A Long Life Across Ten Thousand Worlds

Well, although I don't reward much, I still want a more refined one 🐷

Well, the idea comes from "Naruto: Naruto?"

After seeing Global Martial Arts, I didn't want to read it. I only read a few chapters of the original book before abandoning it.

I voted, but your update should give me some support.

I, monthly ticket, request, add refinement.

I also want a cumshot. . .

I gave up the book, the author is great. Your writing style is good, and there are no poisonous descriptions like pupils shrinking, licking lips, being shocked, etc. But the author, your plot concept is too rubbish. Many plots, at least in my opinion, are not good. When traveling through time in other novels, it is most taboo to follow the development of the original drama. This will easily lead to the protagonist's failure and make readers feel that the protagonist is rubbish. Finally, cheers to the author, I wish you more success as you write more and more readers~

The author goes to the night bar. Although the author writes slowly, I have given you the monthly recommendation tickets.

Originally, it felt a little interesting during the Soul-Severing Gun section, but it went completely wrong later on. The ghost can understand it, after all, it makes sense that the reborn person has some trump cards, but what the hell is the Condor Shooting Chapter? The whole article is full of incomprehensible things. What else is there to say about world consciousness? Please, Lao Jin is dead and you are writing the book now. Isn't your author the world consciousness? I'm afraid you don't have any ideas and just want to copy it from the book, right? You directly bring Guo Yang back to the village for training at the beginning, and then come up with a plot about reviving China. Believe it or not, readers can give you a few more monthly tickets?

Emmm, let me tell you, there is a novel called Naruto: The Living Kumi