Clan Cultivation: Rising in the Untamed Wilderness

Moral model essay! It makes me want to vomit! A time traveler? As a person with modern ideological education? Can you accept injustice? I have been an unlucky guy since I was a child and was sent away. My father doesn't love my mother? I don't believe you don't have any resentment in your heart? The master doesn't care, but the family doesn't provide resources? Don't you understand the principle of cultivating immortality slowly, step by step? Once again, the family was thrown into the old man's nest to be used as a test tool for conflicts? Are you still happily teaching this and that student? Don't you have a share in the Foundation Establishment Pill? Practice was delayed again? What's the difference between blocking someone's path and enmity? It would be strange if a family of leeks could still have a normal mind.

I have also read a lot of family novels, but there are not many good ones. Most of the authors are very poor and cannot support the world structure that a good novel should have. Many magic weapons, talismans, and formations are just given a name, mention a few functions, and that's it! And how could a complete world of cultivation objects be completely separated from one castle in the air to the other and to the west? It should be like the low-level elixirs and talismans written in this work are related to the intermediate and high-level ones. What are their advantages and disadvantages? Why was this elixir and talisman written clearly? This is the prototype of a good world framework, and you can slowly fill it in later! 2. When modern people travel to another world, the biggest golden finger is actually the modern business philosophy, which brings game guilds and trading platforms into the world of cultivation. After seeing it for the first time, my eyes lit up, and the introduction was extremely detailed. Puyin Mountain originally only had this potential, and the protagonist used the family The family's strength is used to form a prototype, interfere with the original monster hunting group, and finally form a family monster hunting group and follow the trend. It is indeed a good way for a family to obtain a large number of spiritual stones. It is smooth and unobtrusive. It is much better than the protagonist opening a dungeon, picking up some fruit tree spiritual plants in it, and then the whole family selling specialties after coming out! The original golden finger green robe is like a patch to supplement the cultivation qualifications! Just mentioned the third spiritual root to the second spiritual root! Ordinary family stories often use space magic weapons to speed up the growth of plants, and then make elixirs. It makes me sick just looking at it! 3. The author's NPC counter-routine is also a highlight. The various supporting characters in the novel are also individuals. They act according to the author's ideas rather than the protagonist's ideas. The protagonist has only been exposed to NPCs for a period of time. How could he understand the character and ability of NPCs so clearly in such a short period of time! In the guild hall, he supported Zhao at first, but later found out that Zhao couldn't outplay Zhang Mazi and had selfish motives, so he tried to suppress him. However, Zhang fell. The traveling businessman he was optimistic about was no match for Zhao, so he began to accept Zhao again! This is an anti-routine. The protagonist is not the author who is omniscient and omnipotent. Of course, the world he lives in will not all follow his ideas. It is reasonable to change the approach when you find it is different from what you originally imagined! 4. The thoughts and thoughts of various characters in this book are described in detail and reasonably, and the corresponding descriptions of the fighting scenes are average! I just found this book this week and read it in a few days. I just issued a monthly vote for you. I hope the author will not stop updating. I will give it a try and come back to read it. Come on👏!

The first 400 grains and grasses, the rest are completely 💩, about 300 to build the foundation, and they are forced, otherwise I have to drag 200 more, and then I saw chapter 580, and I didn't even break through the mid-term. Use 400 pictures to describe the tide of monsters and monsters, including the establishment of labor unions, monster hunting guilds and other forces around monsters, and then guess what? Being pushed horizontally, nine times out of ten will go away. I wasted so much time writing about this monster and the construction force. The only gain was that I gained a lot of enemies, and then the most outstanding eldest brother in the family died. The main character, the rich man, has no shortage of Dharma and Dharma. He doesn't want to practice at all. He just wants to build tall buildings with building blocks and then push them down.

It is recommended not to read this novel Family Cultivation Articles In terms of cultivation, the protagonist has practiced the sixth level of qi at the beginning, more than 800 chapters, and it is still in the early stage of foundation building. Family aspect, at the beginning, the family ancestor is at the peak of foundation building, breaking through the golden elixir in seclusion, and more than 800 chapters, from the seventeenth to more than thirty years of the protagonist, still in retreat?

The protagonist is also a talented person, and he is gentle enough to win over casual cultivators whose strength is lower than his own.

If you want to write like this, you might as well write a historical fiction. You won't feel comfortable writing under the guise of a cultivator, and the readers will find it awkward. Does the protagonist devote 10% of his energy to spiritual practice a day?

The north is a large area of ​​land, which is not drawn, while the south is marked as the ocean. Since there is no scale, it is only for reference and does not guarantee accurate orientation. In addition, the comment area for the map upload became blurry, so an enlarged screenshot version was posted. This part is where the main story in the early stage of the novel takes place.

The middle part is too boring, so go to Biluyun Cave, Chapter 10 and Chapter 1, find a foundation building and the plot is over, boring, skip a long section and read the rest. Hey guys, the protagonist hasn't built a foundation yet. Are you going to write 1,000 chapters to build a foundation? Normal Cultivation of Immortality is completed with 3 million words. You probably won't be able to get a golden elixir out of these 3 million words. It's equivalent to saying that it's either unfinished or it's really a low-level Cultivation of Immortality.

Beast Tide, Purple Yin Cave, the writing is really bad

Too much mother-in-law, the essence is still cultivating immortals, strength can solve most problems, I was so tired from watching mother-in-law one day, there are too few related to cultivation, right?