The Shadow Walker Across Worlds

The skill system and combat power classification really need some attention. Instead of listing combat skills at levels 1, 2, 3, and 4, it would be better to write "beginner," "intermediate," "advanced," and "master." Adding parenthetical descriptions to each level, such as "Your combat skills have reached the initial stage," "You've entered the inner circle," or "You've mastered them," would be…

So now, the "Infinite Flow" genre is just a reskinned martial arts novel? No matter what it is, it's all about practicing martial arts? What's the point? Isn't it just about controlling and absorbing unknown energy from food and the universe, circulating it within the body, compressing it, and through quantitative change leading to qualitative change, forming the so-called Golden Core and Nascent…

When writing time-travel novels, there should be a clear focus on the real-world and the world depicted in movies or TV shows. Currently, novels tend to have a very balanced emphasis on both. It's so frustrating to read, I always want to skip chapters. People tend to focus more on the time-travel world and less on the real world.

Everything else is secondary; the main problem is the way they expose their abilities in real life—it's incredibly toxic. If you don't lack money or power, can't you just develop your abilities steadily? Why not get an IQ test and then pursue scientific research?

I couldn't stand reading the second volume anymore. I just deleted another novel, also a multiverse story, which I ended up writing about doing charity work and almost died... Now there's this guy fighting with a system. Why can't they just give me a clean, unfiltered system and write a proper story instead of causing all this trouble?

When we got to Chapter 25, the protagonist chose energy points, and that individual option was fine. But since there were better, more suitable options, why not choose them? In the multiverse and time-travel genres, what's most important? It's not immortality, nor cultivation techniques, but intelligence. Especially when you lack the resources to overpower others. Intelligence comes first.

The book has been deleted. The stories are completely unrelated, and removing the realistic plot wouldn't feel out of place. The author intended to make it more profound, but the problem is that the infinite flow genre is inherently a lighthearted, enjoyable read. Adding philosophical reflections here is not only incongruous but also superfluous.

To be honest, the protagonist has too many attachments, which is not suitable for the transmigrator setting. The more relatives you have, the more things you have to do in real life. The more things you have to do, the more time you spend in real life. The more time you spend, the more times you'll have to pretend to be cool and then get embarrassed.

At the beginning, you need to write something incredibly popular to attract readers. Later, you can switch to older TV dramas or movies, preferably TV dramas, like the once-popular "Snowflake Goddess Dragon." These are things people have seen but forgotten over time; if you write well, they'll definitely become a hit. Actually, it mainly comes down to writing style.

The real-world plots in the "All Heavens Flow" genre are truly boring. At the beginning, they might have some connection to the protagonist, but they're not essential. In the early stages, when the protagonist is weak, it's okay to fill a few chapters, but by the mid-to-late stages, the protagonist has already destroyed stars and created the world, and the scenes of him being pressured to get married by his parents and shopping with his girlfriend are just too disgusting.