The Great Saint Beyond Heaven

You can refer to the world view in the Legend of the Great Sage, it is very exciting

It was quite uncomfortable to watch. He was abusing the protagonist throughout the whole process in the lower realm. He had to insult the protagonist over and over again. Basically, he was not seen as a human being. They are all written in dark ways. Not to mention it feels better, it's okay if you don't get angry to death.

I saw Chapter 22. That Miss Meng really disgusted me to death. She tried whipping on someone, and the protagonist was also tested. Later, the protagonist became friends with her (the book review said), and abandoned the book.

All the gods are training their qi, but I am the only one who is respected by my martial arts! The tenacity and persistence of the protagonist in the lower realm resonate with readers, and the heroic spirit of being an enemy of the world is even more amazing - these are the two most attractive points in the early stages of the book. After Ascension: What is the Taiyin Manual, what formations, and what kind of corpse training~ What is the essential difference between the protagonist and other monks? What is the essential contradiction? The physical body is stronger? Is your Taoist heart stronger? There is a saying about never forgetting your original intention. I wonder if the author has heard of it. I don't know what Sun Heng's original intention is in the eyes of others, but I think it is to prove the Tao through martial arts! To put it another way, it is to clear the way for ordinary people (mortals without cultivation qualifications). To put it more formally, it is to represent the will of the overwhelming majority of the people~~ Think about the attitude of the monks who treat mortals like pigs and dogs written by the author in the early stage, and the protagonist who gets angry and is seriously injured or even beaten to death. The main conflict in this book becomes the conflict between the powerful second-generation Immortal of the big sect and the powerless but talented ordinary cultivator... To borrow a sentence from Wang Anshi: Everyone is gone! What kind of rationality is there? In a novel, plausibility is more important than the characterization of the protagonist? There are so many Qidian novels about people being able to fly. Did Newton jump up and register a Qidian account to troll anyone?

I hope the author will not read book reviews, otherwise he will definitely not be able to write well, because no matter how you write, bullies are everywhere. I think it has already made an impact. The first hundred chapters are so wonderful.

I persisted for 280 chapters and it's true that I couldn't hold it anymore. To be honest, every character in the author's works is very vivid and has an online IQ. But you can't argue with the fact that the protagonist is not online. The protagonist's own problems can make me vomit endless poison. First of all, as a child who lived in a cold and cruel world, he himself has become more and more incompatible with this world. People draw a clear line with him when he encounters difficulties. How can he help others solve their worries in the end, repaying evil with kindness? As for the character of the protagonist, you said that if he met someone who devoted himself wholeheartedly to him when he was young, it is understandable and possible that he would develop such a character when he grows up. But look at the ghosts and monsters in your works. How can he still maintain a good attitude? I don't know what happens next, but as far as these three hundred chapters are concerned, it is clear that immortal cultivators have more obvious advantages than warriors, but my main protagonist is practicing martial arts to death. Good guy, I really don't know how you are going to write about the excitement of the protagonist's martial arts training later, and the purpose of the protagonist's self-cultivation is vague. I don't even know what he is practicing for. You said he is doing it to see the world. My feelings I feel that he just wants to please you and abuse us readers (I won't say the rest, these are just some of my personal opinions, but it is true, and people who read it are very tired) The second and most important point, and also to the author, you write novels to have more readers, and the ugly part is to please us (of course, if you draw it yourself (Please treat me as a bookworm). As a bookworm for more than ten years, it is indeed difficult to please many bookworms with today's novels. But I read online novels just for fun, just for YY. I am not here to understand life and experience reality. The ups and downs in the real society are enough for people to pee in. Well, here is another pot for you. You want to show your good writing skills. This is understandable, but okay Not everything in writing must be written around "cruel reality", at least not in online novels. You don't have to make us feel excited, but at least it has to be a little bit exciting. Not everyone is a masochist. I don't know whether you have brought yourself into the protagonist you wrote, but every reader will unconsciously take it in themselves when reading, so it is really uncomfortable. Final summary: The writing is good, but the protagonist is too poisonous, so those who are not mentally strong should be careful.

It's been a bit dull lately, I'll see if it's convenient to tip the author in a few days 🙂

The title of this book, yes, it still has the same taste, the author himself is undoubtedly 😥

I must complain about Chapter 64 of this book. The scene where the protagonist meets a 10-year-old girl and is influenced by her charming nature. It is too vulgar. Even if you are 10 years old, even if you are Liu Yifei and Lin Chiling, what charm does a 10-year-old have? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? . ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? My heart is full of doubts

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