A Cultivator Who Can Transmigrate

The protagonist in the author's works will never accept a lesson. He has fallen down many levels in the same pit. This time it is the beginning of a routine. He is plotted by the protagonist's male friend and falls to the heroine. This time the names are: Sun Yin and Zhang Yu'er. Last time it was the apprentice and the nun. My prediction for the subsequent plot is: the protagonist sacrifices his life to fight for his friends and the heroine, and is in danger several times. , In the end, the golden finger broke out and defeated all enemies, became the best in the world, only gained fame, and then the greatest benefits were obtained by his friend Sun Yin and the heroine, and then the friend plotted against the heroine, and then the protagonist went to save it, but it turned out to be Sun Yin's dragnet against the protagonist, and then the heroine died, and the protagonist burst out with great power again, killing everyone, and then he took over the world and continued to be a little brat.

Reading the first copy of this book was very enjoyable, and I felt like I was reading "Water Margin". In the first world, the protagonist is like an enhanced version of Lu Zhishen. He lives a very cool life, but he cannot always get everything he wants. Coincidentally, the protagonist also practices Buddhist Kung Fu. Moreover, the setting that the protagonist is mute in the dungeon is also wonderful. It is really rare to find a protagonist who "can take action but don't push". In addition, the author's description of the fight is smooth and hearty. It is really a pleasure for me to read such a novel without any sloppiness in the hot summer. Many of the supporting characters in this book are brilliantly described, without any facial makeup or sb. Everyone has their own character and pursuit. Dong Yuner, Song Xiu, fifth brother, and seventh brother in the first copy are all very three-dimensional. However, whether the first dungeon ended too hastily, the Song family still has a great advantage, and it is completely possible to figure it out slowly. However, in the end, the Song family won the world in a deus ex machina-style way, resulting in many characters who appeared before having no use, and the emotional lines were also rushed. To use a crude metaphor, it seems that you have done enough foreplay with your girlfriend, and then she tells you that her aunt is here. This is how I felt at the end of the first copy. Maybe the author wants to advance the plot of the main world early. In any case, I hope the author can stick to his own ideas and not lose his own characteristics in order to cater to the readers.

The beginning of the story is always like this, just at the right time and caught off guard. The ending of the story is always like this, two flowers bloom, separated by the sky. I like the author's writing style very much. It seems slow and cumbersome, but it has a different kind of spirituality. After reading it in one breath, I feel a faint sense of loss in my heart, as if there is a storyteller sitting in front of me. He is wearing a long gown, a piece of wood, and a folding fan. He talks about the world, people, and history, sings songs, learns vocals, and acts. Loneliness and prosperity, ups and downs, love and hatred, spring, autumn, winter and summer, in a few lines, one seems to see the blood-stained mountains and rivers under the iron horse, and the picturesque scenery like a mirror and a moon in the water. The protagonist is like an actor, shedding his own tears in other people's stories, visiting his soul mate in the vast sea of ​​people, but he is not confused in his heart, not trapped in love, not afraid of the future, and not thinking about the past. My favorite character in the first copy is Dong Yun'er. Although she has lived for less than 80 chapters, she is even a little emotional. Maybe the author speeded up the progress after seeing the book review, or maybe it was originally arranged like this. But I want to say that as a storyteller, you are unqualified, and you can even say you have failed. So what? If you want to make money through this, it is a pity that you have already lost more than half of it and can give up, because this kind of book is most suitable for reading one copy in one sitting at a quiet moment, which is seriously inconsistent with the current update mode of online articles. If you want to be a storyteller quietly, then good, you are already halfway successful. I hope that the author can truly spread his spirituality. Take advantage of the sunshine, the breeze, and the flowers before they bloom. Although the protagonist is destined to be lonely on this road, he may face such separation many times. But many people don't have themselves without another person. But you spent it all alone. Your loneliness is glorious despite defeat. Finally, he expressed her inner wish for her who could not express it. At the spring banquet, sing a song with a glass of green wine and pay homage to Chen Sanyuan again. The first wish is that my husband will live a thousand years; the second wish is that I will be healthy; the third wish is that like the swallow on the beam, we will see each other year after year. ——Feng Yansi's "Longevity Girl" If I get it, I'm lucky; if I don't get it, it's my fate.

I want to say a few words. I have ordered 200 chapters and I can't watch it anymore. If I don't say a few words, I don't have a clear idea. I read it in a disgusting way and abused the main text. I was frustrated from the beginning to the end. The author obviously made the villain very disgusting at the beginning and hammered the protagonist in various ways. In the end, he had to clean it up. What a last resort, the protagonist even forced one or two to let go. It was very stupid. The author wants to express that people can't help themselves in Jianghu. I know that, but if I don't grasp the degree of control, I can't clean it up. The protagonist was tortured by one person for more than ten chapters. I skipped 100 chapters just to see the comeback first. But you told me that you beat me once and then let him go. I couldn't stand it anymore...

Brother, there are enough cruel people, the literary youth need to be cured.

What a crappy book! Are there still a bunch of people bragging? Let alone die all the way, the protagonist of the time-travel flow should be semi-invincible if not invincible! Why would you write about time travel when you are so cruel? Break the thing!

Sorry, I really can't stand this kind of sadistic mother. I can't understand why I traveled through time and became a woman. I'm still going to die wherever I go. Goodbye is the book I most regret reading.

It's really a bit poisonous. You can't stand it when someone rebels against you and your subordinates rape the wives and daughters of enemy officials and beat them to death? Good guy, don't talk to me about the public sentiment. If you kill an official, the civilians may still applaud you. You are completely unmotivated by the military. Without an army, you are nothing. At least you should be able to handle it with military law. Others rebel against you just for the sake of glory and wealth. This kind of thing is not only because the protagonist can successfully rebel, but there is no morale among the people and the military.

There are still people who are hacking this book. This book may be the author's first book and it is normal for it to have some poisonous points. But the plot and content of the book certainly outweigh those shortcomings. The trolls in the comment area only saw a little bit of the first part and then yelled, and they probably didn't see the exciting plot behind it. Very misleading. This author's fighting writing is still very exciting, and he is also very creative. In summary, despite its flaws, it is still worth watching and the plot is not clichéd. Did you think Li Yuanba couldn't do it from the beginning? The next time he traveled through time, he was directly a eunuch, the time he traveled through time directly transformed him into a woman, and finally he traveled directly into a stick. And the writing and plot are clearly improving all the time. People nowadays are too impetuous, haha.

It's extremely poisonous. In the first world, all the people who cared about and cared about me were killed. No one was left. The key point is that they died miserably. It's so poisonous that I can't bear it.