Transmigrating from Wudang

Why do all the protagonists who transmigrate into the world of "The Heaven Sword and Dragon Saber" want to take Zhao Min as their concubine? A ruthless and bloodthirsty Mongol princess, she imprisoned various sects, severed the fingers of their masters, massacred Shaolin, nearly assassinated Zhang Sanfeng, and almost wiped out Wudang.

These days, people writing fanfiction are fucking amazing. They dare to write without even having read the original work. Please, can't you at least do your homework before writing? Read the original work. Don't you even know the order in which the characters appear?

Does the Yuanhong Sword have any connection whatsoever with the Demon Blade Village?

I subscribed to the whole thing just to see you write an unfinished novel? 😤😤😤

It's not that others are hiring online trolls; it's that you genuinely lack logical thinking. Take the protagonist, for example. He's already transmigrated and has a system, yet he still doesn't believe in this or that. If he transmigrated to a high-level fantasy world, wouldn't he still not believe in gods and monsters? Then, author, you wouldn't need to write anything further.

Whether it's *Tianlong* or *Under One*, they're okay for killing time when you're bored, but *Zhu Xian* is truly off-putting. Honestly, a big reason why novels in the *multiverse* genre are so popular is that they fill in the gaps in the original novels. *Tianlong* alone fills in some of those gaps, and then you also deliberately create some plot points that feel regrettable.

Consider those two coins as dog food. Just one thing: a Grandmaster of the Innate Realm, practically a cultivator, could defeat Cheng Kun in one move and fight the Xuanming Elders to a standstill. Are you suggesting this Grandmaster is some kind of master like Lei Lei or Yan Fang? Six layers of Pure Yang Technique, diluted Dragon Essence, and Spirit Peaches—were all bought from Pinduoduo? How much did Pinduoduo give you? I'll double it on Tmall.

The first few volumes were alright, although some chapters were poorly written. But your creativity made them readable. Both *Tian Long Ba Bu* and *Yi Ren* were decent; the characters were well-developed and their personalities were respectable. However, the later volume, *Zhu Xian*, became incomprehensible. It was both haphazard and cumbersome, leaving the reader confused.

Honestly, *The Heaven Sword and Dragon Saber* is too formulaic; many parts that should have been detailed weren't. For example, when the five major sects went to Wudang, the protagonist casually revealed the secrets of the Heaven Sword and Dragon Saber, and nobody cared?! And when Xianyu Tong's scandals were exposed, no one was surprised.

I only started reading it after I saw it was a completed novel. Turns out it's about entering the palace! 🥴 It just ended before I knew it.