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The author's writing style is very good. This book made me excited. I have subscribed to it. I also hope that the author will support my novel Chuxiong's World. We can cooperate and develop together for mutual benefit (ꈍᴗꈍ), hahahaha... Thank you in advance for your support!

Recommended by Kan Longkong, the trial reading is completed, and the food and grass are being updated. Well, the story is good, but I personally feel there are two shortcomings. 1. The title of the book gives readers the impression of being supernatural. 2. Introduction. The introduction gives readers the impression of traditional martial arts. The problem is that these two categories are niche categories. For example, when I am looking for a book, I first have an impression of the title of the book when browsing the list. I then click on the category I like to see if the introduction is interesting. If there is something interesting, I look at the table of contents to see if I feel like it. Finally, I try to read the beginning of chapters 5-10 to decide whether to follow up. When I first read the title of this book, I thought it was supernatural, so I didn't want to read it; Even when I read it again, when I looked at the introduction, I felt it was Chuanwu, so I didn't want to read it. So now this book relies on word-of-mouth recommendations from readers. This kind of recommendation will not attract traffic unless the edition is slaughtered. The title of the book cannot be changed, so change the introduction decisively.

I laughed so hard when I saw the latest chapter. The protagonist pretended too much, and was worshiped as a god. He was also called Chang Geng Xingjun, which means Taibai Jinxing. From now on, please call the protagonist Taibaijin Xinggui😂😂😂😂

It started off amazingly, but then plummeted. The appearance of Caiwei was simply poisonous, the emotions came out of nowhere, and the characters were not likable at all. It was basically a manifestation of the author's literary illness, which severely deducted points. The cold and stern writing style is no longer visible, and the heroic spirit of one man, one horse and one sword is also gone. The humor is extremely boring, there is no main line, and the power system is chaotic. Alas, it is a great pity. Samsung can make do with reading about 100,000 words.

The new book "Chu Xiong's World" is online! You will be given the best equipment and a flying sword at the beginning. You can choose the innocent male protagonist and the tender female director. The plot is exciting. The ending of a loving father and a filial son, harmonious brothers and family reunion will ensure your satisfaction. Please support me!

On the seventh day of the seventh lunar month, the magpies arrived and built a bridge, and the fairies passed by, entering the mortal world and entering the lake. I would like to advise you, pretty cowherd, don't be curious, return home early, mother is at home, looking forward to it. It's not dark yet, my son returns home, he closes the door quickly, steams moon cakes, worships the moon god, and sleeps happily. It was already dark, the son had not returned, the old mother was sad, her face was full of tears, dark clouds came and covered the moon. By the lakeside, corpses were found. The remaining skins and bones of cattle were wrapped into balls and buried together. There is a white robe hanging in the sky. There are gaps in it, but blood and tears fill them up. There are no gaps anymore. It is called the robe of heaven. The widowed mother cried, the queen mother remained silent, took the silver hairpin, tore her clothes, half in the east and half in the west. On the east mountain, there are gods, wearing cloud crowns and cloud boots, coming down the mountain to give money. The mother was wealthy but had no children. She was sitting in her house, wasting away day by day, and was alone on her death bed. Even in the winter, it snowed heavily, the house collapsed, the money was buried, the corpse sat up, and blood and tears flowed. Crows arrive and peck at the carrion. Villagers arrive, burn the bones, take the ashes and scatter them into the lake. Another year, I saw a fairy, with eight hands, deceiving the Cowherd, with a mouthful, and only the bones were left. The cow brays, the fairy laughs, the cow skin is peeled off, the bones and flesh are removed, the belly is round, and the white silk is spit out.

After reading it, the writing is to my liking, but it would be better to pay attention to the missing words and typos.

Who can tell me what the hell is this introduction to the Three Character Classic? It looks like a dark version of the Cowherd and the Weaver Girl. Could this be a dark version of the book?

So this Weaver Girl is actually a Spider Girl? This seamless heavenly garment is made of silk.

I think Daoma and Guiwei are quite similar.