Forging the Way and Establishing the Heart

After reading more than ten chapters, what I don't understand is: 1: Why did the protagonist suddenly learn a spell, and he was kicked out just after he felt the energy! Two: The protagonist is involved in the struggle between the master and apprentice and the aristocratic family. The aristocratic family uses the protagonist to suppress the master, but why does the master and apprentice not fight back? ! The aristocratic family has not reached the point where it can cover the sky with one hand! Three: The protagonist takes the blame and is sent on a mission, but a person who just feels angry and has no skills to eliminate evil spirits is not seeking death? ! The master-disciple lineage didn't show any expression? Even if you protect me secretly! Only the protagonist knows about the protagonist's golden finger! What's more, the viewer is also a good friend of the protagonist's grandfather? Even if you can't be promoted, you still have to protect your life! Author, you don't explain anything clearly, which really makes me feel more and more frustrated as I read it. It's disgusting to forcefully push the plot from God's perspective. You say you write about reality, but I don't think what you write is realistic at all. It's too superficial. You haven't dealt with the connection well. You are eager for quick success and quick gain.

The beginning is very discouraging, there are too many inner dramas, and they are all inner dramas with an explosion of negative energy. The protagonist has no courage and diligence in practicing.

I just read the beginning of this book, which is very similar to Dao Zheng Zheng, but the author's writing style is still not up to standard. If you want to write a novel about immortality, you should at least read a few Daozang novels to enrich yourself first, otherwise you won't be able to write it and it won't have the flavor. You should also read classical immortal novels written by others. For example, Xu Gongzi Shengzhi's book is a true novel about immortality. Why I say it is an immortal novel, because it is an immortal novel that truly breaks away from the core of martial arts. It is no longer about fighting and killing, but about real cultivation of immortality, especially his Taishang Chapter. The current Xianxia novels are said to be Xianxia, ​​but in fact they are still martial arts. They have just changed the skin and amplified the force, but the essence has not changed. On the other hand, if you want to integrate these schools, the biggest difficulty lies in Honghuang Liu, because Honghuang Liu is the masterpiece of Shenji after reading many traditional Chinese works and myths. It is because he was so comprehensive that the structure of Honghuangliu was already so perfect that later generations could not make major changes and could only tinker with it. This also led to the decline of Honghuangliu because it was difficult to produce high-quality products. If the author wants to integrate it well, he should read more traditional Chinese myths and classics. The most important thing is to read more Taoist canon, because the only thing that can overhaul the ancient world is the Taoist immortal system. After all, this is a traditional Chinese religion, and it has been dedicated to compiling China's mythological system for thousands of years. Moreover, many things in Dao Zang are ready-made and can be directly used in novels.

Nowadays, all novels have protagonists with a child mentality and no desire to read them at all. The protagonist of your book is very familiar but stiff, mechanical, and soulless. The scheming villain in the first chapter is better than a pig's foot, smart and understanding of the world.

Just like the title, someone else's editor came to poach me personally, but here I just closed the book without saying anything in advance. I have never seen such a thing as an editor. I want to go to a place that will treat me with the most basic respect. Readers who want to read a book in the future can just search the title of the book directly on the search website. We apologize for any inconvenience caused.

In fact, I haven't read a single word of this book 😅. After reading the book review, it's not my favorite style and I plan to leave. Because the critic below is so right, I plan to say a few words. This book is the author's first book and has already written 2.8 Million. If the author is not full time, I recommend writing until the end. Regardless of whether the data is good or not, you can understand the structure of writing a complete book and what problems you will encounter. Which mistakes were made, which areas drove away customers and which were explosive points, are very meaningful for the next book. And according to my experience, the author of the first tj will find it easier to write articles in the future. Readers also like to take a look at previous articles when choosing an author.

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This, the introduction is very impressive and eye-catching; I looked at the number of words, oh, so fat; I looked at the comments, it was just over three digits, this, whether you deleted the post or banned it, the comment area has more than 3 million words but less than 500, and the results are somewhat not good.

After reading more than a dozen chapters, the writing is good, but the story is too poor, especially when compared with the writing. The first reason is that the author has limited experience and cannot write anything. The second reason is that the author repeatedly emphasizes that he should write some of his own thoughts. The article is not for primary school students. From what the author said, he feels more like a child. If the author insists on thinking so, why bother publishing it? Can you just read it yourself after writing it? Speechless, no wonder 3 million words are still so cold. No matter how good the writing is at the end, the strength in the front will persuade me to quit.

Let me post a post, author, writing a novel is not about writing a thesis or an expository essay. The first two or three hundred chapters are fine, but the whole following chapter is your written discussion, or a description of the development history of Yiqimen. Please remember that readers are not here to read history books. In addition, when writing novels, don't bring too much of your own thoughts, and don't try to instill your own opinions into reading. We are not idle. Come to class, good novels all use characters and stories to metaphor something, but it is better for you to express your point of view directly and discuss it throughout the whole chapter. Originally, the audience for cultivating immortals in ancient times was small. If the author wants to write about cultivating immortals in ancient times well, I suggest the author read it to the end and read it several times.