Swordmaster

It's wonderful, but there's just not enough to see. Everyone said they were sending razors to the author? Or send a razor? 🤫🤫🤫

After reading the introduction╰_╯ How can you speak so well?! I am determined

I like this style of writing very much. It has a feeling of hitting the mark, but the description is very accurate. It is not too white, nor does it appear to be pretentious or show off literary talent. At the same time, although the plot has just begun, it has already shown its uniqueness and novelty. I feel a little uncomfortable with the early conflicts. After all, we are a family, so this is too much (although I can't think of any suggestions)

The protagonist is quite innovative this time, and it is very interesting to imitate the essence of Jiang Taichuan's handwriting. The protagonist does this to flatter and increase his favorability. The key is that this kind of mentality fits the character. To put it bluntly, the protagonist is a poor boy. He may have two brushes, but it is nothing in the world. In this case, it is normal to be a little sophisticated. The sophistication in his character is quite real. I have seen too many of the protagonists who are poor in the beginning and have a high vision and magnanimity.

The writing is a bit ink, and the protagonist's behavior is also ink, looking forward and backward, hesitating, and dilly-dallying. How can I still have the perseverance and determination of a martial arts swordsman to overcome thorns and thorns, and I will cut through all the difficulties with one sword? I think if there were no golden fingers, everyone would be more talented than him.

I reluctantly read dozens more pictures, and to sum up, it is still a routine where the whole world targets the protagonist and then gets slapped in the face by the protagonist. The protagonist is a poor relative who came to seek refuge with He's family but didn't succeed. He didn't ask for the 20 gold beads as a gift. It means he didn't use anything to make a living by himself and go to school, right? Then Mrs. He exploded. She looked down on herself and threatened her son. Then she found someone to trip up the protagonist and use dirty tricks, and even found someone to injure the protagonist. It's really a mouthful of old blood spurted out, logic and brain. I saw the description of the cousin who was promoted to a high school in two years. This is why when he saw a random poor boy from the countryside, he immediately felt threatened by the son of one of the top academics in his province. I feel that my son's top spot in the college entrance examination is about to be lost. If I have a relative who comes to join me after I become prosperous, even if I don't accept it, I can at most give him some money to let him go. If he doesn't have to start a business on his own, I will just ignore it. At most, I will just resolutely not lend money. Do I immediately worry that he will succeed and threaten my company? ? Threatening his son to start a business? ? ? Really no brainer

It is a bit innovative to write a historical palace battle essay in the guise of a fairy, but the fairy has not seen a few rays of immortality, and the pursuit of fame and fortune in the ordinary market is worth dozens of chapters. There has always been a doubt as to why a modern person who travels back in time is obsessed with past scientific research, aristocratic families, superiority and inferiority, and the harem.

The writing of this novel is good, but the character of the protagonist is too strange. He is too talkative and likes to meddle in other people's business. He also brings a maid with him. He is disdainful of his relatives, but he is very compassionate to the people who want to kill him. The whole story makes people feel uncomfortable. The routine is too old and he also likes to trick people.

I have finished writing about swords and knives. What will the next book be called? How about Halberd Ba (-o-)／

Xianxia has been spoiled by some people. In recent years, stories like Journey to the West and A Chinese Ghost Story have all come out. There are very few orthodox fairy tales. Come on, Xiaojun, and continue to pay attention.