Star Catcher: Master of the Star River

300,000 Words can bring glory to Samsung. After reading the first 30 chapters, I can only say that there are many rich people in the author's circle of friends.

I hope the protagonist and Ning Xiyu are together. If they are not together, it means that the protagonist is not sincere to Ning Xiyu. What the protagonist does for her becomes a joke. Since you don't like her, why do you want her to be your assistant? Wouldn't you be upset when you see her? This is the typical eating from the bowl and looking at the pot. Nangong Caiyue did not misunderstand that she was a ghost.

Such incredible basic materials cannot be preserved without absolute strength. You must know that what flower growers lack is not high technology but basic materials. To give a simple example, the lifespan of the Raptor and the Veyron are 6800:3800. What is the difference? It's the material! So once a divine object like Chitian Porcelain is born, it will inevitably be stared at by countless pairs of blood-red eyes. It depends on how the old man deals with all kinds of monsters.

Although it has just started, it looks very strange. I originally thought it was a science fiction article when I came in and read it for a long time, but there was no trace of science fiction at all. Although it doesn't feel like it's being sent directly by the system, it's no different from sending it directly. It's just a matter of learning. And there is a little more space to write about love. It doesn't matter if you write about love. After all, even military themes now include love, but when you write about love, it feels like Boss Cao. You are talking about a girlfriend here, and you are still thinking about a wife. Is this a positive energy? Don't wait until the aliens have exported the protagonist, fell in love, and intrigued with the guys on the earth. If you are writing about space, can you have a broader vision? Don't let the protagonist rely on a defeated alien civilization to develop. The enemy has devoured the entire alien civilization and is still standing still. I won't say anything else. I was speechless after looking at the first few dozen pictures (personal opinions are for reference only)

This book is novel and creative in terms of its opening idea. It tells an ordinary person who acquires advanced civilization and technology and makes a fortune leading the interstellar era of stars and seas. I think the cornerstone of the whole story should be that with the help of Basha, he gradually built a technological empire of his own, dominating one small circle after another, leading an industry to leading an industry, leading a field to leading the development of the entire planet. Then support Basha and lead the Ditu civilization back to its former glory. Although the middle span is very large, the technical hard knowledge is high, and it is difficult to write, it is still very exciting. Moreover, the description of specific technological aspects is not based entirely on imagination, but is based on thinking based on reality.        ，，， As far as my personal reading experience is concerned, the writing is smooth but a little pale, and it feels like a plain narration of a story that has already happened. When narrating the protagonist's understanding of the world at the beginning, the real sense of vicissitudes of life helps the reader to get involved with the protagonist of the story. However, just writing about principles without the protagonist's specific experience will give people a sense of preaching. The vicissitudes of life represent stories, the process of realizing the truth and the help it will have on one's later life. It is also refreshing to see a young man who is supposed to be ignorant but use his experience to overcome invisible obstacles. However, I personally feel that the old man failed to handle it well.        ， I have been tricked many times just a little bit. If I give you an example of how being tricked turned into a setback and trouble, and created the sloppy and jobless situation of the protagonist now, it will be easier to have a sense of empathy. Then, when it comes to selecting the location of the toy factory, recruiting employees, introducing talents, etc., When negotiating with leaders or seeking cooperation, the procedures are not explained clearly. After all, not every reader has such an experience. Just relying on the undercurrents under various polite manners will make everything clear. I believe that many readers cannot do this and are confused. Then there are the characters. As the protagonist of the book who needs to be brought in, he was not that likable in my reading experience. It is true that an adult in his thirties has a big house, a mobility scooter worth nearly one million, and several million in savings. This cannot be said to be a failure, and the two sisters have connections and can borrow the start-up funds for starting the factory. The family conditions are definitely not bad. From the beginning, I was disappointed with life and just wanted my wife and children to be on the hot bed. After I got an adventure, I was still not too excited. Then I inherited the goal of becoming a big company and becoming a Fortune 500 company after inheriting civilization. From the beginning to the end, I couldn't feel the charm of the protagonist. Part of the start-up capital for the factory was borrowed from my sisters. The location of the factory was selected based on my sisters' connections and the help of my blind date's sister. Then there was the entanglement between the two girls Nangong Caiyue and Ning Xiyu. There is no problem with the logic and it is very close to reality. But from the beginning to the end, I felt that the male protagonist was alone and had no pressure to survive. He was supported by a pair of hands all the way. The smooth sailing was a bit boring and gave people the illusion of being a bit weak and soulless. Learning new knowledge and strengthening one's body does not seem to require any perseverance from the male protagonist, as long as he can finish it comfortably in his dream. The entanglement between the two women is also muddled. It's hard to comment on the emotional line, but it's really not to my taste. Nangong Caiyue has used others as a shield from the beginning. The male protagonist is not handsome, and their daily interactions are only comfortable. However, she felt that she liked him just by taking care of him when he was sick. Given Nangong Caiyue's conditions, it was not possible. Ning Xiyu's image is too little described as she only loves children. I don't make any comments either. What if she was the heroine? I would be uncomfortable. It can be seen that the old man has many ideas of his own, and I personally am optimistic about those ideas. However, the old man tried to learn from earlier cool novel routines, such as the multi-beautiful reverse style (I feel that this trend is developing), the naming and setting of characters (the beautiful Nangong sisters), and the adventurous adventure of going abroad to fight with force (the current plot). On the one hand, it writes realistic truths, and on the other hand, it writes cool writing routines that are far from real life. The contrast in the middle will bring a great sense of dissonance to readers. I think the characterization of the male protagonist also needs to be strengthened a lot, such as the portrayal of personal abilities (regardless of management, learning, etc.), Which can also be regarded as an explanation of the country he has built (a big house, a mobility scooter worth nearly one million, and several million in savings). There is also the sincerity of the male protagonist in dealing with others. He is simple and silly, but it is not enough. Moreover, the male protagonist gave me a tendency to develop in the direction of a scumbag, which would be contrary to the character image of simple, traditional and silly sincerity.        ， But my personal feeling is that it is not a masterpiece. The old man must continue to work hard! Come on!

The storyline of this book is quite well designed, and the development trend is also very exciting. It is the kind of book that you will find boring if you read it casually, or even feel that you don't know what you are reading, but it will be completely different if you keep reading. . . (My personal feeling after watching it, don't criticize if you don't like it) The character substitution is also just right. The faces of giants from various countries, the intrigues of business giants from all sides, etc., Make the protagonist, a rookie who has just started to upgrade, play a very good supporting role in absorbing upgrade experience. In terms of emotions, this one is a bit messy. I guess it has something to do with someone's dream or something. I won't comment on this. After all, it is a novel world and does not represent reality. I just hope that the protagonist can sort out his emotional thinking in the future, so that people will not feel confused after reading it. Another small comment I would like to mention: every time the scene changes, there is always a very sudden and forced jump, which makes people feel unsmooth. Also, when changing chapters, the ending and beginning are not rounded, and the storyline continues. The continuation makes people feel like they can't keep up with the rhythm. I hope the author can optimize this aspect My cultural level is limited, so it's no wonder if I complain poorly. 😁 It's just my personal opinion after reading it. I don't welcome trolls. Thank you for your cooperation. Finally: I wish this book will get better as it gets written, have more and more readers, and become a hit! ! !

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It was quite enjoyable to read at the beginning, with just one or two hundred words. The protagonist is not very fond of today's society. He is helpless in the declining world but does not want to join in the bad things. He is not successful but has the capital to live well. The image of a contented and happy person who lives alone is vividly written on the paper. But the background setting that followed for nearly a chapter and a half actually somewhat destroyed the attractive coherence of the overall reading. At first, I asked the protagonist to sign a contract, which felt a little wrong: First: the contract must be protected by strength. How can we ensure that the protagonist can abide by it after he becomes stronger and surpasses it? Second: Why not cast a wider net and just select one protagonist to train? After all, today's supercomputers can run in N threads at the same time. With the technology of level 6 civilization, it can definitely cast a wide net for N pairs at the same time. Thirdly, the commander's last order is to find a predestined natural intelligent life to inherit the inheritance of the empire's civilization. The word "fate" makes me feel that something is wrong (do alien civilizations in the outer universe still talk about fate?) I can't help but think about it. For example, after the extraterrestrial civilization came to this universe, it was targeted by the Gaia consciousness of the universe and had no fertility. As a result, all of them died now, and they had to find someone to inherit the civilization. The contract I mentioned above, and the fact that only one protagonist is cultivated, can actually be explained in the author's setting: It directly let the commander finally realize that Gaia's consciousness does not recognize outsiders and wants to destroy them. One of the 50 Great Dao and 49 Tianyan escapes, leaving the outsider with the last chance: find someone with a level 1 civilization in this universe to invest. If the investment is successful, there will finally be a chance to restore the alien civilization, but it is not allowed to operate too much at the same time, so with the contract, there is only one investment in the protagonist. In addition, without the protagonist's order, the alien intelligent machine cannot even actively mine energy for development (if it develops, it will be destroyed by the universe). Why did one of the 50 Tianyan 49 people escape in the end? Is science fiction related to fairy tales or fantasy? Because I think the author has laid the groundwork: the towering giant tree (World Tree), the level 6 beast civilization that destroyed the alien civilization, is just a servant civilization of a certain civilization, and laid the groundwork for the opposite belief in the Shinto system (I don't know when it will be filled in), and then escaped to this universe and was targeted by Gaia's consciousness, which also hints at the existence of the mysterious system. I'm really looking forward to seeing how the author arranges it. I personally feel that it's not easy to arrange. The article has already given examples of DJI's toy airplanes, which need to be supported by core technologies to become big and strong. To be a toy company, if you want to be a Fortune 500 company within five years, you must have a complete set of core technologies. I don't know how the author will arrange it. I'm looking forward to it. Speaking of expectations, I actually feel that writing about a super toy company, there is another point, the large industrial chain supporting facilities must involve a lot of realistic descriptions, and judging from the foreshadowing of blind dates and the iceberg beauty downstairs, it is estimated that there will be a lot of urban writing. Reality is difficult to write, so you can't write too much. I don't know whether the author will focus on science fiction and write about the protagonist developing on the Blue Star, and then the Blue Star will engage in interstellar trade and interaction with the local alien civilization, or the protagonist will just jump out alone to open a dungeon? What will be the first toy? Smart robot toys? I think it's good to write this. The existing chip processors can actually make good ones. In the initial development stage, just assembly and hardware can actually make good intelligent robots. If coupled with the alien civilization AI black technology program, the robots can be endowed with low-level AI and be invincible. In the future, they can also enter industrial applications or military applications. This is purely a personal opinion, don't take it too seriously.

Sit back and wait for the eunuch🤭

I don't know how to put it, but the character creation of Ning Xiyu is really a failure... You can create such a female character in the novel who is cheated of money and sex by a scumbag, but don't hook up with the male protagonist, because this kind of female character gives readers a very bad impression. She is extremely irresponsible for her own life. She gave birth to a child before marriage, gave birth to a child for Neptune, and then was abandoned. The result is still the same. The heroine's goddess is really speechless and feels like she ate shit. If Ning Xiyu's background was rewritten, it would be a normal marriage and children, and then her husband died in a car accident or her business failed and she was owed a lot of debt and committed suicide by jumping off a building. It would be 10,000 times better than this image of being defrauded of money and sex by a scumbag... 🤫🤫🤫🤫