The Scholar of Great Wei

The author wrote it without any brain, and he is arrogant. Don't read this book with your brain.

It has an anticlimactic ending and is the king of bad endings. It can't even be read as a cool article. The foreshadowing is not recycled, and the character's behavior conflicts with his personality. It's a bit cool, but not much.

I have been reading short books for more than ten years, and I rarely write book reviews seriously. Even for wonderful novels, I just give a brief praise, but I want to say something serious about this novel. I came to read it because of the three-star rating of Masterpieces. And because the current economic situation is better than before, and the early writing was also good, which was a lot more enjoyable, I ordered it all. However, to borrow the words of a book friend, this book cured my habit of reading novels all the time. First of all, let's talk about the overall evaluation, three out of five stars. Please note that it is not three stars out of five for Masterpieces, but three stars out of five stars for all books. This book can be regarded as a thoroughly entertaining article. The core logic of the whole text is to make readers happy. It was indeed very enjoyable in the early stages, and there were times when I stayed up late to read it. But there are some silent settings in the later period, such as: the six major systems, all systems to the last level, have similar abilities? Are the speeds about the same? No distinction between superior and inferior? Can one kill the other only by dying together? Then why were the previous grades so different? Different paths lead to the same goal. If you don't know how to write and are too lazy to write about system differences, you won't distinguish so many at the beginning. If you make frequent typos in the later period, you won't review the manuscript? ; Eat books, what was said in the early stage was overturned later, and there is no reasonable logical explanation at all. The above made me feel very disappointed in the second half of the book and wanted to give up the book, but I finally finished it. Here are some suggestions for book lovers who want to read it. If you are a book lover who cares very much about logic and rigor, I suggest you not read it, as it will be very uncomfortable. If you are a book lover who just wants to read interesting articles and doesn't care about anything else, this book is not bad.

I've read 40% of the book and will write a review. First of all, determine your personality, and use a large amount of hay to fill your stomach. No more. The main problems are: 1. The character portrayal deviates from the setting. Confucianism and Taoism are recognized by heaven and earth. Practicing along the way is about cultivating one's character and cultivating one's character. This is a very "classy" practice system, but it is obviously just a trap and the author cannot hold on. What finally emerged was a completely stereotyped villain. No matter what level of Confucianism or Taoism master he was, he was a piss-poor. People not only suspected that the Will of Heaven and Earth was a parallel import journal that accepted any rubbish papers. 2. The author is obsessed with macro narratives such as temple wars and economic and military affairs, but lacks relevant knowledge accumulation. Many of the things written make people feel that they are ridiculous, such as the self-proclaimed "Eternal Famous Story" about opening a bank, and the "nuclear-powered water wheel" that can divert water to irrigate a radius of thousands of miles. To be honest, if you don't know how to write, just avoid it and just fast-forward. Isn't it better to learn from the great master and give someone a quick pass than to slap a swollen face and support a fat person? 3. The focus is not outstanding. The title of the book is Scholar, but there are only a handful of descriptions of "reading" activities. There are not even many copying scenes. There are long paragraphs of character dialogue and psychological descriptions that I don't know. And on this issue, it once again exposed the problem that the author couldn't write and wanted to write it by force. For example, when the protagonist clearly understands the unity of knowledge and action, he broke off most of the chapter. In the end, he couldn't even explain the concept clearly. It's really not as good as copying it from Baidu Encyclopedia. Also, when the protagonist was promoting the waterwheel, he said he was too busy and didn't want to go to the poetry meeting, but his colleagues in the other six films all went there. I don't know how he could promote such a big project by himself. Then the author said he was very busy but didn't say how busy he was, which made people speechless. . There are many other minor problems here and there, but the most prominent ones are the above three points, which greatly affect the reading experience.

The word count situation is too serious, Che Zhulun talks about it back and forth. The details of the five files of the corruption case were written four times in one chapter. The chapters are big chapters, but they all contain repeated content. This happens not only once or twice, but also in the main book. The overall plot feels quite good, and it is good to read as a refreshing article. Some small details and logical problems do not affect the overall situation, but there are too many repetitive contents. I feel that I spent twice the money to buy two books with the same content...

Overall, this book is average and can be read without using your brain. In this world view, the ending is quite hasty and there are many places that you cannot read with your brain. For example, at the end of Xunzi, how do you think he can plant the three demon seals into the body of the protagonist? The protagonist was practicing Confucianism, Taoism, and Martial Arts at that time. He, Xunzi, was at most a sub-sage (second grade of Confucianism and Taoism). How could Xunzi, the protagonist, not notice it? Even the Heaven and Earth Wen Palace and several disciples of great saints in his body were not aware of it? You said that Xunzi is just like Xian Zhi said. I can barely accept it because the protagonist practices different skills and plants the three demon seals. But he can do it without being noticed. How can he commit suicide after being so powerful? Isn't that too hasty? There is also a hole that was dug but not filled. The mentor of the Great Sage did not explain it until the end of the painting. The protagonist died simply. He was promoted to a saint and could not understand his heart... But when he made his intention earlier, he made it very clear. What he followed was not the unity of knowledge and action of Mr. Yangming, but his own unity of knowledge and action. In other words, the great road is indeed his own, and he has gone all the way to the sub-sage. In the end, he said that the learning of the heart is not his own? Those works are indeed not my own, but as mentioned before, saints look for recognition from heaven and earth, no matter how many works they produce, but in the end they clearly know that they are their own, but they can't get over it? Also, Zhu Sheng was manipulated earlier. I really can't figure out how he is not a first-level saint. How can you control a saint who can kill a first-level saint like a dog? Even if he dies, what kind of plot can you control now? Just kill him indiscriminately... There is also the dual cultivation of Taoism and Buddhism, the Tao Te Ching and the Diamond Sutra. There is no solution at all with the Three Demonic Seals. You say that he is unable to be solved by the will of heaven and earth. So in the end, the protagonist has to be a Confucian and Taoist saint? Let's not talk about martial arts, I don't believe in immortality, Buddhism and Taoism, so there is no way to do it. Let's not talk about Buddhism and Taoism. The Tao Te Ching mentioned earlier that it is possible to surpass the level. Buddhism, Taoism, Diamond Sutra and so many Buddhist scriptures, in the end there is nothing except Confucianism and Taoism...

1: The description of the war is true. The article says that the Wei army is very strong. Where is it so strong? Is it that crossbows, weapons and armor are stronger than other countries, or is the per capita force value stronger than other countries? There are also battle formations. Even the Eight Gates' soldiers have battle formations, but the five major armies don't have them? 2. There is also the issue of food and grass. How to meet the food and grass needs of the 900,000-strong army. A young and strong man eats 2 liters of rice every day and needs 0.6 Shi of rice in 30 days; 900,000 people need 540,000 shi of rice in 30 days. And this is only half-full food for ordinary men. As mentioned before, people who practice martial arts eat more. Counting marches, burdens, and war horses, food and grass for 900,000 people for 30 days would cost at least one million dan. I hope to describe it here. Three: The problem of grain and grass transportation. As mentioned before, when marching and fighting, grain and grass are transported to different places. According to the situation of grain and grass transportation during marches in ancient my country, a combat force of 100,000 people generally has more than 300,000 logistics personnel. The author did not explain how many logistics personnel, how many ox-carts and horse-drawn carriages were needed for the 900,000-strong army. Four: The issue of combat power. As one of the five armies of Wei Dynasty, the Qilin Army, one of the top kingdoms, does not have as many top warriors as the top warriors of the small subordinate countries. Is it reasonable? Although it is described that the Marquis can fight one against two at the same level, but what about the 5th grade in the army? Does the 900,000-strong army not even have a 5th or 6th grade? Five: The issue of land area and distance between countries. To be honest, I am now vague about the distribution of countries in the world. I am even a little confused about where the Wei Dynasty is on this continent. I can only speculate that the author wrote it according to the current geographical location of our country. I hope the author will pay attention to this aspect. Six: As a member of the Wei army who participated in 7 Northern Expeditions, readers now feel that in order to highlight Xu Qingxiao, it is a bit too smart. To be honest, instigating rebellion and surprise attacks are a bit disappointing. I hope the author can learn more about the military methods of "Sun Tzu", "Wu Zi", "Sima Fa", "Six Tao", "Wei Liao Zi" and "Three Strategies". The author's early writing was very good, but from the beginning of the war to now, I really feel that my hips are stretched a bit. If you are really not familiar with marching and fighting, you can actually briefly describe the key points such as the military spirit, and then the details of the war can actually be mentioned in one stroke. I hope the author can improve it 👍👍👍

Good writing, Bad story. (I'm not unhappy about it) It's written seriously, it's a bit subjective. If it's wrong, I will accept it and accept the discussion. To be honest, the author's description of the characters is quite good. The plot is also a bit exciting, but the traces are very obvious. You can see the similarity of ideas at a glance. Thinking about innovation, thinking about writing to new heights, constantly thinking about twists and turns, and finally giving this thing? It's really suffering. I want to use the death of the protagonist to improve it. To be honest, it's terrible. With the similarity of ideas, I can only say that it looks like a cat after a tiger is painted, and it doesn't look like a cat. Really, your last happy ending is better than this. The writing is obviously good, but it is written like this. I have been reading novels for almost six years, and this kind of ending is so unexpected. I have never seen a twist at the end. Finally, a postscript and a twist, I am really crazy (sorry I can't help it). To be honest, I was quite interested in watching it at first, and it felt okay, but at the end of it, I was really convinced. Secondly, the writing was too urgent and too tight. I felt like I could have written another one or two million words, laying out the foundation again and again, but it was just written in a sloppy way and ended in a sloppy way, with chicken feathers all over the place. I felt uncomfortable watching the end. It's better not to write the role of the Empress. I feel like this role is just to show the greatness of the protagonist after the death of the protagonist. It's hard to reconcile. It's better to portray some emotions like a watchman and write about the Empress' feelings, and then it clicks. Then why write about her feelings for the protagonist? It's better to write about the feelings between a monarch and his ministers. If you have to write about the feelings between a man and a woman, what's the point. Finally, I feel that this book is just an exercise in writing. The author did not intend to write it well. Please be careful when reading it. If you do not suggest that the protagonist dies in the end, it is very inconsistent. You can also read other comments. Anyway, I felt uncomfortable reading it for four or five days. Alas, I thought it was a single heroine.

I can't stand it when I see the protagonist's intention. According to the author's setting, Confucians are promoted after receiving recognition from heaven and earth, so there can't be big problems at the level of great Confucians. It would be embarrassing to forcibly portray some Confucians as villains to force conflicts. In the beginning, Yan Ru just asked people to follow the law. Isn't it a problem of the government to arrest people randomly? And isn't it normal for him to support his own juniors? If Zhu Sheng's words could be followed completely, then he would be either a great scholar or a saint. What's more, doesn't the protagonist also want to plead for mercy and avoid the law? In this case, it is better to have the protagonist directly question whether the law is too strict, and it can make people take a high look. Then the college said that it has been suppressed for more than 30 years without any detailed foreshadowing, and it seems very embarrassing when the public is excited. When the protagonist makes up his mind, the main idea is, follow my ideas, I don't think it's good, I have to be free and do whatever I want. Isn't this the freedom of the United States? With freedom without the constraints of rules and speaking properly as a villain, can this still be recognized by heaven and earth as a saint? I just sit and can't write, check the information and copy it. If it doesn't work, just open peace or equality for all, communism. This whole thing is so uncomfortable. If your writing is too bad, you should learn more. Some people will like this book, but it will definitely not be a big hit, and it will basically not retain old bookworms. It doesn't matter if there are a few problems, but your entire plot has contradictions from the beginning to the end, and people can't stand it.

Invincible Dacheng, the protagonist is still a child at the end and the title is completely different. In the end, the protagonist dies. There is no saint. This world feels like a mistake. There is no way to break the magic. It is a dead end from the beginning. Anyway, it is not for human eyes. How can you write Confucianism and Taoism like this? Shouldn't man be able to conquer heaven? Shouldn't heaven have a way for man? Anyway, it feels like the protagonist is right. This is the world.

The writing is very good, and many of the holes are filled in far-fetched ways. Many of the holes are not filled in at all. For example, Xu Qingxiao is the teacher of the Great Sage. In addition, the whole system is very confusing and cannot withstand scrutiny. It starts high and goes low. The more you go to the back, the less you can read. The endings of each character and the ending of the whole book can also be said to be nonsense. I feel that the author has more problems with his mentality as he goes to the back. The novel he created is not a refreshing novel. He wants to have depth but cannot portray it. They are not alike, and are very likely to be imitated.

I finally finished reading it. If it wasn't because I wanted to know the ending, I might have given up on it a long time ago. I read this book because it was recommended as a companion volume to Da Feng's Watcher. After reading the whole story, I feel that it is more appropriate to say it is a parody, and even the plot is the same. The word count is a bit low. The story is a good one, but the writing is a bit unsatisfactory. A little disappointed!

How can I put it, this is the first book I have fully ordered. So sorry. The early writing was very good and I thought it was a masterpiece. But the middle and late stages are too intellectual. A slap in the face for the sake of a slap in the face. The villain's character doesn't stand up at all. The big BOSS was gone without writing a few sentences. In terms of characterization, I really hope to learn more from the Cultivation Chat Group. The most disgusting thing is that people often get the wrong names. Too dramatic

The first hundred chapters are quite good, but the more they are written, the more perfunctory they become, and the overall direction is unclear. So many cultivation systems are still ordinary feudal systems in the end. It is said that after five hundred years of layout, the biggest culprit is a first- and fourth-grade Confucian? There are many scammers who don't take care of them. The great sage's mentor? How do you plant the Three Demonic Seals? Can any fourth-grade scholar plant them for others and then destroy them for the rest of the world? In short, there is no logic at all. Even if you write a cool article without any brains, you will write a cool article, but in the end, what does it mean to end it and write the protagonist to death? Want to impress people? I'm almost speechless

I know who this author looks like. The most powerful son-in-law in history should be banned and replaced with a vest. And then I was afraid of being blocked, so I simply stopped writing about stallions? I kind of doubt you are a silent pastry.

After reading about 150 chapters, I came to write a book review. I am not very good at writing simple comments. So far, my impression of this book is okay. I haven't stayed up all night reading a novel for a long time. After reading it all night, I realized that it has just reached more than 100 chapters. Each chapter has a lot of words and the content is compact and the plot is quite attractive. However, after reading the comment section, it is said that it was skipped in the later stages. But based on what I have seen so far, I am still willing to give it five stars. Good luck to the author.

I wanted to fully subscribe to the ninth book, but there was a slight flaw when I read the free chapters, but I found it quite good. The character design of the protagonist and the world view and background were all okay. Until I subscribed to 100 chapters and saw the story of the protagonist after entering Beijing, oh, it really can't work. I don't know if someone else has written it or it's bad. The quality has dropped too much. 1. When the Confucianism and Taoism were initially set at a low level, one's character cannot be understood. When it reaches a high level, one cannot distinguish between right and wrong. If one's character is questionable, one will be very poisonous. This is certified by heaven and earth. 2. The characters in this book are too weak. Everyone is just a tool, without flesh, blood, or soul (the book was recommended by the editor, and the character creation is indeed very weak in comparison). 3. The protagonist's personal psychology and personality feel like he is not the same person before and after. Especially the chapters at the poetry conference are too slow. One chapter contains tens of thousands and nine thousand words, and it is too forced. Forget it, there are still a lot of things I want to complain about, and there's nothing a newbie can do about it.

Overall, this book is above average, and the level is still very good. The author has a very good grasp of the climax, step by step, one after another, and it is very enjoyable to watch the climax one after another. The only drawback is that there is a feeling of jerkiness in the details, and the treatment of some minor characters is a bit out of touch with the protagonist. For example, the "senior brother" is either written to death or not present, which may easily cause readers to send razor blades, hahaha. Overall, it's worth reading. I'm looking forward to the new book in July. I'll be sure to follow up and subscribe when my wallet is not tight.

After careful consideration, I didn't even have subsistence allowances, so I fully ordered this book in the early hours of the morning, which made things worse for my already poor family. I hope the author will stick to it, don't want to be a eunuch, don't give up his writing and change his career, write happily forever, enjoy writing, love you, accept my three thanks, boom... Boom... Boom

After reading it for a while, I just had an event so I ordered the rest at half price. I will take a break and read your new book again. I hope there will be progress. The pace of this book is really too tight. Not only did the protagonist get tired, but I also got tired from reading it. The violence was a bit heavy and I always felt suffocated in my heart. I couldn't vent all the unhappiness in my heart even by slapping my face.

How to say it? I've read more than 200 chapters, and it's quite interesting if I read it earlier. It's quite interesting. But since I reached 200 pictures, I started to stretch my hips inexplicably. Even now I don't want to look forward, I already have the ending. I understand, and I only read the chapter list. The book is a good book, but the subsequent descriptions are too repetitive. It can be said that all the villains are basically one after another. When one dies, the next one will follow the same routine. It is easy to get tired of watching. Therefore, I will basically not watch the remaining films again, which is meaningless. Let me give you a fair review. The early part is too long, and the later part is too fast. It's easy to feel like you can't stand it anymore. The length in the early stage was quite good, but suddenly it went so fast. I can only say it's average. But it's still worth watching.

I haven't read it yet. I just looked at all the chapter names. Your chapter name is too long, and your chapter is also too long. An ordinary chapter is 40/50 pages, and a long chapter is 80/90 pages. I can't fix it. . . After buying it, which was obviously 2.4 Million words long, it showed that there were only more than 300 unread chapters. I thought there was something wrong with my phone.

Xu Qingxiao

Come on, the donkeys in the production team don't dare to rest like this

The comment area is too violent. Many people are refined egoists and have some weird values. I hope the author can keep his original intention, take the essence and discard the dross, and stick to his general direction 😡😡

The book is very nice 😍 and the foreshadowing is very good!

I am a student and just finished reading the free plot, and I would like to give the author some small suggestions. I have read many time travel novels that have plots of copying poems. To be honest, I am not disgusted with the plot of copying poems. However, many authors write protagonists who copy poems, which is simply mindless copying. Not to mention the allusions in many famous poems in my country that have been passed down through the ages. No, just say that the place name in the poem does not match the image represented in the fictional world poem. For example, in many Chinese poems, the alien world such as Luoyang may not exist at all, and the author does not explain it, which shows a serious sense of disconnection. Also, the age, mood, and experience required for some protagonists to copy poems and be able to write such poems are not in line with their own age, mood, experience, etc. In this case, the author describes the protagonist's description of the plot of everyone being amazed after copying poems. It is really difficult to bring in, and it is very awkward to watch. So I hope the author can pay attention to this in the plot written below. I'll give this book a try first. Is there any enthusiast who can tell me if there is such a situation in this book so that I can have an understanding?

It's not enough to watch. I'll have to wait for a while to watch this.

I've given you ten votes, and I'll vote to the upper limit 😅

Is the author from Hunan? Brain pain😁😁