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Look what I caught

It's really ok, a good book can't beat it

Why does it have to be a waste material? Why does it appear to be a genius but is actually a waste material? Who are you deceiving? Who are you deceiving? I really don't understand. Genius writing is really a plus. I don't want to read trashy writing.

You can tell from the introduction that this is a novice author. A hundred schools of thought contend, and what they strive for is ideological transcendence! Struggle by force will never be recognized by the people.

I couldn't stand it once I saw that there were no metal mines in the background of the world. It relied on refining metals in animals. This. . . Every animal has copper skin and iron bones. Good guy, animals have high metal content in their bodies. There are no metal mines, so everyone can tear a little devil apart with their own hands? ? I can't figure out how to hunt

I came here because of the genius flow, good guy, just give me an e-, don't talk to me. Oh, the later part is more exciting. I was really disgusted when I saw this. I looked at the back of the story, and the author said that the protagonist is a genius in the eyes of others because of his special efforts. If this is the case, don't write the genius flow in the introduction. If you write the hard work flow, I won't be so disgusted [ fn=49], speechless, and a suggestion to the author, don't put everything in one sentence, it will be more exciting, and read on. You have to know that we are an impetuous society now. I was disgusted after reading the first few chapters of yours. Many people ran away directly. How can I look back to understand your thinking? If there are problems with what you wrote before, don't expect readers to understand you and read on.

I hope it will be 3 million words long

It's ridiculous. In a world of high martial arts, there are many ways to change qualifications, and the so-called single qualification is even more ridiculous. Roots represent the speed of cultivation, and understanding represents learning. Some people are good at weapons, fists, poisons, formations and other factors. In a so-called world of high martial arts, qualifications are judged? It's just like a joke to see which country has more mines or more people to determine whether a country is doing more harm than good!

The heroine, the attitude towards foreigners, and the protagonist's treatment of slaves. There are also various other characters who treat the protagonist by forcibly reducing their intelligence, so I won't go into details. The key is to see the protagonist and the others who spent more than half of their family's resources in exchange for the magic pill. Sure enough, it was robbed by the little monkey raised by the protagonist. And this little monkey's loyalty to the protagonist is actually 100 Since his loyalty is so high, why doesn't he listen to you? If at the most critical period, the protagonist asks the little monkey to die to save himself, I feel that it is absolutely impossible to save him. He will not even give you a magic pill, and he doesn't know what is in his hand, and you guarantee his loyalty. ?