Cultivation Begins with the Shen Clan

Having read the novel "The Rise of the Shen Family," I'd like to offer some suggestions to the author. There are a few points in the author's previous book that I felt weren't quite right (this is purely my personal opinion, please don't be offended): 1.

Brothers, the exposure and subsequent recommendations for new books are now entirely tied to the number of paid readers, regardless of votes, favorites, or donations. So please, don't let them sit idle! Without exposure and recommendations, a book won't perform well. Many authors abandon their projects because they lack follow-up recommendations.

Whether your promise of a trilogy was just an excuse or your true intention, continuing is better than starting over. After all, the ending of your first part was abrupt; while people could understand, it was because they expected a sequel. This time, even if you switched to the Zhang, Wang, or Zhao family, the results would be better than with the Shen family.

Another unfinished story. Honestly, this book is far worse than the one about the Shen family; it lacks the spark of the former. It's not that family stories are bad, it's that the author's approach is flawed.

I followed the first part, and the pacing was so slow, I was already looking forward to the sequel. Finally, the second part was coming, and then this was the last thing I saw. It was awful. Look at that author who only wrote one part and then stopped. Disappointing, so disappointing.

It's normal for the protagonist to advance to a higher level and increase their strength, then acquire other advancement treasures to help their clan members advance as well. Is it really okay to portray the protagonist as a selfless, altruistic saint? I absolutely hate protagonists like that, and I hate authors who write such saintly protagonists even more.

To be honest, the Shen family story was quite well written. Is the author trying to rewrite the entire Shen family saga? They didn't even bother changing the names of the main and supporting characters; it's very unappealing.

You're not doing a good job either! Only two chapters for a new book? There's an unwritten rule that you should at least have ten chapters.

It's better to continue writing the previous book, one about places outside of Lingnan, since it's written like this.

Brother, please stop writing. You're really not cut out for novels.