The Beloved, Unruly Princess Consort

Shaoling Paddock

Nowadays, there are thousands of novels, but there are always some novels that are strangely similar to the same genre. Some novels even have to soften and soften the previous elements in order to be different. So much so that in a book like this one, it is necessary to set up a drama in which the heroine travels through time and the hero is reborn to enhance the so-called attraction and drama. So what is this book like? Let's take a look at it from three aspects. First of all, the setting of the entire plot. At the beginning of the novel, a TV drama-like scene of an attack in the woods is used to mobilize the initial conflict of the novel with the story atmosphere of the novel. The relationship between the male and female protagonists, their identities, background settings, and first impressions of the characters are introduced through character dialogue. It can be said that the handling of the first chapter at the beginning is very perfect, and it smoothly leads the story to the main part, instead of always expounding the previous points, which makes people upset. In the process from Chapter 2 to Chapter 10, the author's description of the plot is getting better and better, especially using the memory blind spot that the heroine is just traveling through time, while the hero is reborn in the second life (having contact with the heroine in the previous life). Through the matter of marriage, the relationship between the characters in the plot and the process of their rivalry are vividly described. Of course, the plot is not 100% perfect when written like this. One of the biggest problems is that the plot transitions are unnatural and can easily make readers confused. A good story requires readers to be completely immersed in it and unable to extricate themselves. Therefore, the author needs to pay attention to transitions and certain minor problems (such as grammatical application, fluent sentence structure, etc.) In future writing. After talking about the plot, let's talk about the characters. For the entire novel, especially for the first ten chapters, the characterization is remarkable, and this is not bad at all. But in terms of the overall plot, you may remove the plot and just look at the characters. Whether your character is the protagonist or the supporting role, you still have not broken away from the flatness. In other words, the character is not alive, and there is no point where you can immediately remember who this character is and what his personality is when you look at the name. Of course, you can also say that ten chapters are not enough, but the author wants to remind you that for an author, telling the outline of a story in five chapters and establishing one or two vivid characters in ten chapters are what the author must experience on the way to growth. Otherwise, you will write ten million words, and you will still be a loser or a loser. If you don't believe it, you can look at the changes in character portrayal in the novels of those platinum masters before they became gods. But then again, criticism cannot cover up the highlights you have shown in certain places (for example, the description of the heroine before she got married is very cinematic), so you have the ability to break through yourself, but you are too content with the status quo, or you are not aware of it. Then finish talking about the details and then read the whole story. To be honest, I have read too many palace battles or ancient novels like this. I have read them all, both bitter and sweet. Whether it's time travel or not, whether it's a ruthless character or a silly and sweet one, I've watched it over and over again. But this book handles it very well, whether it describes the conflict in the first hundred words of the first chapter, or the introduction of identity and the main text later, and even some foreshadowing of the male protagonist. Furthermore, the combination of characters and scenes in the story and the smoothness of the plot made me still unsatisfied after reading the first ten chapters. But here I am, I think you can at least read this book, after all, you have writing skills. And it is not easy for a newcomer to write like this. Okay, I won't say any more polite words at the end, just wish the author can reach the LV5 or LV4 throne with this book.

On the surface, this seems to be a story about "the overbearing prince fell in love with me", but it is much more than that. The heroine was a professionally trained elite in her previous life. While performing a mission to kill transnational criminals, she was ambushed and died. She was reborn in this different world of the Zhou Dynasty. Lu Banlan, the unruly young lady of the Lu family, was born after the founding fathers of the country. She has six brothers who are as doting on their sisters as they are crazy. The eldest brother gallops on the battlefield, the second brother is a wild man, the third brother is talented, the fourth brother is good at business, the fifth brother is a master in the apricot forest, and the sixth brother is innocent. Although the six brothers have different personalities, they all love Turning the Tide and are obedient to Turning the Tide. Even if it takes the moon in the sky, they will pick it off. At the beginning, six brothers are planning a wedding to turn the tide. Let's look at the male protagonist again. He is Xiao Yanzhi, King of Yan of the Zhou Dynasty. He is the sixth son of the late emperor. He has a cold personality and commands thousands of troops. He is guarded and feared by his brothers and the emperor. The male protagonist is also reborn. He was stabbed in the previous life. , Unfortunately failed. In this life, he wanted to rebuild the country and rebuild the world, so he no longer wanted to have anything to do with the fierce wife of the Lu family. Unexpectedly, he wanted to turn the tide but wanted to marry into Prince Yan's palace. By chance, they met thousands of miles away, and the two finally became husband and wife. After marrying into the palace, the male protagonist and the female protagonist are like a big bad wolf and a little white rabbit (in fact, the female protagonist is a little fox). After sharing life and death and blending emotions time and time again, turning the tide gradually melts Xiao Yanzhi's cold heart, and the emotional drama between the two is also very interesting. Xiao Yanzhi is hard-spoken but soft-hearted, while Turn the tide is greedy for his male charms. The interaction between the two is also very sweet. King Yan's valiant and heroic appearance makes the princesses of the enemy country fall in love with him. However, Turn the tide finally occupies the only position in the heart of this iron-blooded man with hidden tenderness. Not only is the emotional drama of this book very delicate, but the escape and concern of the brothers who turn the tide also make the novel full of interest. The ups and downs in the court, the strategizing, and the confrontation between the two armies on the battlefield, with weapons and weapons, are all written vividly. From the various details in the text, it can be seen that the author has a very deep foundation and has put a lot of effort into this book. It is not just a simple love story, there are many elements, and you will always find what you like. The heroine is not a weak woman with no power, and her skills are not ordinary. In terms of personal fighting plots, the descriptions are also very graphic, such as the polo match. The setting is very novel, and the plot has ups and downs, making the reader's heart fluctuate with the scenes in the book, worrying about the heroine's danger, and rejoicing in the heroine's victory. The author is very able to grasp our pleasure, just right, and not blunt. Each character is also portrayed with its own characteristics. From the description of language and behavior, you can see the different personalities and images of the characters. The author's writing skills are very strong, and you can also see the author's continuous progress. Finally, I wish this book will get better and better, and the author will do his best! ! ! Looking forward to the follow-up plot!

This book~ How can I put it this way? This is the first time I have seen so many descriptions of ancient firearms and wars in a female novel. This work is very readable and the scenes described are very graphic. I don't know if it will be adapted into a film or television, but it actually has the potential. Not inferior to many great masters, I don't know why not many people seem to discuss it or recommend it.

I was amazed as soon as I walked in. The scene of the heroine being chased was vivid in my mind! Chi Zheng: The heroine's guard is the highlight from the beginning. Chi Zheng is very fast and accurate. Let the readers get hooked right away. Following on, the emergence of the heroine's group pampering capital is even more wonderful. The heroine's feeling of being spoiled makes me so worried! Fortunately - the heroine has traveled through time, has an exquisite and clear brain, and is the favorite of six wealthy and handsome men, which can easily make people want to pursue her! The most memorable scene for me is the scene where the heroine gets married and is rejected by the reincarnated hero (the hero's predecessor was tortured due to the Game of Thrones and the heroine's predecessor), but the heroine Lu Wanlan still had an alternative grand wedding scene! Eye-catching index of the screen! The next scene is the scene where the heroine is imprisoned in the wolf den by King Yu. It is very exciting and the scenes are also memorable. The male protagonist breaks into the wolf den alone to get his wife, the heroine fights wits and courage with King Yu, Chi Zhengyong fights the hungry wolf, etc. The scenes are all unforgettable!         .  ，，，！ So sweet, so sinister, so enjoyable. .. A good work actually allows readers to remember the story and scenes in it, and to recall the living habits of the hero and heroine, their smiles, their joys and sorrows. I have already read the latest chapter. I don't want to go into too much detail about the reasons why I can continue to follow the show. Anyway, it's useless to brag about it. Only after reading it will I have the motivation to follow it! Readers who have not read in depth, I hope they can taste it carefully and slowly! You won't be disappointed! Let's write this much for now! I will share the plot with you later! Come on, author!

This book creates a romantic world in the name of time travel or rebirth. Here, family ties can be very romantic, love can also be very romantic, and even intrigues between gangsters can be very romantic. As a novel with a heroine, the author Yun Shui has devoted himself to creating a smart and lovely heroine Lu Banlan, as well as many types of handsome brothers. There is always one suitable for you as a girl. When we evaluate novels, we must always base our evaluation on the characters, storyline, and social environment. The book uses a historical fictional environment, and the main stage is set between the changes of dynasties, which can be said to have earned enough attention. This kind of changing and ups and downs background will always make people want to stop. Unfortunately, there always seems to be some shortcomings in the creation of characters in the book. Stereotyped characters can easily affect the plot of the story, making it unavoidably cliche. Fortunately, Yunshui can always make the characters collide and create sparks. With the vivid dialogue of the characters, he outlines one good show after another. The various plots overlap and often make people enjoy watching. All in all, as a sweet Internet novel, this book can definitely make you laugh in your spare time. Although there are many shortcomings in writing style and technique, the author's clever setting of the plot more than makes up for it. We can look forward to Yunshui's future performance, and hope Yunshui can continue to work hard! Above.

Very interesting and readable book

I have caught up with the latest chapter of Yunshui Dada, so I am here to write a book review~ Overall review: The writing is powerful, the pictures are full of sense, the characters are vivid, and the plot is unconventional. It is a rare classic classic novel. The setting of the article is that the female protagonist time travels and the male protagonist is reborn, but compared with the ordinary time-traveling female protagonist's omnipotent and explosive setting, the female protagonist Lu Wanlan is more realistic. She will be stupid and make mistakes, she is fierce when fighting, and she is unpredictable when she acts coquettishly. In addition, the setting of this article also includes the group favorite. The heroine has six brothers with different personalities and abilities. However, she is in a family with thousands of favors. Lu Bunlan still does not forget to be prepared for danger in times of peace. She is the group favorite, but she is not stupid and sweet. She has a good IQ online and has good strategies. Isn't it more interesting to be a strong woman who is favored by the group? Let's talk about the male protagonist. He was killed by the female protagonist in his previous life, which caused him to avoid Lan Lan at first, but when he couldn't avoid it, he was unconsciously attracted to her. However, all the past lives in his mind made him desperately restrain his feelings. He was very affectionate towards Lan Lan. It's love and hate. This kind of contradiction lies between the two, which makes readers feel heartbroken when they read it. However, I think sooner or later, the male protagonist will find out that the female protagonist is different and really fall in love with her. By then, I believe Yiyun Shui Dada's writing power must be sweet 😍 because now he is jumping sideways repeatedly on the edge of driving 😏 It's so exciting The most outstanding part of this book is the sense of pictures. Whether it is a battle, or a big scene such as a wedding, a court, a banquet, etc., The detailed descriptions of the environment, clothing, dressing up, etc. Are all carefully crafted, making people unconsciously imagine the sense of the picture. If it were drawn into comics or made into a drama, it would be great! In addition, the supporting characters are outstanding, including the beautiful and sassy Chi Zheng cub, the naive Tang Feng, the romantic second brother, the innocent and young sixth brother, the fifth brother who is a kindhearted doctor, the scholarly Duan Lin, the ruthless and infatuated King Yu, the ruthless princess, the enslaved Hai Ling... These are the characters that impressed me deeply. They are not flat and appear very vividly on the page. The only shortcoming is that some brothers appear too little 😂 so the impression is not that deep, but it is not a big problem, the brothers also have their own busy schedule~ Let's talk about the struggle in the court and harem and the game between different forces in this book. It can be said to be complicated and confusing. It seems that everyone has their own small thoughts. It is precisely that there is no mediocrity in the harem, and there is basically no room for the survival of characters who are subdued. Da Da is extremely careful in the layout and arrangement. I don't know where the male protagonist and female protagonist will go in the end in this struggle. Whether they can turn danger into safety and achieve positive results remains to be seen~ Come on (๑´∀`๑) One chapter a day is not enough, please update 😍

This is a group favorite. There are so many brothers that I can't count them on one hand because there are six of them. The roles of the brothers are all very important: Currently catching up with the newest eldest brother is only in memories. The second brother, the fourth brother and the sixth brother were involved in things with Lu Banlan at the beginning. I think the three of them can be regarded as the ones responsible for the demolition of the capital! The third brother began to go to Shanxi to investigate the case, and recently returned to Beijing, and also experienced a series of thrilling events. It can be said that this is a child of luck, which is an incredible existence. Fifth brother has been in trouble recently, and the setting of the imperial doctor makes it difficult for him to get out of the quagmire of palace fighting. The rest of the male characters are all outstanding. Wei Qi, the general of Shenji Camp, is silly and sunny. Boss Yao Songming always pays attention to details and is righteous. The silly Tang Feng with square head and big face. The vicious King Yu wants revenge. The most miserable elder of the Guying Sword Sect, the Iron Clawed Pulsatilla, is actually a really good character. This old man is cute. I hope there will be more scenes. I think his junior brother Oriharojun is also a good character. I hope the author will bring them back soon when he starts writing. But I don't know what will happen if the white-headed man is going to serve in the army 😂😂😂 Let's talk about Duan Lin, the emperor's cabinet minister who got into the dog hole. This appearance is really the appearance of a villain and a stubborn old man. During this time, the old man appears in front of the readers with an arrogant and domineering attitude looking for trouble. Although I didn't hate him at first, I just thought he was a clown. I don't know how to be a wise man who keeps a low profile and bides his time in this troubled world. He would even be willing to be King Yan's pawn and go to death to remonstrate because his tuition money was misappropriated. This damn advice was ruined by Duan Lin. But as more and more forces appear, everyone observes the situation, assesses the situation, and treats the dynasty and the emperor. The only direct minister who is upright, has a clear stand, scolds the emperor at the top, and scolds the ministers at the bottom is simply too rare! Just like a ray of light, it reminds us that this court is never dark. How could he, a veteran of such a high position, not be able to see through the situation at this time, but still be able to stick to his heart and not follow the crowd? Furthermore, when educating his children, he will not stick to the old rules and serve the people. He is simply a weapon for the country in troubled times. However, the old gentleman finally gave up everything about the prince and grand master and gave the prince to Taifu Xie. He probably felt that he could not give the prince the highest rights and means to cultivate him. I hope this role will become more and more brilliant!

I have read a lot of book reviews, and they all say the same thing. The setting of the story is very brilliant! The male protagonist is reborn as a prince, and the female protagonist travels through time and space. They had emotional entanglements in their previous lives, but they come together again in this life. Moreover, the heroine has six brothers with different styles, personalities, and abilities. The reputation is extremely bad, but the heroine also turns the tide time and time again. Mixed with plots and war scenes, the palace battles and the turmoil between the aristocratic families But having said so much, I want to say something different. Throwing aside the writing style and settings, there are a few other points that attract me the most. 1. Scene, service, food, action, firearms, war, battle. It can be said to be meticulously crafted and extremely luxurious. The details are in place. Especially the recent birthday party drama. A truly thrilling fight scene. The descriptions of "Hundred Birds Chao Feng Shou Noodles" in it are breathtaking, including many mansions, polo fields, Prince Yu's Wolf Castle, Prince Yu's Mansion, prisons, prisons, palace buildings, sentry deer paddocks, the battles of the hot weapon era at the Seventeenth Ferry, and the moments of life and death during the fighting. The descriptions are vivid and colorful. The descriptions of many of the characters' clothes, such as the princess's phoenix crown and Xia Pei, and the prince's blue robes and woolen clothes, are all based on the descriptions of service in the Ming Dynasty, as well as war horses, matchlock guns, etc. It must be said that they are quite exquisite and labor-intensive. 2. The battles in the court are really one after another, and the waves are turbulent. Here, I want to talk about a few characters. Duan Lin, a straight minister who got into trouble, a cabinet minister of the emperor, the prince's grand master, and the minister of the Ministry of Rites. At first, this character thought that he was an old fool with no ability, but with the current plot, he only felt that he was the only loyal minister in this troubled world who dared to speak out and fight with the imperial power! Literary character and integrity! Xie Bi has appeared in the last few chapters, but it can be said that in the world of Machiavellianism, Taifu Xie is the ceiling of combat power. Although he is not in the temple, he knows everything about the world! Yao Ting'an is a very mysterious character, but he is very knowledgeable about current affairs. 3. The struggle in the harem. It's bloody and dark, and it's not inferior to the previous men's battlefield battles. Recently, another one died. I don't know what will happen. 4. Use one small story after another to turn it into a big event. It is the recklessness and accidents of the protagonist group to advance the plot and always take you on a roller coaster. This is awesome. The meaning of selling salt in salty cloth and delivering goods in coffins, ice cream and milk tea is sweet and cute. The author always describes the luxurious life of a wealthy lady, but she also has an innocent heart! 5. Expected branch lines: Dan, Ba, Qi, Bu: Hai Ling, Li Ying, Chi Zheng, Prince Wu Lunge, and Princess Longge. Guying Sword Sect: Iron Claw Pulsatilla, Zheye Langjun, Ming Yuexi, Feng Zhiyan, and the concubine Shu Ming Feiyan who is always mentioned repeatedly, and Yue Chong. In fact, Yue Chong is really remarkable Shenji Camp: Wei Qi , Yao Songming, Yue Chong and others Twelve Linshui Cities, Zhuyahai Islands, Liaodong, and the Thirty-Seven Barbarians in Lingnan, these are just mentioned. I don't know if the author will expand on them later. These feelings are worth digging into. Harem: Queen Wang, Concubine Xie, the crown prince's biological mother, and Duan Lin's daughter, they all feel like they are not easy to mess with. The marriages of the six elder brothers: At present, only the sixth elder brother has an official wife, Yao Shuiyue, and the rest are only the second elder brother's talk and talk to the princess, and the rest have not yet appeared. That's it. I think the author has only written a little bit, and there is still a lot that needs to be continued.