The End of the Ninja World

To make a complaint, according to my construction site Japanese understanding, the pronunciation of Uchiha Haru should be うちは はれ, Uchiha hare, or even the more ridiculous Uchiha ha (because it seems that a single は has the meaning of Haru), there will be a mysterious "haha" sound in the middle

This novel has been ruined. The protagonist's daughter actually killed her father, and she still took it for granted. The most important filial piety in China for five thousand years was completely lost. After reading the novel for three times, I couldn't accept this kind of plot.

I don't want to watch Ye Cang as soon as he dies. Don't do this with a single female protagonist. She has a child and then write Ye Cang to death. She also talks about respecting monogamy and being both serious and established.

To be honest, I really don't like the heroine's character. The author recommends that you stop writing emotional dramas in your next book. I only subscribed to part of this book because the character Qing is so annoying. I was even more disgusted when I saw the two of them fighting together in Susana. It's not that sensational. It's true that the heroine is getting stronger, but it's not a little worse than Tatsumi. Holding her hand and fighting? Author, are you kidding me? The most annoying thing is a woman who insists on following her even though she knows her own strength is a hindrance. If you want to make the heroine three-dimensional, you must spend a lot of space describing the character, instead of today, where you only see pretentiousness and no self-improvement. Aside from this, the character of the protagonist is really hard to explain in one sentence. The transition is too abrupt and I haven't seen the ending yet. Anyway, this book is inconsistent and the character of the protagonist collapses in more than one way. After completing the Naruto fanfic, I can only say that the concept of this book is quite brilliant, but the rest is not good.

The protagonist has been in the ninja world for 30 years and has been the Hokage for more than ten years. He has not changed the structure of the ninja world at all. Everything he does is pulled back by the so-called plot. It is disgusting and there is a mastermind behind the scenes who is invincible in manipulating people's hearts. The protagonist can't do anything.

Friendly reminder, stop when you see Hokage. The author is almost as if he has changed the author later. It is very poisonous, especially the last battle is completely based on the original work. The ending is not mentioned.

I really don't know what to say when I see that Ye Cang is still dead... Just take it as a throwaway for my previous subscription. According to the plot, everyone is dead. I really have nothing to say. Lin is dead, the fourth generation is dead, Kuna Xin is dead, Ye Cang is dead, oh, and Yahiko is also dead in the end, me! Want! This! Host! Horn! Have! What! Use!

The author is probably a young man, right? Prefer to poison others

This fanfic is the most disgusting novel I have read since I read a Naruto fanfic. First of all, I must confirm that the author's writing is indeed good, but the plot and character creation are a mess. The protagonist is not the author, right? He is indecisive and has no protagonist. He wrote his son and his mother to death, let his daughter stab the protagonist in the back, and the protagonist became the ultimate villain. Your mouth is not open, right? I don't know how to explain. Isn't reading fan fiction just about making up for the regrets of the original work through imagination? In the end, what changed in the protagonist you wrote? What's the matter with such a tragic ending? I might as well read the original work. Anyway, Naruto still has a happy ending. Your protagonist might as well not travel through time.

I saw it introduced in the review section of other novels and said it was a masterpiece of Naruto, but after seeing the introduction, I had no desire to read it. 1. I don't have a golden finger, and 2. I don't know the plot. In this situation, if modern people travel to the past, wouldn't the author consider the cultural gap? Can the worldview adapt? Can the cruelty of ninjas be adapted? Who among you here can guarantee that you can survive one episode in this situation? ? ? Under such circumstances, time travel is a failure. The protagonist is a native of Naruto who is 10,000 times better than time travel. Don't tell me that modern people's thoughts are the biggest golden fingers. This will only be incompatible with the Naruto world and die faster. It seems that if you don't time travel, you can't write. There is no golden finger or understanding of the plot in such a high-risk world as Naruto. Modern people are guaranteed to die as many as they can when traveling through time. Naruto is famous for his cheating. There are many and dangerous. The protagonist does not have a golden finger and does not understand the plot. If he develops to the strength of Itachi, he will be overwhelmed. If you want to catch up with those cheaters, unless the author forces the protagonist to cheat, but this will fail. In a novel that time travels to Naruto, the golden finger must be at least the same as the plot, otherwise you will not be able to write it later. This is also the common point of many Naruto novels. Either there is a golden finger or you understand the plot. Many readers may be tired of reading it, but it is really indispensable, otherwise it will be very messy.