The Returning Sword Immortal

I think the names of many book friends can be directly used as supporting characters! Song Qingyi, Lu Xuejue, Shang Xinsu, Xiao Zuixian. I've decided! I'm going to name my supporting cast according to the fan rankings! In addition to Qin Feiyan's small theater, I have another personal building!

The names of some of Fat Xiao Xiao Qi's magical methods and even characters are simply unsightly, and they feel so good that a European royal family turned into an African chief. A name building is established here, and everyone contributes some good names for Fei Xiaoxiao to adopt.

To be honest, I have never read a book that made me so angry. The free chapter at the beginning is so bad. Che Zhulun talks endlessly, and the explanations in his head are all nonsense! I also like to pile up settings, just like the newcomers who ask questions on Zhihu, pouring the settings into your mouth one by one like cookies. Maybe this approach, which was considered a highlight in the virus era, seems very novel after 17 years? Usually when I am recommended a book like this, I immediately abandon it. However, the character setting is quite interesting and makes me want to read it. However, the more I read, the more nonsense the screen becomes. The more I read, the less happy I become. Reading the book becomes a pain in the ass. There is nothing wrong with three views, there is nothing wrong with human relationships. These things are not poisonous in my opinion, but the reason why I came to the book circle for the first time to criticize a book is that I was driven crazy by the writing style of this piece of writing! I rarely criticize a book because I am a classicist. I like to see the author's careful foreshadowing, the trivial life matters that have nothing to do with the plot, the vivid descriptions of scenery on the page, and the details that suddenly touch people's hearts... But! This is not nonsense! Especially the talk about the wheel! ! ! If I would rather stop updating for a few days and change the beginning, otherwise your conversion rate for this wave of recommended authors on the homepage would only be 300 subscriptions!

The best part of this book may be the first two chapters. I was deeply impressed after reading it. No matter how much the enemy insults, humiliates, or slanders, the protagonist does not say a word throughout the whole process and just fights back with his sword. At the end of the road, it is better to break the jade than to destroy it. The image of indifference, loneliness, determination, and pain is deeply rooted in people's hearts.

The text is long and verbose, longer than the old lady's foot-binding cloth, and smells terrible. The description of the scenery in the first chapter is pretty good. In the following chapters, the description of the protagonist's psychology and the fight between the masters are all about.

I can honestly say that the writing at the end is a hundred times better than the beginning. I scolded me while reading it. Fortunately, you didn't lie to me. It's really much better. However, if you are still so verbose in your next article, you will definitely lose your baby. There are many good novels that like multiple settings. The best novels have a setting that is just like a snake and a gray line, stretching for thousands of miles. Unknowingly, you accept it. The second kind of novels have a separate chapter at the beginning of the text to explain the general setting, and the main text is full of points. Although it is a bit unsophisticated, it still works. Those who are critical and critical can study it carefully; the worst thing is that the author is like this. In order to make everyone understand, he crams a lot of settings at the beginning, and then writes slowly and slowly. He has no patience, and basically scares away those who are not true love. I also found that the author really likes to use certain sentence patterns, and often explains them repeatedly to arrive at the rationality of the protagonist's behavior. In fact, as I said before, there is no need to explain it frequently, which will make the writing very logical and seem very long-winded, not refined enough, and a bit watery. There are several chapters that remove the rambling settings and repeated explanations and memories, which are basically negligible. I skipped them and read them without affecting the reading effect. I suggest that the author really changes it in the future. Just think of it as a deep love and deep responsibility. Although there are various shortcomings, but the three views are correct, there is no hostility or evil spirit that can easily destroy the whole family. There is no slutty or filthy spirit in the words, and there is no tendency to lower the IQ and be unable to control the lower body when seeing a woman.

The author feels that he is too entangled in explaining various things. The explanation of one practice and one realm is acceptable. But the motivation for a certain attitude towards someone or a certain approach may be that the author is afraid of appearing poisonous points. In fact, it is unnecessary to explain repeatedly, and it may even be self-contradictory. This is intolerable.

Free entry only. What follows is my personal feeling. I couldn't stand it after reading Chapter 26. Take the practice of Qinglian Zen as an example. For example, what the author wrote is like the diary of a primary school student in the past. For example, my mother cooked a meal today, how much rice was cooked, how much water was added, how many spoons of salt was added to the vegetables, and finally, today's rice was really delicious. Do you feel this way? The author thinks that he has given readers a world view of cultivating immortals and enriches the work. He uses idioms to describe it. Painting a tiger cannot be like a dog. How about Li Bai's Flying Down Three Thousand Feet? Blindly stacking a bunch of words together, the effect is too poor.

Is the author still updating? Come out and say something.

Does anyone have any recommendations for similar books, about rebirth and cultivating immortality to make up for the regrets of the previous life 🙏