Primordial Jade Register

Is the next book called Lingbao Talisman?

Collect all the supporting players, or the world. Example of a trap: Cang Haoqian: Nicknamed Tianmo, he is the number one demon in the world of martial arts. His cultivation level reaches the sky, almost to the level of a sorcerer. Later he turned to Shintoism and became the god of Yuan Qingwei. (World: Martial Arts World) World example: Martial Arts World (self-created) Inheriter: Songxi Taoist (Cause and Effect: Inherited Taoism)

I endured reading 100 chapters, it was too confusing. Author, your writing skills are not clear enough to describe events in one world. Who gave you the courage to intersperse the story lines of four or five worlds? (It seems that there will be more and more world lines in the future) If you imitate the human paradise, then imitate it seriously. When great gods write books, they write worlds one by one. Liang Jingru gave you too much courage, making you so promiscuous.

Whether or not the protagonist travels through time will not be of much help in improving his strength. Help is limited. No matter how much you practice or practice, it is still the same as before, and there is not much change. A little too grindy. The newly written one is also very ink-stained.

I won't talk about the protagonist, but let's talk about the power system. I only looked at the front and back of the chaotic batch (the essence of power is white, red, gold, blue and purple). The power of the gods is weaker than the one written, but it is actually used as a power bank. The protagonist has a golden-blue Shinto avatar and says that his full power is at most equivalent to a person who is not even a mage. It makes me laugh. The weakest golden righteous god is equivalent to the strongest yang god, who is an earth immortal. The nature of the power is golden and can affect the reality of matter, transforming stones into gold. The golden color is ghosts and gods who cannot interfere with reality. The pure yin wuji is only dark red at most, and the mage is only red with gold. All gold is the yang god level. For example, monks below the level of immortals generally cannot defeat gods of the same level in single combat without any other means, because monks of the same level only have the power of their own cultivation, and gods generally have the earth energy accumulated in the spiritual pool or the power transformed from faith. The concept of golden cyan is equivalent to the half-step god of Taoism and the half-step god of Shinto. Once all the power is transformed into cyan, it can lift up the kingdom of God (blessed land turns into a cave) in the sky. The power illuminates the earth and turns it into stars. In the West, it is called weak divine power.

How do you write something like a hammer and a stick here and there? One time I went to this world and another time I went to that world. I went to a lot of worlds. As a result, I couldn't feel it. The system's combat power was also in a mess. It made people uncomfortable to read it.

Does anyone still remember the protagonist's immortal cultivation, what magic weapons he has, and what spells he has practiced? 😏 Those who are dissatisfied with their integrity are practicing Shinto. It would be much better for the author to write Shinto from the beginning. Even if Shinto wants to write in Cthulhu style, it would be more harmonious. On the contrary, it is nondescript for Shinto to write like this 🤫

A very simple journey through the heavens, but so many frameworks set by the author make it self-contained. The more I read, the more confused I became.

It's very good. I like this book very much. Keep up the good work! !

The writing is fancy, but the basic story logic and background explanation are often confusing. Can the author go back and read it several times? The protagonist is constantly going back and forth, distracted and using pseudonyms, so the reader can't even figure out who is who. Moreover, as the author, you always show off your skills in long paragraphs. You probably know the background you set by heart, and you seem to know a lot of relevant knowledge, but what about the people reading this book? I need to explain the background carefully. Even I feel annoyed after talking so much... Sigh