Pure Yang Sword Sovereign

The moment I saw a heroine-less book, I didn't want to read it anymore. I wanted to read for comfort, but I didn't want to watch a ten-thousand-year-old eunuch cultivating immortality.

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It's really disgusting. Xiao Ruo came to kill his whole family, and then he was taken away as a disciple by the Buddhist sect This Gao Yulian fell in love with the protagonist's brother, and now he was saved by the plot. Co-author is so angry that you can't do anything? Author, you have written this plot so well. I guess you may think that your arrangement is clever, but you don't know that readers will feel sick when they read it. They can't even read the novel and have to listen to your random arrangements. I really deserve the bad grades.

Cultivation to become an immortal is to compete with God for your destiny. In the end, your destiny depends on me and not on God. This is the most disobedient behavior. What did the author write? Everything is determined before and after, and it has its own destiny. The number of days has already been determined before something happens. Looking for opportunities is something that best reflects the immortal cultivator's refusal to accept fate and his determination to fight for his life. What did the author write in the end? The fight for opportunity has not started yet, it is still very early, everyone already knows that the day has been decided, how many people are determined, and who will get the opportunity. . . . . He often opens his mouth and says: "No need, God's will has been decided." "Why bother, this matter has been decided beforehand." This is also God's decision, and that is also God's decision. What kind of immortality can you cultivate? Anyone who has attained the Tao has already made up his mind, and there is no need to practice cultivation. . . Just go home and lie down to sleep, it's settled anyway. What you wrote is not [Xian Xia], it should be called [Stop cultivating, why bother, everything is settled, we can just lie down and watch our fate Xia]

I really got more and more angry after reading more than two thousand chapters. The protagonist is like a giant baby, which is normal. After practicing for decades, he was recommended to be a master. He basically has no common sense. When encountering difficulties, there is always someone to stand up for him. Then it's okay that he is the protagonist. Others are strong as long as they are strong, and weak as long as they are weak. There is no logic at all. The master who was defeated by three clones in the past thinks that he can stop the killing god after practicing a magic weapon. Where does he have the confidence? And those two people who have been ascending for hundreds of years were tricked as soon as they landed in the world. They didn't have any magic weapons, so they just stood by after flying up? No need to practice anymore? Does the author have a mature system and outline? If we don't have enough people, we can't just call in extras, right? Even if it's a coincidence, it has to be reasonable, right? Forget it, I can't stand it anymore anyway. I originally thought the author's writing style was pretty good and I wanted to support my favorite subject matter. It really doesn't look like that right now. Farewell.

The skill of this book cannot be overemphasized. The author has written it like the Legend of Sword and Fairy in Shushan. Whether it is characterization, language skills, or environmental sentences, they are all extremely exquisite, and the author has a solid writing skills. But this book is not suitable for the current fairy tales, in other words, it is not suitable for most of the current authors. Fifteen years ago, this book was regarded as a masterpiece among books such as Shushan, Piaomiao, and Zhuxian, and it had the appearance of becoming a god. It doesn't work now, because there are so many more books than there were 15 years ago. Readers are more picky and less tolerant than 15 years ago. At the same time, readers' cultural literacy level, appreciation ability, and age group are all different. Having said all that, an important reason why this book is not popular is because the novel has violated a taboo in the current Internet literary world. The author has indeed put a lot of effort into portraying the characters. He is skillful in describing various exercises, allusions and scenes, but most of them are supporting roles. I have read the free chapters, almost 100 chapters in. The protagonist is still like a passing spectator. He seems to be involved in all major events, but if you look closely, it seems that he is not involved. When reading, there is always a slight feeling of alienation. For a novel to be good-looking, it is necessary for readers to form a "synesthesia" with the protagonist portrayed by the author. What is "synesthesia" is to be immersed in the scene. Readers can't wait to take on the role of the protagonist. As the author writes and describes each chapter, whether it's killing everyone, exploring secrets, or finding treasures, he becomes stronger step by step, taking the role of himself and gaining the satisfaction of reading. This book did not exist in the early stage. The author created a perfect protagonist, but abandoned it, and then tried to use one plump and perfect supporting character to set off the protagonist. The result is that most readers forget about the protagonist while watching the book, and their "synesthesia" is gone. After the initial surprise, the readers leave. I reluctantly read the free chapters because I was attracted by the author's writing skills. Every time I read a chapter, I was thinking, will the author solve this alienation caused by the lack of "synesthesia" in the next chapter? But the next chapter is still the same, alas, it is a pity for this book.

Such an indecisive pig's trotters are so Kenshin! Damn your sister! ! ! ! The whole plot is so boring and boring, it makes me very angry.

How can I put it? This book is still readable at the beginning, but the further you read, the more twisted it gets. The protagonist is like a chess piece (it feels like the protagonist also likes to be a chess piece). Everything is arranged by the master. The master has the final say in what method to practice. When you realize your own Taoist heart, it is also arranged by the master. , I wonder, can someone else arrange my Taoist mind? There are countless arrangements, ranging from the path of cultivation to the materials for sword refining. The most confusing thing is that when I first chose to practice the Dongming Sword, I was provoked by the master and said that even if the road ahead is different, I will find a way out on my own. As a result, I complain like a resentful woman every day, "Oh, what should I do if there is no way ahead?" , I'm going to find the master to see, I don't know how to walk on my own. Is what I said earlier a fart? I said that swordsmanship should be brave and diligent, and overcome obstacles. The question is what do I see? I have no independent opinion. The cultivation is all arranged and calculated by others. , Like a puppet, you should take two steps today and one step tomorrow. You have no idea of your own. The master leads you in. Cultivation depends on oneself. You cannot rely on others for the rest of your life. Just say, if your master suddenly dies, will you stop cultivating? 😐

Excellent book, vote for it!

The waist-length part is really confusing? Stealing things and stuffing them into your pregnancy, causing you to be humiliated and almost died, and then she came to ask for things at night with this attitude. Even if it is to attract waist-high children, there is no need to write like this, right? Do we have to forgive her just because she is a woman?