The Planar Elevator

I strongly suggest that future editor's picks should clearly indicate which editor recommended each book. This awful book has been recommended to me three times already! The writing is terrible, the sentences are incoherent, there are numerous typos, inconsistencies, and the plot is a complete mess, utterly illogical. It's worse than a primary school student's composition! Absolutely toxic!

Those who wish to travel through time, please report in! Upon arrival, you'll receive a Time-Space Ring. Successful applicants will also receive a side-effect-free cheat ability and a pair of beautiful spirit artifacts that provide warmth and comfort.

The system is a mess, forcibly hindering the protagonist's development. Once you get into the plot, you can't remember a single thing. The talk of all-around development is just a forced attempt to promote Dragon Ball; it focuses on physical and spiritual growth but ignores the brain. Both the protagonist and supporting characters are idiots. After reading so many novels over the years, this is the first one I absolutely can't stand.

For example, using realistic terms like "Shanghai" or "Shanghai Bund," try to replace them with homophones or initials. There are many examples of this, but because there were so many such terms, they were blocked.

First, the real-world plot is too monotonous; the protagonist transmigrates after only a few chapters. After all, many people enjoy seeing the protagonist show off and live a wonderful life in the real world. Second: Add some romance, one or two female leads are enough, it can spice up the content of the book, but I don't like the appearance of a spoiled female lead.

This book is truly speechless... In the beginning, the protagonist is almost killed, and he claims it's an enemy he must avenge, constantly clamoring to destroy them across countless dimensions. Later, when the protagonist becomes stronger, the enemy, forced to return what belongs to the protagonist, abruptly says, "It wasn't a big deal."

They are nothing but ants in the Dragon Ball universe, yet this book can rival gods and even defeat Buddha. This is utter garbage and a serious slander against China. Boycott this trash book!

I was in a reading slump, but I persisted, even violating my reading principles by reading a little further, before finally deciding to give up. It was disgusting. All the powerful families in the book had compound surnames, making it unwatchable in real life. It was utterly brain-dead. Later on, everyone was cultivating immortality, constantly boasting about their incredible chakra.

The story begins with a melodramatic plot: the protagonist is the son of a prominent family in modern society, but he is slapped by his father and kicked out of the family, becoming a loser. Let's start by digging a huge melodramatic hole. The aristocratic family is called the Dongfang Family, and the protagonist is named Dongfang Yu. It's incredibly embarrassing.

The first problem is that the protagonist's intelligence occasionally drops; he can't think of things that ordinary people can think of. The second major flaw is the protagonist's character design: a wealthy heir. This type of character works in female-oriented fiction but is unpopular in male-oriented fiction, lacking relatability.