Primordial Jade Register

Is the next book called "Lingbao Talismans"?

We're recruiting anyone who can be a minor character, or even anything in the world. Example of a minor character: Cang Haoqian: Nicknamed the Heavenly Demon, the number one demonic cultivator in the martial arts world, his cultivation is unparalleled, nearly reaching the level of a sorcerer. Later, he switched to the divine path, becoming Yuan Qingwei's subordinate god.

I forced myself to read 100 chapters, but it's too chaotic. Author, your writing skills are so poor that you can't even clearly describe the events of a single world. Who gave you the audacity to interweave the storylines of four or five worlds? (It looks like there will be even more world lines later on.) If you're imitating Humanity's Paradise, then imitate it properly! Great authors write their books world by world. Liang Jingru has given you too much courage to be so reckless.

Whether the protagonist transmigrates or not doesn't significantly improve his strength. The help is limited. He keeps practicing the same techniques over and over, with no major changes. It's a bit too drawn-out. His new book is also quite tedious.

I won't criticize the main character, but let's talk about the power system. It's a complete mess. I only read the beginning and didn't read the rest. (The essence of power is represented by white, red, gold, blue, and purple.) The power of the gods is written to be extremely weak, basically just used as power banks.

The writing is disjointed and haphazard, jumping from one world to another without any real engagement. The power levels and systems are also a mess, making it a painful read.

Does anyone remember the protagonist's cultivation level, magical treasures, and spells? 😏 He's pretending to be a god but actually doing something wrong. It would have been much better if the author had just written about the god path from the beginning. Even if the god path wanted to incorporate a Cthulhu theme, it would have been more fitting. The way the god path is written is just a hodgepodge. 🤫

It's a very simple story of traversing multiple worlds, but the author has set up so many frameworks and restrictions, making it a self-imposed constraint. The more I read, the more confused I become.

It's great, I really like this book, keep up the good work!!

The writing is flashy and elaborate, but the basic story logic and background information are often chaotic and confusing. Does the author even bother to reread it a few times? The protagonist is constantly switching places, getting distracted, and using aliases, making it impossible for readers to understand who's who.