Tell me about it. Just after the Jade Emperor established the rules of heaven, her sister broke the law. First of all, the time was wrong. Secondly, she hasn't informed the Jade Emperor yet. Also, there are so many people in heaven, so she had to choose a mortal. In the eyes of immortals, mortals should be very dirty. Tell me, in ancient times, a lady from a wealthy family suddenly married a beggar on the roadside. Will her family be angry? The Jade Emperor can at most punish her sister to be pressed down on the mountain. Please, it's just a formality. Only the Jade Emperor knows what is going on in the mountain. Besides, time is nothing to the immortals.

The author's writing is really good (no money will be given for this review) There are several places where the writing is very touching. As long as you don't cut it, keep it, and don't mention rewards, I can definitely order them all anyway. PS: Stop teasing Sister Lily. I'm a little scared when you jump like this. 🥵🥵🥵

Second brush, Nobita Kami's imagination is too big, the author is awesome 🤭

A message to the author: You can write about Nobita who travels through time and becomes a god. This setting is really amazing. This book looks very comfortable in the early stages, but becomes very white in the middle and later stages. The integration of the two worlds and the love between children are too boring. The early settings are really eye-catching. Nobita Kami's setting is the most eye-catching.

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