A Common Soldier of the Northern Army of Eastern Jin

This book is the only one I have complained about after reading it for so many years. Everything else sucks, and I haven't complained much about it. For example, those who are invincible people say they are invincible from the beginning, and they still complain about it. That's a disease of the brain. Your article is obviously a historical article, but all the bull-headed and horse-faced stuff comes out in the back. Wouldn't it be nice to just rule the world normally and have peace for all eternity? What kind of gods will come out? Evil gods. The most annoying thing is that if there are gods, then there is a realm, how can one become a god? As a result, the first few hundred pictures are just there to strengthen the body and exercise. It is obvious that everyone is the same human being, but you are in better shape and I am in worse shape. You have to admit this. The protagonist has an aura and must be physically strong. What kind of god will come out later? If a god comes out, then there will be a way to become a god. So what are you doing in front of you? Finally, you said this is an alien experiment, tmd, I'll go with it, you think this ending is awesome. Aliens and gods have come out, so if you are a dynasty streamer, you should go for unification. I can only say that this is the most trashy protagonist I have ever seen. Those ordinary Five Paths all dominate the world and everything is peaceful. Even if he doesn't dominate the world, he will eventually reach the point where he is the only one who dominates. The kind of person who has the final say, you are just a piece of cake in the back. Come on, the whole world is an alien experiment. I rely on Lingbei. I also posted a review of the book saying it was written with care. As for your realm, you have become a god. What about the unified universe, tmd

The character design of pig's feet didn't hold up. As a time traveler, I always believed in the imperial court in my heart. No matter what happened, I was reckless all the way. I didn't know how to use my brain in my two lives. No wonder I did so poorly. After all, it is a novel. If it were in reality, someone would have stabbed it to death.

I think it's okay, except that the mafia piss spot is too big, and the author probably reads a lot of history books and likes to describe dialogue. But the long dialogue made me feel very uncomfortable But the good thing is that the weapon formations in it are indeed well documented. I don't really like the mafia setting, and I don't really like your writing style, but I like your research, and there is also a battle scene that really smells like the generals of the Yang family. Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

As a time-traveler, you can't even write poetry? Don't know a few characters? I came here to see time travel, not historical biographies, okay?

Really, I didn't see much about heroism and intrigue in battles. It was full of conspiracies, machinations, and the intrigues of family interests. It was so boring.

Is it because I am confused? Why are the protagonists in the book different? The wife is also different, and the political construction is also different. Why does the author say that studying the history of the Wei, Jin, Southern and Northern Dynasties is very informative? Pindao likes the character Liu Yu, Emperor Wu of the Song Dynasty. According to Pindao's knowledge, during this period of history, a poor family also wanted to have a noble son? Just think about it in your dream. Pindao also read the biography of Emperor Wu of the Song Dynasty, in which Liu Yu neither admitted nor denied that he was a descendant of Liu Jiao. Liu Yu would not have been able to attract an upper-class son to invest, and he would not have been rescued and helped pay off his gambling debts, otherwise Liu Yu would have died long ago. This shows how good Liu Yu is at using tricks. Liu Yu also attaches great importance to family ties. Just look at his filial piety towards his stepmother. It also depends on the character of a gambler. If this character can create the "Queyue Formation", it will be a ghost.

I just have a question, is this pig's foot really a time traveler? From what era did you travel through time? Can't tell at all. He is not like people who have received nine-year compulsory education, nor are they like ancient scholars, nor are they like peasant uncles, nor are they like businessmen, nor are they like the second rich official and second master. They have no influence at all before time travel. It feels like it's about pure history conveyed through one person's vision. Well, maybe I didn't finish reading it! Solve

Personally, I think two things need to be done to write a book that is engaging. First, you need to write the general environment and character characteristics that are consistent with historical facts. Second, you need to use the plot to arouse the reader's emotions while writing the above two points. The protagonist of this book starts from the beginning, and combined with the historical facts of the real Liu Yu, he will surely rise to a high position step by step. This shows that the author had big plans from the beginning. Without an in-depth understanding of the historical facts and full confidence in his own writing power, he would basically not dare to write such a realistic style of historical writing. I think to portray a character well, in addition to having a temper and character that suits his identity, it is best to have one or two unique hobbies or very characteristic behaviors, similar to the "signature moves" of modern stars, or hobbies that can make readers more fond of the character when he smiles knowingly. Even if this hobby may be a little weird, the specific hobbies depend on the author's skill. Prominent examples include the protagonist's "goo" in "My Senior Brother is Too Steady", who goes to the extreme level of killing people, setting fires, destroying corpses, raising ashes and summoning souls to play and sing a dragon; another example is the sharp contrast between Bai Xiaochun's name and behavior in "One Thought of Eternity", "I Use Xianshu" There is also the sentence "the shame of the literati" in "Becoming a Saint"; there is also the protagonist's watchdog character in "Tang Brick", which is also a historical novel, and some of the hobbies and small actions of many characters. With this kind of characteristics, especially those that match the characters' personalities, readers will be deeply impressed. In this regard, the protagonist of this book is lacking. In the early days, apart from the sense of justice, it was difficult for people to have the association of "life-like" and "characteristic". To put it simply, readers were tired of seeing all kinds of orthodox characters, whether they were brave, full of justice, sinister and vicious of some villains, or the stereotyped characters of big loyalties and traitors. Now many people prefer to watch characters with unique personality traits or behaviors and actions. For example, in addition to having a strong sense of justice, can the protagonist have some life-like hobbies? For example, do you like to eat fish when you are in a good mood and like to cook fish yourself? For example, a little mysophobia (revealed through some relatively relaxed small actions)? For example, if you have nothing to do, you like to hold a teapot and take a sip at the spout? Wait, wait. The things mentioned may not necessarily conform to the image creation of the protagonist in this book, but they mainly provide an idea. Similar behavioral characteristics can also be extended to supporting characters. For example, in a certain battle, the two armies fought several times with each other winning or losing. When no one could do anything to the other, a certain general with a reckless and iron-faced personality on the protagonist's side was originally the protagonist. Suspecting that the food in the army was not good, he secretly took a few people to hunt nearby. As a result, he accidentally captured an enemy leader and forced him to find out the location of the enemy general. When he came back to report, the protagonist led an army to attack the camp and successfully beheaded him, thus achieving a great victory. I think this is more interesting than the traditional victory after a battle between two armies. Even this Tiehanhan general can be written as a "lucky general" similar to Cheng Yaojin. Of course, not all wars can be written like this. Minor ones can be written like a "joke". Major wars of great significance are better to be more orthodox. The above is only my personal opinion and for reference only. Please forgive me for any inappropriate remarks. 😁🙏

I always feel that the main character is too naughty, and everyone can take advantage of him. No matter how much hatred or hatred he has, he will turn around and fool him into cooperating, only to be sold out later.

I was persuaded to quit after reading a few chapters My muscles bounced people back and seriously injured me. Are you a person with rubber fruit ability? And modern vocabulary often appears inexplicably For once it is semi-literary and sometimes it is vernacular. A soldier king comes out to really persuade him to retreat. How could a small soldier dare to become king in the feudal dynasty? The play It is not a fantasy like the mythical version of the Three Kingdoms, nor is it a ridicule like the prodigal son of the Ming Dynasty. It seems that the author of the preface wants to stick to historical facts, but the plot and wording are so ill-considered. It can only be said that historical novels are in decline

I don't know if this is official history. It's okay to write about aristocratic families, but what the hell is the mafia? The protagonist sees through many things but doesn't reveal them clearly, and feels surprised when others reveal them. It's very hypocritical and awkward to watch! In fact, it would be better not to travel through time than not. In the end, the protagonist is not only a military strategist but also a politician. Don't write it like a fool. I read more than 300 chapters, and finally I roughly saw the latest one. It seems that it has reached the abdication system again. This is ancient times, the era of family affairs. I don't know what to say. Did Liu Yu think this way in ancient times? I might as well watch the Three Kingdoms!

I just got into it. After reading more than 50 chapters, the overall feeling is still good. However, Diao's series of behaviors give people a feeling that they are a bit out of touch with their IQ. Also, the whole article is written in vernacular and a sentence in classical Chinese suddenly comes out, which is really uncomfortable. Apart from these two points, the other feelings are still good. I hope the author will continue to work hard (Personal opinion, please don't criticize if I'm wrong)

At first, when I looked at my resume and my grades, I felt that it was a good book that would suit my taste. However, after reading dozens of chapters, I felt that it was not smooth and that I could not quite get into the plot of the story. On the one hand, words like "xxx smiled slightly", "xxx sneered" and "xxx laughed" are repeated too many times, giving the impression that the writing is immature; on the other hand, there are too many dialogues. I admit that I didn't read it very carefully because I realized at the beginning that this book was not suitable for me, so I won't go into details so as not to affect the perception of others who come after me. Farewell but no separation, farewell.

A special era, a different life. It has been a hundred years since the Jin Dynasty lost its north. The north was full of barbarians and the south was in chaos. It was during this era that Liu Yu became the brightest star of this era with his extraordinary talent and perseverance, leaving behind endless legends. The writing style of this book is like the Romance of the Three Kingdoms, which is different from ordinary historical online articles. Most of the content is based on historical facts, and some are also artistically processed, vividly restoring the style of the times and the experiences of the characters.

Reading the title of the book reminded me of "A Small Soldier in the Border Army in the Late Ming Dynasty" 🙂

Is the Battle of Caizhou in the Southern Song Dynasty considered a shame for Jingkang? After all, he chopped off half of the body of the last emperor of the Jin Kingdom and took it back.

When writing about indigenous people, you have to write according to history, and the framework is locked. From a pavilion chief to the founding emperor of the Southern Dynasty, that was the end of it.

Fan value 46784

To be honest, it is too difficult to write a historical conspiracy essay well, not to mention that Liu Yu in history is too strong to write well. It's best to avoid writing about it from powerful people in history.

Is this written about Emperor Wu of the Song Dynasty, Liu Yu and Liu Jinu?

Snow in early spring

I wish everyone good luck and good health

Little fresh girl

You are so talented

Good luck has arrived, I wish you all good luck and good health, and good luck in the Year of the Tiger!

Spring is blooming

The most righteous people who won the country were Liu Bang, the founder of the Han Dynasty, Liu Yu, the emperor of the Song Dynasty, and Zhu Yuanzhang, the emperor of the Ming Dynasty.

Three to four hundred chapters were written about a siege battle, dozens of chapters could be written about a few people's debates, democracy was promoted in the 5th century, and historical military affairs were written as fantasy. I really don't know what the author was thinking. When I read a book now, I can finish a chapter in 5 seconds.

After reading a lot of comments, I have a few words to say. To evaluate a historical figure, you cannot look at that time with the eyes of the present. For example, those who praise Liu Bang and criticize the tyranny of the Qin Dynasty, have you really understood the laws of the Qin Dynasty? Can you search the official laws unearthed from the Qin Dynasty and express your opinions? The previous history classes did talk about the tyranny of Qin. With the unearthed bamboo slips of Qin's official laws, this view should be changed. I don't deny Liu Bang's awesomeness, but there is no need to step on a recognized emperor. Historical records record that the tyranny of Qin Shihuang can be regarded as an emperor throughout the ages, not to mention the unearthed cultural relics of the Qin Dynasty's officials can prove that it was not a tyranny! ? The orthodoxy recognized in ancient times must be the dynasty ruled by the Central Plains people. This should be correct, right? Then the question is, Li Yuan and Li Shiming are of Hu descent (from today's perspective, of course it is orthodox. This is undeniable). Shouldn't it be considered orthodox in the Central Plains at that time? I can't help but say a few words as a fan of Kangxi in the Qing Dynasty. Europe prospered because of the Industrial Revolution, but China's industrial revolution started to appear in the late Ming Dynasty. Why didn't it prosper? That's because the Manchus entered the country. As a backward nomadic people, they occupied the fertile areas of the Central Plains and stifled the signs of China's industrial revolution. From a development perspective, the Qing Dynasty was held back. I feel that a dynasty that is lagging behind is not worth bragging about. The above is only my personal opinion. Please correct me if there are any mistakes. You can also criticize me, but you can use your evidence to criticize me. But I don't accept you using history books to criticize me about the Qin Dynasty. I think the unearthed cultural relics of the dynasty are more authentic than the history books.

How did this kind of writing come to be placed in history? I just finished reading Shao Song Dynasty, and I had nothing to do. When I first read the introduction of this book, I thought that Qin officials started from the grassroots to become the emperor. Oh, Han and Hu are not in harmony, and the king's industry is not in harmony. How did he play such a sign and then write fantasy, and wrote more than 10 million words. Fortunately, I took a look at the comments, otherwise I would have really eaten shit. It can be seen from the chapter names of this article that the author probably did not have an outline. He just wrote whatever came to his mind. It was neither fish nor fowl, and the concept of aliens may appear later. Can these three concepts of prehistoric times, aliens, and unified China be written together? ? ?