Swallowed Star: Lord of All Things

Luo Feng's dog-licking, Luo Feng's opportunities are not touched, and Luo Feng is compensated and apologized for even the smallest thing. To be honest, it doesn't matter if you don't touch Luo Feng's opportunities. You can write them separately. Luo Feng has her own opportunities, and the protagonist has his own. I just want to go my own way and let everything take its own course, but I have to write about the protagonist. I met Luo Feng's opportunity, and then I deliberately didn't give it to the protagonist. This feeling of deliberately trying to please, and then I wrote a lot of reasons why I didn't want it. It should be clear what the real reasons were? What is Luo Feng's opportunity? God-king-level inheritances like the Star Tower and Duan Donghe have surpassed the cycle of reincarnation in the entire universe. There are also divine kings such as the Body Seizing Realm Beast, which are untouchable in the entire universe.

The path of faith is not advisable, don't take this path

Let me tell you my opinions and complaints about this book First of all, this book is indeed a rare masterpiece among Swallowing Starry Sky fan fiction. I have read quite a lot of Swallowing Starry Sky fan fiction, and there are only a few that I can insist on reading. This book is really well written. It basically follows the setting of the original work, and does not follow Luo Feng's growth trajectory. Instead, it has its own new things, such as the Xuan Yuan Technique, which also adds to the world view of the original work. I have also been looking forward to the original plot of Origin Continent. But it may be that the author has no background reference. Judging from the recent update, he plans to directly become the Lord of Chaos God King and skip the continent of origin. However, this is also a common problem in this type of fan fiction. It is rare to write about the continent of origin, or jump directly to the later stage of Lord Snow Eagle, which is not a big problem. In short, this book is very good from the beginning to the end of the universe sea. The main reason is that the introduction of the enemy Yin Yue Emperor is too blunt and inexplicable. It is like a real person seeing kittens and puppies around and suddenly kicking them deliberately. I don't know if other people feel the same way. In fact, if you really can't write it, it would be a perfect ending to transcend to the Origin Continent with Luo Feng. I will continue to support this book until I witness Lin Yan's ending. I'm also looking forward to the author's next book!

After finishing it, it is indeed very well written, and I feel like I am reading the original novel. Let's talk about some feelings: 1. The protagonist did not intercept the main opportunities of Hu Luofeng: the inheritance of the Fallen Ink Star, the Golden Horned Behemoth that took away the body, the Secret Book of Nine Tribulations - Star Tower, and the inheritance of the East River. He only intercepted some insignificant things, such as: taking the Rock Divine Water in advance, killing the Purple Bell King in advance, and taking the inheritance of Jie Fanzi in advance (taking it back and filling it with a big one). It should be said that it had no bad influence on Luo Feng's growth, and also provided some help. Overall, the protagonist of the original work is quite friendly. 2. Compared to Luo Feng, Luo Feng pursues the heart of the strong, and the protagonist not only has the heart of the strong, but also has the heart of fraternity. For such a righteous person like Luo Feng, Lin Yan is actually much more positive than him! (He just likes to pretend too much) It is really thought-provoking for a strong man to have power and endless glory and wealth, but then lose his goal and inevitably fall into degradation. The protagonist really intervenes and helps the earth much more than Luo Feng. Not only that, he is even determined to eliminate the backward slave trade and propose a new order for the universe! Simply! Awesome! 3. It makes very reasonable use of some foreshadowing and inspiration from the original work to expand the plot. It is very clever, such as Jianhe Luo, Tianliu Fan, and the first two inheritors mentioned in the Star Tower inheritance. The protagonist not only found out who it was, but also actually dug up the treasure of one of them. It was not only clever, but also seemed reasonable. Another example is the hole that Tomato forgot to fill in in the original novel: Qishen Temple. I feel that the author should have filled it in. One final point (I say it for Luo Feng): In the original work, Luo Feng was originally the strongest genius in human history. However, the protagonist Lin Yan actually hung Luo Feng up and beat him from beginning to end. From beginning to end, his strength was hundreds of times and thousands of times his. Kedi is a genius, he has always been the benchmark of genius in the original work. The world leader kills the king at the peak, Luo Feng is the protagonist of the original work, with the halo of the protagonist, the world master kills the king at the limit, that's enough! Where is Lin Yan? It's not enough for the Realm Master to kill the Invincible King in an instant. Isn't it enough for a high-level venerable to kill him in an instant? Defeat the Overlord of the Universe! Let me go, what does Luo Feng mean? Luo Feng has a clone of the golden-horned giant beast? Sorry, I have a Green Line Insect-eating clone to crush you! Demon killer clan clone? Sorry, I have a blood clone, I will kill you instantly! Is the spirit body of Youhai's clone invincible? I have a clone of the Ancestral Tree, my divine body is not weaker than yours, and I can self-destruct infinitely, do you accept it? Finally, the original Luo Feng's battle to become famous, killing 6,000 cosmic lords in one instant, the highlight of his life, was changed away by the author😔 Oh, it's really a bit sour to see Luo Feng, the brilliant and invincible hero in the original, being crushed like this. . . Of course, acid is acid, but I have to say that the author did write well.

In the world of Devouring Stars, no one can keep up with Luo Feng without cheating, because Tomato keeps cheating Luo Feng.

After thinking about it, I deleted my previous book review. My previous review seemed too much like I was trolling this book... In addition to the unbearable but insignificant problem of the realm of body skills, there are also conflicts between the original part and the original work. Apart from these, as a second creation, it is a very good fan, and it is worth reading.

How can I put it this way? Although this book has a single heroine, it would be a pity not to have the heroine of the Kingdom of Evening Star. At the same time, there are too many opportunities. I suggest you come up with a number of mergers and then look for awesome treasures, or just go through them in one stroke. Looking for opportunities to write them one by one is really too boring to read.

This is one of the best "Swallowing Stars" fanfics in my opinion. I hope the author can update more while maintaining the quality. I just found it the day before yesterday. I read it yesterday and haven't updated it today!

The author's writing style is a bit like an old eunuch from before! Don't let investors send you special products!

Come on, I feel the writing is great👍🏻

Very good, keep updating.

Is this a review control? Most of them are good reviews. To be honest, I really can't stand it anymore. I've read nearly 60 chapters and there are a lot of bad reviews and a lot of likes. Why, there are so few bad reviews. It's a good movie with a bloody battle background, written by the author, it's impossible to read. 40 Of the 60 chapters are related to scientific research. He created a behind-the-scenes organization that could not be matched by any country, and dared and fearfully launched unrest in a country's base city. This black hand organization is also very powerful and advocates the integration of animal genes into human evolution. First of all, the first point is why I came to watch the swallowing fans and why I like to watch swallowing and his fans. I don't like his background training system and passionate battles. The previous ones directly persuaded a group of people to retreat. Second point, do you think it is possible that such an awesome behind-the-scenes organization has not been discovered by anyone? You treat the God of War Palace as nothing, and Hong and Lei Shen are just decorations. You can also blatantly launch unrest in a national base city, and no one is in charge of it. It is not a forced indoctrination. Author, it's okay for you to write an original plot, but you have to fit in with the general background and core content of Swallowed. If you feel that it doesn't satisfy your creative talent, create an original novel. Don't use the background of Swallowed to swindle others. I think the original plot you wrote is okay if it's not in the context of devouring, but once it's set in the context of devouring, it feels disharmonious. I had to endure it until now, but I couldn't stand it any longer. I wanted to speak but couldn't, so I had no choice but to order a chapter from the back before I could speak. Forget it, I won't read it anymore. I hope the author can see it and make progress. It's not that you can't be original when writing fan fiction, but you have to inherit his core ideas and what's really attractive about him.

It's a bit forced to sensationalize. Also, I don't understand why I have such feelings for the human race in the early stage Devouring the original work I remember mentioning more than once that if the human race goes too far, Luo Feng will lead the Earth Line to judge the human race. Luo Feng's feelings for the human race are also slowly growing. Those who have been cultivated have a process of growth It's better for you to think about the human race in the early stage Whose human race is the human race? It belongs to the Lord of the Universe and the Lord of the Universe. They are the ruling class. You have not yet become a capitalist, but you will already think about the capitalists.

I watched it several times but couldn't stop watching it. The fantasy world view of "Swallowing Starry Sky" does not need to talk about the feelings of family and country.

I never expected that the protagonist would take the path of faith. Are you preparing to become the enemy of the universe? Wait until Origin Continent is upgraded to Origin Public Enemy? Everyone praises my name and believes in me as the truth. The path of faith can be said to be the most domineering path. Those who have watched Devouring have probably also watched Snow Eagle. Think of the Holy Lord in Snow Eagle. Do you have any doubts about the faith within human beings? If you move, that is a struggle for power. Maybe subjectively you have no idea of ​​a struggle for power, but objectively, those who believe in you regard you as the truth, which has resulted in the fact of seizing power. If you want faith from outside the human race, it is true that the enemy of the universe has not escaped. Any ethnic group with a bit of blood would rather be exterminated than take the initiative to believe in you. The Way of Faith What is this? This is the ultimate version of soul slavery! Humanity will not allow this kind of thing. The power of faith comes from the core essence of living beings. Those who believe are no longer complete living beings. There is no possibility of transcendence, and their cultivation will never exceed those of those who believe. Believers are completely deprived of future possibilities and free will. The way of faith, from the perspective of Chinese moral concepts, can be said to be a completely evil way, an evil way that everyone can find and punish. If the protagonist practices faith, in my opinion, the previous character creation will completely collapse, because the protagonist is not a person who believes in the law of the jungle and does whatever it takes to become stronger. I can't imagine that a person who has just given up the Nine Tribulations and the training of the God King and has made great progress and is extremely confident would ignore the cancer of the Way of Faith and practice the Way of Faith in order to practice faster

After reading the free part and ordering a few chapters, I was speechless. The protagonist, Jian Tianbu, has no problem ensuring judicial fairness, but what level are you at? Just the God of War. If you can't make progress, there's nothing much you can do if you just want to have a clear idea. But if you're stuck, you've gone from not being a warrior to a high-level God of War in just 5 months. Your progress is so fast! If you wait a few more years, can't you do it until you reach the planetary level or even the star level, and no one on earth can kill you? And what happens after you kill those war gods who committed crimes? At least on the surface they are still protecting their country. After you kill them, who will resist the pressure of the monster invasion? Of course this is not critical, but it has some impact. Then, if someone offers a treasure and asks Hong or Thor to stop you once, or a monster invades, and Hong asks you to stop killing, will you do it? If you don't follow the instructions, you might die, if you do, it's a joke. You can say that I tried my best, but if you use this time to practice and become the number one in the world, from top to bottom, plus the people who support you, it is just a matter of one sentence. On the contrary, there is a lot of pressure to do it now, and it may not be possible to succeed. In short, it's just one sentence - morning, too early! Why are you so worried about cheating?

In addition to the Earth chapter, which is very well written, the subsequent plot is completely a super member version of the original route, with a lot of cool and shocking routines interspersed. Although the writing is not bad, is it interesting to write like this? You really bully me for having devouring feelings, otherwise I would really not be able to stand it in the middle and later stages~

Beautiful and gentle

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It feels like it's not about not seizing the opportunity, but about risking one's life to give Luo Feng a chance. The protagonist has traveled through time, and it's normal to have a butterfly effect. The protagonist insists on making up for all the things Luo Feng deserves in the original work. Dragging three people away by himself is quite uncomfortable to watch, as if he has three fathers. The writing elsewhere is quite good.

This book is not as good as you say, or has the author deleted the review?

I just read Chapter 18, and to be honest, I can't quite get into it. I don't know why so many people praise this book (this is also the reason why I picked it up again after abandoning it several times). I feel that the author's rendering of emotional drama is a bit forced and sensational. I personally don't like this kind of deliberate sensationalism very much recently. Let's talk about the two things that I find most awkward. One is the plot setting: In the early stage, the author hopes to promote the growth of the protagonist through the conflicts between different national organizations, ordinary people and wealthy families, and escape from the growth route of the original work. But this can easily be written into two things, one is a cool urban novel called King of Soldiers "pretend to be a pig and eats a tiger", and the other is a refreshing fantasy novel called Long Aotian's "infinitely leapfrogging monsters". Unfortunately, I saw both scenes that were quite blunt. And especially since the power system of the original work is already quite complete, this kind of writing is particularly easy to cause people to frown. For example, the ninth level of S-level body skills (the highest) turns out that the body skills are still at a low level. For example, an intermediate warrior relies on a firearm to kill a senior warrior at close range within ten meters. For example, a senior warrior breaks the record set by a senior warrior... (In my personal opinion, if your speed and reaction are not at the level of a warrior, such as a fifty-meter moving target, How can you surpass high-level warriors while moving and reacting? ) (I admit the power of aiming talent, but shooting freely in the face of a herd does not mean dancing around with a gun) The second is the golden finger setting: The protagonist can cheat, but the settings must be clear, and do not swallow the settings. For example, the source of soul points, is it the essence collected from the soul or some kind of corpse after death, or is it simply the currency issued by the system? (Later, the cue shows that the protagonist's middle-level warriors will not give soul points to monsters that kill low-level warriors. That should be the latter. I think this setting should be made clear from the beginning) For another example, in the thinking palace, there is a bomb-dismantling section in the early stage. The protagonist can actually simulate the explosion after cutting off the fuse of the bomb when he has only one external understanding of the bomb. This is no longer a thinking simulation, this is completely a future vision based on unknown information! (And the author is very greedy and hopes to create a perfect protagonist, but even when Tomato wrote about Luo Feng, Luo Feng was always a pursuer, and he only focused on martial arts. I didn't hear that Luo Feng even made a lot of money from stock trading) (On the other hand, looking at the protagonist, at the beginning I practiced sword-fighting, practiced shooting, and then went to make medicine. Then I discovered a new method of extracting drugs, shocked the congressmen and shocked the country. This is a typical cool plot. It may be a cool point for some readers who like short stories, but for me, it kind of affects the main plot. The look and feel and the sense of involvement with the protagonist, to be honest, it is better to just open an invincible novel. The previous things can be applied just as well, and are more suitable) There are many strange things that I really want to complain about, but they may affect the feelings of new readers (here to the author) The author apologizes, but I really want to discuss with readers why they like this book and what they think about these things); secondly, the author has written so many words, and it is impossible for me to revise the previous things just because I said a few words, which actually makes no sense. So why do you like reading this book? Can you leave a message to discuss it (´-ω-`)

What is the author writing in the early stage? There is no God of War in the imperial army in Swallowing Starry Sky? A monster that is suspected to be a God of War sneaks into the army, so how much attention is paid to it? It's equivalent to the reality that a spy with a bomb sneaks into the army, but the army doesn't pay attention at all.

Nice writing👍Please keep updating more

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When it comes to faith, it's a thankless task. The character of the protagonist was so well done before, but suddenly running to collect faith not only ruins the character but also disgusts the readers. Why do you say this? Whether it is in Devouring or Snow Eagle, there is the term soul slavery. Soul slavery essentially means that people treat the user as the only one and have the highest respect. What about faith? Faith must truly worship it as a god, regard it as the highest, and treat it as the only one. In essence, faith is the same as soul slavery. If the protagonist wants to pursue the path of faith, it is equivalent to saying to the Lord of Chaos City, I want to enslave all humans. How do you think the Lord of Chaos City will react? Even if it is changed and the faith is changed to a stronger faith, or for the rise of the human race or other slogans, the protagonist's name must be linked to it, otherwise how to collect faith? As readers, we really don't want to see the protagonist collecting so-called beliefs. We all know that beliefs can distort people's will, even if it is twisted in a good direction, and this is the most disgusting part of the Devouring novel. Finally, if you really write about the protagonist collecting faith, many readers will abandon it, including me, regardless of whether they believe in the protagonist or not.

Not specific to this book I read the comment section and had some thoughts To be honest, after reading so many Devouring fandoms, it's rare to see a protagonist with a system who has the will, determination, and confidence to reach the top. It's not that he can't fawn over the original protagonist, but he has to have a degree. Luo Feng can become the Lord of Luo City, but if you, the protagonist, don't have the confidence to lead the system, then what can you do?                                                                                Most of the fics feel the same, basically taking care of the original protagonist. Although they are all going their own way and have their own opportunities, they are too deliberate in giving up the opportunities of the original protagonist, or the setting is so deliberate that the word "licking" can often be seen in book reviews. Logically speaking, you are the protagonist of this book. What I want to see is your growth and seeing different and new things, not what the original protagonist does. The more famous the book, the more the fan fiction will be like this, such as Dou Po, Douluo, etc. The same goes for anime fan fiction.         ，， Then I took a look at what book friends said about grabbing resources. To be honest, I feel that I can give some to others while ensuring personal development, but I can't just ignore the opportunity of the original protagonist. And the reason is that the general trend cannot be changed, and there is nothing else that I can't use. To be honest, it's impossible that I can't use it. Moreover, in so many plots in which I have never seen the Golden Horned Behemoth, someone directly kills or converts it into his own resources. Basically, they are given to Luo Feng and the reasons are "very interesting". To be honest, you can guess the plot.

After reading dozens of chapters, they were all about romance. There was not even a single strong man left in a military region. How could we go to a ruins and pack up all the strong men in the country? The dual S-level skills were still at the basic level after being trained to the ninth level. Upgrading an E-level skill was said to be a palace of thinking. In the end, I could still fantasize about unpacking and trying out the threads one by one. Isn't this predicting the future? You solved a problem that has been researched for several years in other people's research institutes in a few hours. Do you think that other people are all fools and can only marvel at it? A look at your file shows that you have never been exposed to this aspect at all. You also said that you can't use sword skills that you haven't learned before. Isn't this even more outrageous? The plot is unnecessary, the supporting characters have no brains, and they are just pretending to be for the protagonist to pick up girls.

It's really outrageous, that Memory Palace is still a Thinking Palace or something like that. Directly simulate bomb defusing? The main reason is that he doesn't know which wire to cut will explode. And then he creates a bomb in his own head to cut the thread? The prerequisite for your trial and error is that you first have to have a correct answer before you can try it out, right? Either you know the correct answer yourself, or your memory hall knows the answer. It's just like an exam. You don't know the answer to a fill-in-the-blank question, and then you create an exact fill-in-the-blank question in your mind, and then fill in the answer in your own mind, but you don't know the correct answer. Then what the hell are you filling in your mind? If you don't know the answer, how can you tell whether what you filled in is right or wrong?

It's really well written. Has potential, maintains standards and is fully booked