The Shadow Walker Across Worlds

This skill setting and combat power division really require careful attention. Fighting skill level 1234 is not as good as junior high, high school or master level. Add some brackets to describe each level. For example, your fighting skills have already begun to show off, you have mastered the martial arts, you are proficient in it, etc. Isn't this more interesting, stylish, educated and less embarrassing than 1234? Also, the setting of first, second and third level martial arts is super awkward. According to the way you write it, if a third level person encounters a second level person, they can't run away. They will definitely lose and will definitely die. If there is no suspense in such a battle, why fight? If a low-level martial artist encounters a high-level warrior, he will just surrender and kill himself. For example, when Kou Zhongziling encountered so many masters in the early stage, why should he fight or escape? He can surrender after comparing the number of levels, so the force cannot be like this Description: Some martial arts are difficult to get started, but getting started requires innate skills, such as the Immortality Art. Some martial arts are easier to get started, but the strength and agility bonus are not bad. Therefore, Kou Zhongziling's early innate state cannot beat those acquired masters who have been immersed in martial arts for 20 to 30 years, because he really loses in terms of energy, strength, agility, etc. This way you write it is more beautiful and reasonable, instead of knowing the result as soon as two people meet to compare levels.

Is Infinite Stream just a martial arts reskin now? No matter what it is, you just want to practice martial arts? What's the point? Isn't it just that by controlling and absorbing the unknown energy contained in food and heaven and earth, it runs in the body, performs a large cycle in the body, compresses it, causes qualitative changes through quantitative changes, and forms the so-called golden elixir Yuanying? Can I find this energy through scientific means? What's so great about using energy? The writing of "Swordsman" "Double Dragon" and "The Condor God" is so bad. I even wrote it and I vomited. How well written it was on FB before it was released. Suddenly it came to Swordsman. "Gun Fighting Converts to Martial Arts?" ! The author's next world is the Condor Shooting, Tianlong, Double Dragon, Low Martial Arts, Ming Dynasty, Yuan Dynasty, Middle Martial Arts, Tang Dynasty and Sui Dynasty, High Martial Arts, Da Qin, Qin Shi Mingyue, Wu Geng Ji, and then turn to fantasy? Jin Yong Gu Long finished writing The Perfect Tomb of the Great Emperor of the Galaxy, covering the sky? Finally, he became the Perfect Perfect Luo Jinxian, consolidated his own timeline, became the master of heaven and earth, and controlled the consciousness of the world? Or become the way of heaven in the world? If you write like this, I might as well go to the fantasy channel and watch it...

When writing novels that travel through different worlds, the focus should be on the real world and the film and television world. Nowadays, the reality of novels and the world of film and television are very average. I'm so kind-hearted that I always want to skip chapters. When talking about the world, I always write more about the world of time travel and less about reality. It would be better to focus on world adventure if I focus on something like Samsara Paradise. I rarely write about the real world. In fact, it's good to write about original worlds. Nowadays, famous film and television works and animation works are almost finished. It's so hard to write well. In fact, there is no creativity that can stop us from coming up with ideas. (Write less about China, focus on Hollywood, be careful of the 404 master 😁😁)

，， There is no shortage of money or power. Can't we develop steadily? Wouldn't it be okay to take an IQ test and then do scientific research? It's not like there have never been such super geniuses in history. If they had to be exposed in front of the whole world, they would just point at themselves and say, I have super powers and I am special. Even if it was exposed, a few small private research institutes sent some people out, and after the counterattack, they were exposed to the media in various ways. Knowing that your pregnant wife is surrounded by relatives and friends, you still travel around the world, take so many dangerous measures, and co-operate with the American police, just because you are afraid that the US government will not detain you. In short, what I wrote above is quite good, but it is extremely poisonous from the moment the ability is exposed.

When I saw the second volume, I really couldn't stand it anymore. I just deleted it and it was also written by Zhutianliu. I wrote about doing charity work and almost died... Now another person appears who is fighting the system. Why can't we use the whole whiteboard system and write stories well to get rid of all these moths?

When I read Chapter 25, Pig's Knuckle chose the energy point, and it was no problem to meet this separate option. But since there is something better, something more suitable. Why not? Zhutianliu, what is the most important thing about crossing the flow? It's not immortality, it's not the skills, it's the brain. Especially without the capital to push horizontally. The brain comes first. Reasonably pave the way and lay out the road ahead. I will add more later.

The book has been deleted. There is no connection between the story and the story. If the real-life plot is deleted, there will be no sense of violation. The author wants to make it more profound. But the problem is that Infinite Streaming is originally the tone of a refreshing article. You are writing your thoughts here, and you are not talking about it, and you are superfluous.

To be honest, the protagonist has too many concerns and is not suitable for the setting of a time traveler. When there are more relatives, there will be more things in reality. When there are more things, there will be more time in reality. When there is more time, there will be more cases of pretending to be 13 and slapping someone in the face. The more pretending to be 13, the more beauties will like the protagonist. When there are more beauties, all the men you meet will be enemies. When there are too many enemies, you will start to pretend to be 13 and slap you in the face again. Then the plot started to become cliche, or boring, and finally made me die of poison! ! ! ! !

At the beginning, you have to write something that is a big hit to attract people to come and watch it. Later, you can replace it with old TV series or old movies from the past, preferably TV series, such as "Snowflake Goddess Dragon" which was a big hit in the past. You have watched it and then almost forgot about it. If you write better, it will definitely become a hit. In fact, the main problem is writing style. Why do some people write so many people when others write like this? Or someone else has written something new, like those who follow the plot, why should I read your book? I can memorize the plot, so I would rather spend money to read your book than watch a TV series.

The real-life plot in Zhutenliu is really boring. In the beginning, it may have some relationship with the protagonist, but it is not necessary. In the early stage, the protagonist is weak and can only make do with a few chapters. By the middle and late stages, the protagonist has completely destroyed the star and created the world. In reality, he has to be forced to get married by his parents, and the scene when he goes shopping with his girlfriend is too disgusting.