The Immortal and Demon of Fate

As the title says, to all the book friends who are lucky enough to read this novel Anyway, I wrote this novel and I was moved to tears This may be a tragic novel with two male protagonists If you can insist on reading more than forty chapters to get through the level I think you can more or less understand The main idea of this novel It doesn't matter if you insist on not reading more than forty chapters You can jump directly to more than forty chapters to break through the level and start reading I don't think you can understand it Because it is a spoiler It is also the plot that will be written later Okay, anyway, I cried when I wrote about the level Just think that my glass heart is fragile If you finish reading it, you still feel that it is nothing more than that Please accept my knee Sincere apology

Brother, I took a look at your book. The writing style is quite old, but I have been reading online articles for about 10 years now, and I really can't read it. To be honest, I can guess the main line of your novel just by looking at the title and flipping through the table of contents. The writing style is not funny and entertaining. It is very difficult to make money from this. So I would like to give some advice. If you are generating electricity for love and just want to write a story, you should read more. You should excerpt and imitate some good sentences. Copy a lot of articles in the world. If you copy too much, you will naturally have something of your own. Then, if there is nothing wrong with the existing chapters, just change them. Some modifiers can be omitted if possible. For example, the first few chapters are a bit too wordy. As long as the content is not affected, I feel that it is not a problem for you to delete a few hundred words in a chapter. In addition, after a while, if you look at what you have written before, you will find new ideas. Make a document and modify it in the latest line every time. After a while, you can see your own growth. There are also online articles and physical books. Different media have different techniques. As far as I know, Qidian often asks great authors to give courses to other authors. If you can get these courses, it should be helpful to you.

The author really wants to write an online literature class, but this book is boring

First of all, you can see things in the first chapter. After careful selection, you have reached the level of Yuanying. In this sentence..., Would it be better if you changed the description to "carefully cultivated" and have reached the level of Yuanying? If it is really a disciple selected from a group of people, the description is: Cai Die (forgot his name) is the most outstanding disciple selected from the sect, and his cultivation has reached the stage of Yuanying. I'm not very educated, so I might have better descriptions. What about the plot later? The writing is there, but the plot just doesn't attract people to watch. Then the two protagonists can be said to have opposite personalities. I personally don't find this kind of contrasting setting interesting. From the author's replies to other people's comments, I probably know that the follow-up is nothing more than the Holy Son turning evil and the Demon Son. Transformation is a bit like the Nezha movie about the devil boy coming to the world, but the devil in this description is not a devil, at least not the kind of devil I imagined, more like a street bastard, stuffing his fingers into a woman's mouth, it makes me feel sick. Even if this kind of character becomes positive as the author said, how many people can insist on seeing it, and the author replies As for how many chapters others hope others can read, some replies are 20 chapters, and some hope others can read 30 chapters, which may change their minds. I just want to say that the first three chapters are not good, and I hope others can read the back. This is really a bit overwhelming. There is no shortage of novels to read, so I have this time, I think it would be better to find other novels to read.

It's a good thing that the author has ideas, but I personally feel that the author's writing style and ideological realm are not quite up to par with my own ideas. Many people in the comment area said that the author's rebuttal was that they hope everyone will read more chapters to understand, but in fact, you don't need to read more, the writing style at the beginning of the first chapter can explain a lot of things For example, my first reaction when opening the novel was that the author likes to use words such as "Xu Shi" and "This". Maybe he wants to make his work more fairy-tale? But in fact, this kind of text will only make readers feel embarrassed I saw the author refuting everyone's opinions in the comment area, saying that they are peeling off the cocoon, asking readers to be more patient, but you have to give readers a reason to be patient with you Take the sword as an example, Jianlai is also peeling off the cocoon to slowly reveal a huge world view, Jianlai's early world I think the shaping of the perspective is the most successful among online novels, and there is also the story of the God of Shepherd. In the early stage, Qin Mu was picked up by several disabled people as an orphan. It is also a very old-fashioned plot, but everyone is willing to read it The author should learn from these excellent works, instead of insisting on thinking that he has written well, but the readers are impatient.

I haven't read the novel, but this comment section is kind of exciting. In addition to the worldly people who come here, there are all kinds of suggestions. The author is very proud, polite and tough-talking, and no one will accept his main story. Just read it and you will discover the true meaning of this book sooner or later. Based on those suggestions, I guess this book may be written from God's perspective. The order and interweaving of the stories may be confusing to readers. As a newcomer, it is inevitable that the writing style needs to be adjusted. The books are so idle that I am busy blowing water everywhere😁😁😁

After reading it, to be honest, the writing is quite awkward. It belongs to the ancient style of writing more than ten years ago. It is difficult for readers to read it now. Moreover, this is a novel with two protagonists. The reason why the protagonist is a protagonist is that it has "uniqueness". It is difficult for people to get involved in the text of the two protagonists, and it is not a group portrait. It is a higher level thing. Moreover, even a group portrait basically has a real protagonist. It is not surprising that no one reads it after two layers of screening.

You have come to write a book, and it must be aimed at the market. Take a look at the starting point and see how many books have this kind of dual-male protagonist plot line. Just ask a question, who should readers bring into the book? Take Fairy Sword as an example. First of all, you need to know when Fairy Sword was created. Besides, Fairy Sword became popular because of games and movies. But if you are a novelist and you really want to follow your own ideas, then you have to accept the fact that editors are unwilling to sign it, because people are based on performance, and not signing a contract means that you will not get promotions, let alone exposure. Do you think it makes sense for you to write tens of millions of words on a single machine in such a situation? Don't tell me to practice your writing skills. The basis for improvement is feedback. Not many people read it. Comments say that most of the good writers are your peers. Normal readers are destined to miss you from the moment you don't sign a contract or put it on the shelves. Listen to my brother's advice and hurry up. When you have inspiration, write a cool article and figure out the routine before signing a contract. Don't worry about your results. Write first. Everything is difficult at the beginning. It is better to innovate ideas after you have a foundation than to think about the market in the fog.

It can be seen in the first chapter. The writing is average. The story should explain later why the Holy Son Demon is in the human world. But when I read the fourth chapter, it still hasn't been explained. Is the narrative rhythm really good? After reading Chapter 4, I found two more problems. The first problem was actually mentioned before. It is because my perception of this problem has accumulated to a certain extent after reading Chapter 4. The first problem is that several characters appear at once, which is too dense. This is okay.

This should be the writing method of classical fairy tales, but many people don't read this writing method now. In fact, I think there is nothing wrong with the writing style, including the paragraphing. However, online novels are not divided into articles, which is two or three sentences and a small paragraph, and two or three sentences and a small paragraph, so that everyone will not be tired when reading, so It is best not to design such a complex background and spread it out from difficult to easy. My personal suggestion is to slowly spread it out from easy to difficult and from point to surface, because modern literature is basically fast food, and Chinese people after the vernacular are basically illiterate. If you build such a complicated background all at once, many people will not have the patience to read it.