Sitting in Forgetfulness, Seeking Immortality

In the future, when you walk in the world of immortality, your name should be more unique. For example, I am not afraid of people like Liu Qinghuan who write names. I am not afraid of people like Liu Qinghuan who write names. I am not afraid of King Yinjiao. I am not bragging. He may not be able to repeat my name once I tell him! I have never lost a fight before bickering. Several of my opponents choked to death when they read my name! I have provoked a lot of big forces, but I have never been wanted. The big bosses looked at it for a long time and said: "Forget it, it's just a few fairy treasures. If it says that I have a myocardial infarction, it's not worth it!" So, when you go out to hang out, your name is very important!

I like Liu Qinghuan's character so much, a gentleman is nothing more than that. Neither arrogant nor impatient, neither hasty nor slow, knows when to be patient and when to be arrogant. I will not forget my old friends and friends because of my position, nor will I abandon my Taoist companions half-heartedly. Responsible and ambitious, knowing how to advance and retreat, wanton in front of friends, cruel in the eyes of enemies. There are many avenues, but I only take one. I have empathy for mortals, awe for my predecessors, and I am clever and clever. This is also the immortal I imagined!

By the way, I have been reading books for 20 years. Finding a good book is not easy. Today I will review some books I have read that I thought were particularly good.

I have also seen many mortals die. For example, in addition to this, I cultivate immortality scientifically among mortals, inquire about the immortal way, I have a world of immortality, Gou cultivates immortality in the troubled times of demons and martial arts, The Romance of Immortal Wood, Family Cultivation of Immortality: Rise from the Control of Beasts. I would like to ask here, are there any mortal novels in which the protagonists are Master Fa and Fa Xiu? The kind of Qi-building foundation elixir Yuanying system. The protagonist is good at casting spells, rather than relying on physical fighting, bombardment with magic weapons, or external forces such as spiritual beasts. Please It's really not easy to write. Now I'm also a desperate author. I understand.

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Since the enemy has captured both the male protagonist's Taoist companion and his disciples, how can we make the protagonist miserable? At least men should do this and women should do that! Isn't it possible that the enemy would be over with a few lashes? No way! No way! Since the author wrote this kind of plot, he had to give the villain a brain. The hatred is so great, I hope it won't be so casual!

Generally speaking, the writing is very good, but it is a little wordy. Hehe~~ The structure is well-conceived and logical.

I just read the chapter about breaking up with Yun Zheng, but I skipped through the previous chapters after getting acquainted with Yun Zheng. To be honest, from the previous chapters, the author has somewhat failed in shaping the protagonist of this book, because I think based on the protagonist's growth experience, his character is too out-of-the-box and unstable. I have been a beggar since I was a child. When I was four or five years old, I had to fight for food with many beggars. Later, when I was ten years old, the city was destroyed and I walked with so many refugees for such a long time. I never saw any ugliness on the road. Later, when he became an immortal, he went down the mountain and entered the city for the first time, but he didn't know the principle of keeping wealth secret. Did he not hide and eat it quickly when he was a beggar, but walked through the market with it? Won't other beggars rob? As a person who has been at the bottom of society since childhood, it is impossible to understand this. Logically speaking, the protagonist's character should be much more mature than his peers. Not to mention he was robbed later when he left the city. After being rescued by Yun Zheng, he instantly became stupid and sweet. Where is his cleverness? What about caution? To be honest, the description of the journey with Yun Zheng was really incomprehensible, so I just skipped it. Hey, I hope the shaping will be better later. The character and experience are really inconsistent.

Why are they always being caught and tortured when building foundations, Jindan is still caught and tortured, and Nascent Soul Stage is still being caught and tortured. I want to know if people in the Transformation Stage are also caught and tortured. Without this, wouldn't the plot be promoted?

The protagonist is very unlikable, naive and immature. His mortal enemy is not willing to kill him. His legs go weak when he sees a woman. His emotional scenes are badly written. His eyes are straight when he looks at a woman.