One Man’s Immortal Paradise

The cheat settings are okay. I thought I was a farming talent, but the result was a little different from what I thought. 1. The protagonist's status as an ordinary disciple is a constraint. He dares not apply for promotion if he upgrades too quickly, dare not sell good things, and dare not live in the sect (for fear of talking in his sleep and being exposed in time travel 23333)... The status restricts the protagonist from pretending to be X. If the protagonist's status is higher, the situation will be much better. Continue to wait and see how the author develops next. 2. The description of the fight is a bit embarrassing. There was too much talking during the fight, and one after another, the Bengxiong came in from outside the courtyard to fight the protagonist again, talking a lot, which made me very happy. Hhhh, 3. I haven't written about the Goldfinger transformation yet. Goldfinger is a highly concentrated spiritual energy space. There is no soil filling, watering, planting medicine, trees and fish. I don't know if there will be any plot behind it. But it doesn't matter if you don't have it. The author can just write according to his own outline. I'm just giving some advice 😊😊 The dragon egg should come out of the dragon egg later. I don't know if there are any birds. Cats come to join in the fun 4. Oh, by the way, I saw that the label says Xianxia, but there is no fairy energy (that is, the vision of enlightenment, the magic weapon of life, the sea of consciousness, etc.), It feels more like a martial arts, where is the spiritual energy recovery? The force value is also a bit low. Maybe this place is relatively remote and the big guys are behind? Above Thanks to the author, I wish the work a great success!

How should I put it? I recommended it from the Song Dynasty. After reading it, I am not surprised or happy. It is a very popular novel and has basically been used in fantasy before. The author just wrote a little more detailed, but still did not escape the routine of pretending to be a slap in the face. You see, Xianxia ranks first and second, and the pretending ratio they wrote is through the supporting characters (reversely) The portrayal and language of the novel are very natural, making people laugh unconsciously after reading it. They feel that the protagonist is very awesome, instead of using clichéd fighting to show off his strength. From the reader's point of view, the interesting story we want to read is actually very simple. The protagonist is not mentally retarded, the supporting characters are not mentally retarded, and the routines are not repeated. On this basis, the plot is set. The number one scholar in the Song Dynasty that I recommend to you is very good. There is not so much foreshadowing and routines. It is very likely that a large number of readers will leave when the foreshadowing in your writing has some holes. Isn't writing online articles just to make a living? Why bother with money? Just write whatever is comfortable for readers.

Oh my god, the sniper attack on the Southern Song Dynasty has resumed, my heart is beating wildly

I have read several books of this type, which are similar to the flow of a lottery system. It is very enjoyable in the early stage, but it breaks down too easily. None of them can last until the later stage. The author must be careful and cautious in setting up, and the progress of the plot must be stable and cannot be wasted!

I have written five books, and this one is still the best. I really like it. Whether it is the background or logic, or the protagonist's behavior and growth, I can see that the author has greatly improved his skills and the description is very delicate! I hope the author will make this book not as eunuch as the previous books. Keep writing and I will give you my votes for the next day!

Don't I think it would be nice to throw myself in there? After reading the introduction, I haven't read the book yet.

The plot, characters, character, plot are described in detail, the thinking is logical and reasonable, and the storyline is well described. I hope the author can keep it up. I have invested in this book, but don't waste it. Come on! ! !

Is the signal sent by the pig's feet false? Those people who came over had IQ issues. The dragon meat, gallbladder, scales, etc. Were all gone. They didn't even ask first who sent the signal? Without asking what happened here, why did the dragon die? The person who sent the signal is gone and no one cares? Just like dogs biting each other? 😰😰

Very well written. It's this kind of conflict that seems so unnecessary. They are all little people. It's not good to have too much.

The door to fairyland has not yet opened, so look forward to it. Is there a mysterious world behind the door? The fairyland is rich in aura, so why not plant flowers, grass, original species, and some surprises? Those at the bottom of the mortal world are suffering and working hard. Step by step, step by step, you have to step forward. After all, the shallow pool is not where Long Yuan lives. The sea and sky are vast and soaring.