Cultivation Begins with the Shen Clan

Coming from the rise of the Shen family, I would like to give the author some advice. There are a few things in the author's last book that I feel are not good to read (this is purely a personal opinion, don't criticize if you don't like it): 1. The author sets the highest level of Lingnan's immortality world at the golden elixir, which causes the protagonist's cultivation to advance too quickly compared to the clan leader. In fact, the author can either add a Zifu to the foundation building and golden elixir, or set the highest level at Nascent Soul so that there are more places to write about. (I don't know if others feel it's a bit inconsistent when reading it. About ten Golden Core monks lead a bunch of monks in the foundation building period. It always feels a bit inconsistent when reading it.) 2. The purchasing power of spiritual stones cannot be seen. Basically all the problems that the protagonist needs are obtained by chance, barter or at Qingyun Gate. The purchasing power of spiritual stones is not reflected at all. In the family flow, the most important thing about the interaction between the protagonist and the family is that the family provides part of the spiritual stones and resources, and the spiritual stones are used to purchase the resources that the protagonist needs. 3. The Lingnan Immortal Cultivation World is too small and completely closed, so the protagonist must leave after forming the elixir. If the author does not want to write about the Nascent Soul Stage monks too early, he can also place the location of the protagonist's family on the edge of the Cultivation World, but not separate it from the mainstream Cultivation World. This is more convenient and will not appear obtrusive later on.

Brother Meng, now the exposure resources and subsequent recommendations of new books, regardless of recommendation votes, collections, rewards... Are all linked to the number of paid readers. Therefore, please don't keep it! Without exposure and recommendation, the performance of the book will not be good. Many authors are eunuchs because they have no follow-up recommendations. The editor will advise you to start over. The so-called follow-up reading refers to the number of users who have read the latest chapter within 24 hours. [Of course, the editor-in-chief's default definition of valid follow-up is an account that has been recharged within three months, even if it is a small recharge of coins. ] And you can't just click through it in a few clicks, you have to stay in the latest chapter for more than a minute. Nowadays, it is easy to read books to death. As long as there is an update, brothers must read it within 24 hours, or read to the latest chapter. In fact, if you all communicate in this chapter and read other people's dirty talk, you will have more happiness! Finally, although we have always stressed that we need to pay to pursue education, we do not discriminate against free prostitutes. They have all been through it since they were students, and it is not easy to know. However, there is no charge for the genuine edition of the new book. I still hope that everyone can top up a penny to read it. Please!

The trilogy you mentioned at the time, whether it was an excuse at the time or a real idea, it is better to continue it than to do it all over again. After all, you ended the first part abruptly. Although everyone can understand it, it is also because they thought you would have a follow-up. This time, even if you switch to another Zhang family, Wang family, or Zhao family, the effect will be better than that of the Shen family.

Eunuch again, alas, to be honest, this book is far worse than the one written by the Shen family, it doesn't have the same aura as before. It's not that the family story is bad, it's the author's thinking that's wrong

I caught up with the first part, the pace was so slow, I was thinking about the follow-up, and finally had to wait for the second part. It was so rubbish. Look at the author who finished the part after just one part. I was disappointed and disappointed.

The protagonist advances first and his strength increases. It is normal for him to obtain other advanced treasures and help his family members advance. Is it really okay to portray the protagonist as a Madonna who gives selflessly without asking for anything in return? I really hate such a protagonist, and I hate the author who writes such a Madonna protagonist even more.

To be honest, the story about the Shen family is pretty good. The author is trying to write about the Shen family again. He didn't even bother to change the names of the protagonist and the supporting characters. It's very unattractive.

You, the author, can't do it either. Just publish two chapters when you start a new book? There is an unwritten rule, no matter what, it has to be laid down in ten chapters.

It's better to continue writing the previous one and write about things other than Lingnan.

Brother, stop writing, later. Not really the material for writing novels