Life Restart Simulator

It felt good at first, but the more I looked at it, the more I felt something was wrong! Did the author take this book for granted? It feels like I am writing it as an outsider. Many places seem reasonable, but when I put it in, it is not consistent with a feudal society (a world of spiritual practice). The protagonist said at the beginning that his behavior should not be too outrageous, but in the end, he was overwhelmed by the setting. Although the author added the setting as he wrote, it still seemed very abrupt. How to put it, it's like some people passively listen to the protagonist like a group of puppets, and whatever the protagonist says is what he says. A child of several years old in the feudal era still behaves beyond the IQ of his fellow villagers in a harsh environment like a mountain village. There will only be one result (death). As a result, the protagonist shows a mind that is inferior to adults (Ishimura, who is uneducated and extremely backward in thinking). Although the author gives various explanations in the article, what is the overall setting given by the author - a scumbag, an underage high school student who does not like to study! ! !

The selling point of this book is that if you re-open your life, the first copy should not be too long. There are many sudden and sudden deaths in re-opening your life. It feels like you can write a book with the first copy. The author must be careful about the exciting content and reopening time of the copy.

The writing is quite good, although the little routines seen in the pictures are a bit awkward, but the logic is self-consistent. From the perspective of an illiterate poor villager in a remote mountain village, the response to this series of operations is quite reasonable, including the subsequent description of the unruly people emerging from the poor mountains and poor waters. From my personal point of view, it's more than adequate, and I look forward to the subsequent plot development.

By the way, it feels like the first time I will be like the brother of the ruthless emperor. I don't mind seeing his physique, and then he is refined by the powerful. The mask is given to my sister 😃, and then my sister becomes the ruthless emperor in this book.

Since the main focus is on re-opening life, it is recommended that the first copy should not be too long. You can briefly mention the things about cultivating immortals, pretending to slap people in the face, and villains, etc., Just give them a rough outline, and then reopen the world to reveal the face of the world little by little. If you write about cultivation and then the villain pretends to slap people in the face while practicing and changing maps, it will be no different from the rest of the articles about cultivating immortals. The novelty of the subject matter cannot be lost in the resumption of life. For example, this time it will be explained one by one, what level of cultivation, how old will it be when you die, and how will your family be? Never write a fairy tale! ! !

It was okay at first, but a series of actions the protagonist performed after entering the city left me speechless and I couldn't stand watching anymore.

The upgrade process has started before this is even on the shelves. If you write like this, it will collapse quickly. It is mainly a life simulation.

Author, don't you think this paragraph is very poisonous?

Can you make a suggestion? I feel that there is no need to write so much about the small theater. The protagonist should still develop in the main world, right? The protagonist should complete the small world and bring talents or return to the main world. Then the small theater should be refined, otherwise the theme will feel a bit distorted.

The writing is not bad, although I feel that the description of the group portraits is not that good, and it feels a bit intellectual. A little too protagonist-centric.