The Chosen One's Game

I've read about 60 chapters, and let me tell you... Damn it. From the age of seven, before his values ​​were even formed, he was sent to a prison full of villains, living a life of hunger and treachery, and yet he produced this brainless, naive, and idiotic character? Can you believe it? I absolutely can't believe my eyes! Author, is this how you write a book?

I think if things continue like this, his parents might come back to life.

Happy birthday, Psy! I don't know if today is a happy birthday.

I skimmed through thirty or fifty chapters, and the book is great in every way—the background and plot flow are excellent. However, there's one thing I just couldn't help. Please don't criticize if you disagree; let's respect differences. The protagonist lost his parents and sister at age seven and was used as an experimental subject, raised like livestock for twelve years.

As a six-year avid reader, I feel this book fails to elaborate on its core content or fully develop its compelling storylines. Furthermore, the character lacks depth, intelligence, and crucial skills. While his youth might have robbed him of his cunning, over a decade of experience shouldn't have made him so naive.

The setting of this book is infuriating. It keeps changing, this one minute and that the next, full of flaws. Even a system as powerful as the main character makes mistakes all the time, can you believe it? Let me tell you a joke: "Main Character: Why did my bloodline fusion fail even with a 99.98% Success rate? Main God Space: Sorry, due to my mistake, I miscalculated..."

I can tolerate anything, but this female lead is unbearable. The protagonist is forcibly made stupid; he can't even walk when he sees her. She dislikes you, yet you're still thinking about her. It's too cruel; it's practically poisonous.

There's a reason this book, with over a thousand pages, still has such low readership: the character development and plot are terrible.

Goodbye, goodbye forever. What a waste of such a great framework and such a wonderful subject matter. The writing style is passable, but the plot and setting are lacking. Many parts are inconsistent. The author keeps emphasizing that the protagonist is threatened by death. On the Prison Star, he was indeed struggling to survive, killing, fighting wild beasts, and eating everything.

I'm dropping this story. I initially thought the protagonist would be a lone avenger, but then he gets powerful and starts forming groups? Shouldn't true powerhouses be solitary figures? I wanted a ruthless avenger, not some hot-blooded, action-packed protagonist.