The Planar Elevator

Does your book praise Dragon Ball too highly? . . What I see now is that basically a piece of Dragon Ball Soy Sauce can defeat Guanyin or Tathagata. . .

Wow, I can't help but complain! ! ! This book explodes from around 12 time travels when dealing with parents' affairs! ! ! You an elevator! ! ! Elevator! ! ! Once a month! ! ! Then the cycle is one day! ! ! No matter how long it takes you to travel back from time to time, it will only be one day when you come back! ! ! How come you actually have new breakthroughs every time you come back? Will your technology be innovative after a day? You were gone for just one day! ! ! Is one day the same as if you've been gone for years? Really, let alone other things, after all, everyone has their own understanding when reading a book, and the author also has his own understanding, but! ! ! Doesn't your special code violate the rules? You were gone for just one day! ! ! It's not just a matter of days or months! ! ! Damn it, I really can't bear it anymore! ! ! Exploded from start to finish! ! ! !

After reading so many Joten-ryu, I couldn't stand it until halfway through this one. There are too many poisonous points, the protagonist's IQ is not good, and the story frame is too stingy. It's very awkward to read, especially the modern dungeon. As soon as the modern dungeon arrives, things start to show up, as if it's a joke. Don't talk about copies, the real world in the novel is just like children playing house, because the family has to score points and then decide how to allocate resources. In order to protect their children, they marry off their daughters and prevent them from returning to the country, and then frame their sons for rape so that they can clean up and leave the house. Such a big family allows the son to clean up and leave the house like this. The son also has to work as a hotel security guard with a monthly salary of 2,000 to earn living expenses. The most outrageous thing is It's the main character's mother's side. Because her mother's family asked her father to marry into her family, the father wanted to prove himself, so he worked hard on his own. Then the mother has never visited her son and daughter in 20 years. The first time they met in 20 years was when the mother helped his father's competitor to defeat the father. The reason was that the father should lose so that he could marry into his own family. It really made me dizzy. The author understands maternal love. And the most outrageous thing is that the protagonist likes to pick up people. At the beginning, he brought scientists and other things to help him improve his ability and understanding, but later he started to bring back lolita and illegitimate children who had no relationship with him. Also, because there was a grandmother in the script who mistook the protagonist for his own son, the protagonist began to treat this grandmother as a real grandmother. The author really understands maternal love. He just found some random passerby to bring back what he had been missing since childhood. It was really unbearable.

I can't stand it anymore after seeing the third chapter. I don't know how you, a rookie who just got the martial arts secrets, can discuss with Jiumo Zhizhi. I just ask you, do you understand the secrets and do you know the Taoist lingo? Do you have a lot of research on Buddhism or do you know a lot about Kung Fu? Is it because you have a bigger brain and more jokes? It's so poisonous that it makes me sick to my stomach.

Sorry, I persisted for 87 chapters and 4 worlds. I really can't hold on anymore... Let me talk about my personal feelings In the first world, Tian Long Ba Bu, the protagonist has no system and mediocre qualifications. Among the many martial arts, he only learned the Lingbo Weibu of the Xiaoyao School, Beiming Shengong, Tianshan Plum Breaking Hand and Shaolin's Yi Jin Jing. In the second world, The Lord of the Rings: The Hobbit, the protagonist took a Supreme Lord of the Rings all the way through the plot, but it was still uncontrollable. The invisibility was restrained by the thermal imaging of the third world. The only dragon blood power obtained was also exhausted in the third world. The Lord of the Rings only helped the protagonist once. It was considered a cooperative relationship, and there was also a bottle of water of life, which was considered life-saving. In the third world, Biohazard, the protagonist only got a Red Queen, who had a poisonous point, brought a supporting character there, was betrayed, and then leaked the time-travel method to the indigenous people. In the end, a series of problems forced the Red Queen to return. The fourth world, Naruto, is also the place where I gave up. From beginning to end, I only had one sealing technique to seal items into scrolls, plus I got a Shisui eye from Beitenjin, which I got in exchange for the water of life, and Beitenjin also used it to control Yakushi Kabuto and bring it to the real world. In the real world, five years have passed in the four worlds, and the protagonist is more than five years older in reality. I have to consider the issue of life span and age. Sorry, I really can't bear it anymore. I have missed too many things. I have no choice but to give up. Maybe it is really not suitable for me. Every world goes by too fast. I swallowed it all and left without draining the benefits. Okay, farewell

It's really a scam. First of all, the elevator should be a unique secret of pig's feet. But I don't know when I started to have no scruples. I took people out (Yakushi Kabuto, Dr. Gallo?), Brought two people out and directly told the secret of the elevator without any reservation. Every time I came back, I had to explain the detailed experience of this time travel to them. I no longer had any scruples about entering the infinite horror world. I don't believe that the Lord God can't clean up the pig's feet. Secondly, the forced slap in the face is too harsh and makes people uncomfortable. There is no need to expose oneself or reveal things or powers that do not belong to this world, but the pig's feet have to be shown in front of others, and there is no need to participate in the plot. The pig's feet have to have a foot in it. You just need to secretly get what you need and go back, but in the end you have to forcefully participate in the plot and play hell mode.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                            The power system is chaotic, Pig's Feet wants to learn everything and practice everything, but is not good at anything. The cultivation system is determined to make people laugh. The Dragon Balls contain Qi as the main component, Gene Lock as the supplement, and other powers as the branches. Is this any different from before when it was not determined? None of them were discarded. I'm angry that this thing is so difficult to practice. In the early stage of Dragon Ball, Krillin, Tianjin Fan, and Piccolo were either geniuses or not practicing hard. As a result, none of them could keep up with Sun Wukong. In the later stage, they were not even qualified to participate in the war. Are pig's feet sure that they can persevere?

The ending is very confusing. He traveled through time in the elevator and became stronger. After becoming stronger, he went to the ancient world and was beaten to sleep until he saw his time travel in reality. Then how did he get to the elevator before he did time travel in the first place 😐

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The books I read during the book shortage were generally good. There were too many literary texts. I didn't even know that the fairy beans in Dragon Ball could be reborn after severed limbs. It's so shameful ("▔㉨▔) Khan. It's better to take a look at the systems in each work and not take it too seriously. After all, it's just an okay book, and it can't be regarded as a classic.

It is strongly recommended that in future editorial recommendations, each book should be marked with the recommendation from the editor in charge. This terrible book has been recommended to me three times! The writing is extremely poor, the sentences are not fluent, typos are frequent, the context is inconsistent, and the plot is a complete mess, not illogical at all. It's simply worse than a primary school student's composition! Extremely poisonous! When it was recommended to me for the first time, I patiently read fifty or sixty chapters. It was so poisonous that I vomited three liters of blood and deleted the book. However, it was recommended to me twice more! ! ! Your editor's recommendation slots are all sold casually for 1,000 each, right? There are so many good books out there that you don't recommend, but you recommend this kind of crappy white text to me every day?

The system is in a mess, it forcibly inhibits the development of the protagonist, and I can't even remember a single piece of shit when it comes to the plot. It talks about all-round development and forcibly promotes the Dragon Ball. It cultivates the body and the soul but not the brain. The protagonist and supporting characters are both mentally retarded. After reading novels for so many years, this is the first novel that I really can't stand.

Friends who want to time travel, please come and report. If you come, you will be given a space-time Qiankun ring. Those who succeed will also be given a gold finger with no side effects, and a pair of bed-warming beauty equipment and spirit systems will be given.

For example, for real-life words like Shanghai and Shanghai Beach, try to use homophones or letters instead. There are many people who write Kung Fu. As a result, there are too many such words and they are blocked.

One: The plot in the real world is too monotonous, and you can travel through time in just a few chapters. After all, many people like to see the protagonist showing off in the real world and living a wonderful life in reality. Two: Let's have some emotional drama. Just one or two female protagonists can spice up the content of the book, but we don't like the appearance of unruly female protagonists. Three: Isn't the protagonist seeking immortality? You can arrange for the protagonist to travel to the Legend of Double Dragons of the Tang Dynasty next time to obtain the Secret of Immortality and practice it. At any rate, the Secret of Immortality was written by Guangchengzi. At least it can be cultivated and the protagonist's lifespan can be increased. You can also have the protagonist travel to the TV series "The Obsessionist" that is currently being broadcast. Everyone in it can live forever and be immortal. Then wouldn't it be okay if the protagonist gets obsession or superpowers? Four: I hope that the protagonist can be recognized by the elevator in the future, no longer limited to one big summer, and can call the elevator directly in his mind, then the hidden dangers of the elevator will be gone! Otherwise, when we become prosperous in the future, will we still live in this shabby place? Five: The protagonist is afraid of east and west in the real world, and doesn't even have the guts to teach his martial arts to others. So why is he no longer afraid in a different world? Did you pass it on to someone else right away? What does it matter if martial arts is shown in the real world? The protagonist even appears in the elevator travel, so why can't warriors, monsters, cultivators, etc. Exist in the real world? We can't come into contact with their existence just because we are weak. Even if they appear around us, we don't know it. But when the protagonist becomes stronger, he will naturally come into contact with their world.

This book is truly speechless. . . The protagonist was almost killed before, and he was said to be an enemy who must be revenged. He tried his best to go to N planes, but he still shouted that he would destroy the opponent. Later, when the protagonist becomes more powerful, the enemy is forced to return the things that belong to the protagonist, and suddenly says, "There is not much hatred." Then the enemy made trouble to kill the protagonist several times. The protagonist has many BBs but he has never killed his enemy once. He let the opponent go time and time again. It's really amazing You cooperated with others to rape your wife's vagina, and then spent money to patch up your wife's membrane. Do you think it's okay?

There are ants in the Dragon Ball plane. They can match the gods and even defeat the Buddha. This garbage is seriously slandering our China. Boycott this garbage book.

There was a shortage of books. I persisted and persisted. I even went against the rules of reading and read the last bit. I finally decided not to read. I was so disgusted. The powerful families in the whole book have multiple surnames. It is impossible to read in real life. I was completely brainless. Later, I became an immortal and still had chakras. How awesome is the author? Naruto, in addition, Dragon Ball has been infinitely improved by the author. It is almost invincible in the prehistoric era, and the force value is extremely confusing. The protagonist's IQ is not up to standard. Others kill your woman and bully your wife. You let others go over and over again, and the other party does it again over and over again. Haha, I don't know what it means to repeat the plane again and again. I can't make up the word count.

The beginning of the story is a bloody plot. The protagonist is the heir of a big family in modern society. However, he was slapped by his father and kicked out of the family. He became a string, so he dug a big hole first. The family is called Dongfang Family, and the protagonist is called Dongfang Yu. It's really embarrassing. Then I took the elevator to go to the plane. The style immediately changed to NC mode. The dialogue plot was similar to that of kindergarten children. I didn't dare to read it anymore. Two chapters can poison people to death.

Poison Point 1: The protagonist's IQ drops from time to time, and he can't think of things that ordinary people can think of. Poisonous Point 2: The protagonist's character is that of a consortium son. This kind of character is popular among female channels, but not popular among male channels, and there is no sense of substitution. Forget about the time-travel plot, but return to the present world and focus on the story of the rich second-generation protagonist's family struggle, regaining power, and the rich family's chickens and dogs ascending to heaven. Is the author a rich second generation? Where does the butt sit? The rich enjoy the best resources to begin with. Instead of killing them, let them live forever? Poison point 3: The Chinese protagonist is too admiring of foreigners and admires Dragon Ball elements. Later, Longzhu himself changed the blond hair that represents the strongest power of Saiyans into black hair, and no longer worshiped blond hair and blue eyes. It's good for you, China's Yili Zhengdao is still a blond and blue-eyed Saiyan. A mere Saiyan 4 destroyed the ancient world. There is a God of Destruction on top of Saiyan 4, and there is an All-King on top of the God of Destruction. In your setting, China's strongest force is two levels lower than Japan's strongest force. Doesn't this make others' ambitions destroy your own prestige?

It's the first unlimited stream I've officially read, but it's really disgusting. I wouldn't look for similar books when I was a kid. It's okay that the protagonist's personality is ordinary, mainly because he always has sex with people everywhere, but does it have any role in advancing the plot? You are not a harem novel. Furthermore, the author almost suppresses the protagonist's strength for the sake of the plot. The various combat power settings are extremely unbalanced and unreasonable. The protagonist's behavior also has many imbecile behaviors. He is plotted by various people but has no long memory, and has many abilities but cannot use them at all. And this author especially likes to substitute his own personal preferences, regardless of whether the readers live or die, or the logic of the plot, so that the protagonist mainly relies on transforming into a Saiyan to fight, and he still has to set Bulma as one of the heroines. Why is it a potion? The ones in Dragon Ball are quite powerful, but is it a bit too much to say they are better than Saints? Isn't it said that the powerful Marvel Chaos Magic is better than Dragon Ball? After learning so many things, in the end, I still rely on the wave and compare the energy value to determine the outcome. The most abstract thing is that unlocking the third level of gene lock increases IQ. It is no different from the same here. It strengthens memory, which is really funny. I have paid for many other books or bought physical books. I feel disgusted to spend an extra ten cents on this one. I only subscribed to see what the readers scolded in that one.

The writing is really bad, the plot is really poisonous, and the logic is really messed up. It was just a simple piece of writing that I wrote early in the morning, but now it's basically a throwaway.

This book... Do so many people insist on reading so many chapters? I remember the first time I read it, in the first or second chapter, Duan Yu immediately poisoned me to death by saying it was the end of the Northern Song Dynasty.

Tasteless flow. Such untalented writers have taken over the platform in large numbers. If they want to find a good book, readers have to hold back their nausea and dig for gold in the shit on the platform.

Maybe this book is indeed too old, and there are too many poisonous points to read now 1. The real-world plot with unclear meaning 2. All kinds of inexplicable mercy when seeing a woman, showing mercy 3. Forcibly spending time collecting things that you have absolutely no use for, and euphemistically calling it looking for the most suitable training system for you 4. All kinds of great wisdom A similar layout ended up with things that were basically useless In the middle and late stages, I looked directly at the catalog, and it was poisoning me in the early stage. I didn't learn everything I could learn. In a world with so many powerful abilities, I didn't learn them. Those who learned them were not good at it. Practice this ability and practice that ability. It is called omnipotent development. The result is that no one can defeat the forcible abuser

The overall main line is chaotic, and the training system and combat effectiveness are even more nonsense. The Holy Mother, no matter how big the hatred is, will laugh it off, any kind of people can be brought back to the real world and used directly, no matter whether they are enemies or not, they can be let go, as long as they are minions, they will die, as long as they are slightly famous, they will be taken away, especially women. This author masturbates a lot in the real world and has never seen a woman.

It is one of the enlightenment novels. Of course, if you look at this novel with your current thinking, it can be said to be very poisonous. However, this is indeed an introductory book for many novices. I can say that it is not bad. Of course, there are also many good world travels (Fantasy World Travel, Magical Race Travel, Plane Butterfly, Traveling through 99 Worlds at the Same Time, and Infinite Horror etc. ), But it is not something that most novices can search or see just after reading. For many people, most of the first books are either Miracle Doctor, Urban Soldier King or Urban Cultivation. Of course, if I list it like this, I can list more than 50 kinds. There is nothing to compare. There are too many routines for those of a certain reading age, and it is no longer suitable to read this kind of book.

I love both of the author's books, which is very rare. I only learned a few martial arts in the world of Tianlong. The reason is that the essence is more valuable than the sword. Emmm, you choose the essence after you have more. The protagonist is also very powerful. He chose the essence when he had nothing. He has a clear mind. The life and death talisman is a great weapon in the lower world. Well, in the end, he was chased like a dog in biochemistry. The most outrageous thing is that he used artificial intelligence to make a mobile phone and announced that he has artificial intelligence. Emmmm artificial intelligence, you can rob a bank without any problem. Are you so short of money and so brainless? The people in the main world are so kind, and they don't know how to rob them by force? According to me, for such a ridiculous protagonist, as long as someone lowers his body and coaxes the protagonist, he will be delivered to the door in a hurry. You announce the plot wherever you go. You think you are very wise, but in fact it is hard to explain in one sentence.

It really makes me vomit, I don't know what the author wants to express? A gangster just has a martial arts dream. He pesters the protagonist for a few days and the protagonist becomes moved. If you move Kumba, you move, and his younger brother will insult a sister Xu who treats you well. After two days of pestering, you will accept it. Who are you? And in Tianlong, none of the villains are full of evil, and the protagonist lets them run away with a smile on his face. The three views of this novel are really as distorted as outer space 😰

Traveling through all the worlds, and then finding a wife in a brothel, the author should be obsessed with his own family.

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