Transmigrating, Starting with Mr. Vampire

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Um, I just read it and I have some comments that the author doesn't know whether to accept or not The first is that your cheating is too serious. Even if the article is good, you have to pay attention to it, otherwise it will fall apart easily. You probably don't know how to cheat until the later stage of writing The second is to pay attention. Although writing fantasy novels itself deviates from reality, just like the apprenticeship part, if you were the author, you would accept someone you have known for less than a few minutes as your apprentice. No, at least you can check the other person's character after a while, and you are not so hasty in accepting apprentices. The third is that the pace is too fast. According to this writing method, it is estimated that more than ten chapters will constitute one world. There are many old bookworms nowadays, and few people will like such a fast pace. The fourth is the issue of harem. There can be two or three female protagonists, but never write about love at first sight, nor one for each world, humanoid self-propelled cannon?

Interesting. Just too little. There are 30 chapters left to prepare for a few days. By the way, what is this thing?

The second chapter is really about trying to persuade him to quit. Why not get a Douluo? It's really about lowering his level!

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I have to complain about a few poisonous points in this book. The first is that since the martial soul is a twin martial spirit, you should consider the type of martial spirit. Since you choose to cultivate immortality, you should not choose a firearm-type martial spirit. Bows and arrows or flying swords are better than firearms. The animal martial spirit has intelligence and is also a major poisonous point. I don't know how much you like Douluo, the author. Even if you write a martial spirit, you should write one attack and one defense. It might as well be a different martial spirit. For example, it would be great if your martial soul does not need a soul ring but is instead fused with special materials. Later, it can be transformed from virtual reality into your spiritual treasure of enlightenment. The second poisonous point is that the division of realms in the world is too collapsed. A top-notch master can compete with a master in the alchemy stage. Anyway, I personally think that a world-class master in martial arts is equivalent to a master in the late stage of Qi training, and an innate martial arts is equivalent to a monk in the foundation-building stage. The third poisonous point is that it is not equal to the realm division of the Zhuxian world. The realm of Jindan is equal to the ninth level of Yuqing, the Nascent Soul behind it is equal to the realm of Shangqing, and the Taiqing realm of Daoxuan is equal to the realm of transformation. So what the hell? 😰 Then you might as well practice Qi , Foundation Building, and Heartbeat are divided into Yuqing realm, Jiedan, Jindan, Nascent Soul are equal to the realm of Shangqing, Transformation to God, Fusion, Mahayana is equal to Taiqing realm (of course the author said that the techniques in the world of Zhuxian are not perfect, Taiqing realm can only be practiced to about Transformation to God or Fusion). The fourth poisonous point is that the worlds traveled through are too messy. Since the protagonist is mainly cultivating immortality, he should mainly go to those fairy tales or fantasy worlds. In the early stage, if you are weak, you can also go to the martial arts world. But what are you doing in this technological and comic world? This situation is so disturbing.

The author keeps updating more than ten times a day for a month. I will introduce my old watch to you 🤓

The Dan Jiedi monk went to the world of martial arts and fought on par with a top-notch master. Admire and admire. The realm collapsed into a mess. Withdrew and said goodbye to you. You could just get through the qi training period and at least get past it. The author should write like this. In the later period, the protagonist becomes an immortal and becomes an ancestor. His combat power is not as high as the martial arts innate, so he can just find someone in the innate realm to compete with him. That's what makes it interesting.

Does the author have any misunderstandings about immortality and martial arts? A pill-forming monk and Xuan Ming were fighting back and forth? Is it because I have Jiuyang body protection that I am not afraid of Xuanming Zhenqi?

The author is completely enjoying himself, writing about the world casually, sometimes martial arts, sometimes immortals, and cities. There are also problems with the setting of combat power. The funniest thing is that he still uses the Douluo system.