Reviews of Yezhu Zhai

Book Review-The Demon King is Unfathomable Reading progress: Chapter 270 Things are different now Reading score: 28 points, not recommended Storytelling summary: The writing is stable, and the image, environment, action, scene and language description are adequate. The performance of the protagonist is a bit too bland, several female characters are severely labeled, and the remaining supporting characters, especially the player characters, have a thin sense of presence. In terms of setting, it currently seems to be the set of wishing to become a god, which is relatively classical. The plot is quite interesting, but because the social theory is not completely compatible with the background of magical civilization, it seems a bit funny. Writing (6 points): The writing is very stable, solid but a little dull. For novels about the Fourth Natural Disaster, the sandbox content is low and the reading appeal is average. Characters (6 points): The protagonist's performance is mediocre. Maybe Morningstar tried to create a composite protagonist who is both good and evil, but in the actual performance due to the lack of conflicts and highlights, it only showed a kind of refined egoism. Instead, the player group showed a kind of fearless superhumanism. Such a contrast significantly weakens the charm of the protagonist under the writing idea of ​​weakening the player's sense of presence and highlighting the protagonist, making people feel bored and sloppy. The female characters are simple, crude and heavily labeled, and you can even guess the relevant plot with your eyes closed. There is a suspicion of laziness. The rest of the characters have too little ink to be worthy of evaluation. Plot (5 points): Under the guise of the Fourth Natural Disaster, they are engaged in the business of reducing the role of players. Not to mention the bull-headed and horse-mouthed problem, in fact, it is a shell of the Long Aotian system in another world, and the system is extremely intelligent. If you let go, you can run over it all the way. The players are almost the cows and horses in the background, and changing to the resurrection of ancient omnics seems to have no impact. What's more important is that the protagonist's plot is very interesting. There is nothing wrong with scolding Fang Qiu, but there is no need to do this at every plot point. Setting (5 points): The basic setting is that of wishing or incense to become a god. The setting of each level is very sloppy. For the protagonist, it is just a simple accumulation of experience points. Except for multiple fields in the later stage, the other levels are to increase attributes. The rest of the characters have one more innate restriction, requiring the protagonist or the gods to reach the upper limit of their level, otherwise they will be locked at birth. Players are no exception, and it is a very frustrating setting. Thoughts (6 points): Chenxing has always had his own ideas and tried to express them. The combination of the doomsday background in the previous game, especially the mature wasteland punk style of the Fallout series, really has a thought-provoking effect. However, there is an obvious sense of dislocation in the context of the magic civilization where the first industrial revolution failed in this book. The spirit is commendable, but not worthy of deep thought.

Reading progress: 577. Half step Reading score: 34 points, recommended Summary of review: A very interesting Japanese two-dimensional light novel. It mainly tells the story of the conquest and saving of the world by the consciousness of flora. The writing is joyful, the characters are classic, the plot is smooth, and the setting is reasonable. It's pretty good in all aspects, and when put together, it's a rare otherworld adventure novel in recent years. Writing style (7 points): The writing style is quite pleasant, relaxed and humorous. The description of the environment and characters is quite good. The depiction of some big scenes and battle scenes is a bit bland, but the flaws do not hide the flaws, and overall it is good. Character (7 points): According to the arrangement of the nine-square grid, the protagonist is roughly a chaotic neutral camp, and the core labels are a strength dog and a fun person. There is no heroine in the whole story. Pseudo group portrait. The characters that appear so far are basically common characters in Japanese two-dimensional time travel stories, and they are not bad at shaping them. There are a lot of characters, but they really don't leave a deep impression. Plot (7 points): To be honest, after watching it all the way, it felt like the plot was flowing through the cerebral cortex without leaving many traces. Including the Three Mountain Castle War between the Empire and the Kingdom. In theory, it should be a big scene and a high-intensity plot climax. But in fact, what impressed me the most was the forced draw which was equivalent to deus ex machina, which felt somewhat anticlimactic. However, there are indeed no shortcomings in the plot, including the setting up of a Japanese brave. I personally think there is no problem. It is normal for Japanese braves to appear in Japanese two-dimensional time travel stories. This is not a poisonous point. In addition, the connection and advancement of the plot are smooth and reasonable most of the time. It is not easy to take into account the characters of various camps and classes. Setting (7 points): The classic Japanese two-dimensional time travel setting, including the brave and the devil, the evil empire and the human kingdom, levels, professions and skills. As for the approaching doomsday and data collapse, it is not an uncommon background. The most outstanding thing should be the protagonist's setting as a flora consciousness, as well as the ability to absorb skills by touching corpses and the imagination to magically modify various types of mushrooms. It can be regarded as an alternative counterattack of useless materials. At least for now, there is no serious conflict between these settings, and they also play an important role in promoting the plot. Thoughts (6 points): The characters' appeals are quite ordinary, even stereotyped, but there is nothing overtly offensive about them.

Reading progress: Chapter 347 Aaron meets Kurtz, but the first version Reading score: 32 points, recommended Storytelling summary: The adventures of the emperor, his eldest son and his younger brothers in 600 BC, 30K and 40K AD. Mainly in the form of unit comedy. Readers who like family interactions and funny plots will probably like it more. As for the more profound themes such as war, conspiracy, darkness, and human nature in the original work, it is basically not touched on, and the main theme is relaxed and enjoyable. Writing style (6 points): Generally speaking, the writing style is relatively plain, and the description of the characters' appearance, clothing, scenes, and actions is basically adequate. The main highlight is the interaction between the protagonist's family members. In a sense, it can be understood as a unit comedy in the context of Warhammer. It focuses on warmth and redemption. Quite joyful. Characters (7 points): If you want to insist on how brilliant the characterization is, there is no such thing. Even the protagonist himself feels like an ordinary good gentleman. He shows neither great perseverance nor great wisdom. He has not experienced any setbacks in his life, nor has he shown much effort, so he has not shown much growth. The funniest thing is probably the Emperor in the form of the "Three Gophers", especially the elbow-to-elbow relationship between Anda and the Lord of Darkness, which accounts for quite a few of the jokes in this article. The characteristics of the original group of immortals are quite distinct. But there is basically no depth, and it is an exclusive NPC for the plot. As for the characters in the original work, due to the large group of authors, the shaping itself is not stable. At least there was no slap in the face during the shaping of this book. Plot (7 points): The two main lines are the Emperor's family's exorcism adventure in 600 BC and the protagonist's journey through the future to redeem the original body. As a unit comedy, the various scenes in this book are not closely connected. In fact, once you're familiar with the core elements, it may feel like it doesn't matter where you start. It's about family interaction, God loves the world, saves his younger brother, loves his older brother, is like a human emperor, has eternal treasures, vendors are causing trouble, and violent exorcisms are involved. Almost every unit has these contents. It can be understood that the background has been changed, but the content is the same. However, the family interaction is both funny and heart-warming, and I like it very much. If you are pursuing the atmosphere of a dark epic opera in Warhammer 40K, you are still far away. Setting (6 points): Although it is not obvious at first, you will find it is an invincible setting later. The protagonist can travel from the time point BC to 30K and 40K time points. At the same time, he also worked with the emperor to slay demons in 600 BC. The specific setting focuses on don't use your brain, don't ask, let alone don't think too much. Not to mention GW's own official setting, it focuses on abstraction. The parts of this book about time and logic cannot be justified in a more realistic way. Fortunately, this book also actively avoids any serious explanation, just treat it as God is omniscient, omnipotent, and omnipotent. Others (6 points): God loves the world and loves his family first. There is nothing to blame. In order to save the cruel and desperate world of Warhammer 40K, God in 600 BC decided to create the Kingdom of Heaven.

Reading progress: Chapter 22: The kid is so worried Reading score: 31 points, recommended Summary of the review: A zombie apocalypse adventure full of American drama style. The plot has a lot of dialogue in the style of American dramas. The character types are relatively classic and relatively natural. The unsystematic and power-free setting makes people a little worried about the later stage. The overall feeling is quite positive, and there is no obvious sign of Mary's disease. Writing style (7 points): The dialogue between the characters is very much in the style of an American drama, and the character creation is basically completed through dialogue. Frankly speaking, this writing style is more selective for readers, and not everyone can accept the translation tone mixed with a lot of trash talk. The action description is very straightforward. The description of the scene is relatively simple. Characters (6 points): Basically, they are all common characters in American TV series, including the wise and powerful protagonist, the loyal follower, the silly newcomer, the shrewd veteran, the precocious child and the housewife who is forced to improve herself. But I personally feel that the character design is still well established. Although it uses a classic template, it does not feel abrupt, and the relevant introduction is completed naturally, and the subsequent performance is not out of the ordinary. Plot (6 points): The story takes place in the modern Lighthouse Country in a parallel world. The main plots that have appeared so far are escaping from the villa area, raiding gas stations, encountering old and new combinations, and rescuing the mother and daughter in the RV. The main line is simply survival, and the overall feeling is a bit like a way of survival that reduces the intensity and removes special infected bodies. The protagonist's performance in the plot is still remarkable, and there is no embarrassing situation. Overall, the plot feels relatively stable. Setting (6 points): The protagonist is a god-level American football quarterback, and the issues related to physical fitness and intelligence, tactics, experience, and follow-up are reasonably explained. There has been no explanation yet as to how the crisis started. It can only be seen that there is a sudden outbreak of "high-speed zombies". As for the zombie's infection route, outbreak conditions, long-term survival issues, etc., It has not yet been revealed. If you insist on no system and no superpowers, the next step should be to establish a base, eliminate zombies, compete for resources, etc., Similar to the plot of The Walking Dead. In other words, zombies and the like will gradually fade into the background. I am a bit worried that it will become boring like the same type of American TV series later on. Thoughts (6 points): Under the inexplicable large-scale zombie crisis, it is no longer easy to take care of yourself. At least he hasn't actively harmed others yet.

Reading progress: Chapter 101 Liu Xuan's past Reading score: 30 points, recommended Reading summary: A sophisticated historical article about the late Sui Dynasty. The protagonist Li Xuanba behaves very kindly, and he probably strives to be a moral model. The overall atmosphere is relatively relaxed. It's good as a daily pastime. Writing style (7 points): Lao Lang's writing style is quite sophisticated. There are not many descriptions of scenes, costumes, and backgrounds in the article, and it mainly focuses on the dialogue between the characters. The action descriptions are relatively brief, and there are no large-scale war scenes that are common in historical texts. The overall feeling is still very smooth. Characters (6 points): The more important characters currently appearing are the Li family, Liu Xuan and others. In their daily depictions, these characters are, at best, more relaxed and humorous, and at worst, more frivolous, which is more in line with the relatively relaxed tone of this book. However, what is somewhat uncomfortable is that, perhaps in order to match the moral level of the protagonist, the moral standards of all non-harlequin characters have been forcibly raised. To put it bluntly, it doesn't look like the social turmoil of the late Sui Dynasty, but more like an imaginary fairy tale world. Especially the description of the deceased group and the Li family. The poverty, misery, and family destruction represented by the former are not necessarily related to kindness, loyalty, and gratitude. The latter is a typical representative of the powerful at that time. Historically, he was not known for his love for the people, but in this article, he is described as a moral model, which is a bit surprising. All I can say is that the characters in the book are quite likable if they are purely fictional. Plot (5 points): A kind-hearted son of a prefect who is less than 10 years old is raising a rebel. Can you believe it? A wealthy family had committed suicide on their privately owned copper mine, so they bet that Yang Guang wouldn't do anything serious? On the one hand, they are trying their best to depict a relatively normal historical society, and on the other hand, they are arranging an unreliable adventure itinerary for the protagonist who is not very prominent in military force, just to show his kindness? No, since he is not the Li Yuanba who can dual-wield a 400-pound drum beater and golden hammer and slaughter a million troops in one day, how can he achieve this kind of saintly kindness? Drive all the thieves into other people's fields? Do you use the wealth and money you absorb at home to help the poor? Setting (6 points): Basically, it's a pretty decent background in the late Sui Dynasty. Li Jiancheng, who is equivalent to half a time traveler and is suspected of having schizophrenia, is not the protagonist. He gave the protagonist a companion jade pendant with magical powers and forcibly prescribed a physical enhancement device to the protagonist. Thoughts (6 points): Full of feudal romantic thoughts, the protagonist's words and deeds are closer to those of a knight in the traditional sense than to a leader. But it's really good as a pastime, but it's hard to avoid feeling uncomfortable after looking at it for a few more times.

Reading progress: Volume 1 Chapter 122 It's all worth it Reading score: 27 points, not recommended. Storytelling summary: Some paragraphs feel a bit messy, but the overall writing is pretty good. The character performance is average, the plot is a bit bland, and the twists are a bit blunt. The settings are rough. After reading to the end, you can feel that it actually has little to do with the Ke-type setting. Everything from the gods to the dependents are original, and the core of unknown and fear is not adopted. It's a trap-style invincible adventure novel. Writing (6 points): The writing is generally okay. But some details need to be polished. It feels like it's pieced together from various small paragraphs that were written. For example, there are some abrupt metaphysical descriptions, or the ambiguity of the subject in the dialogue. It caused certain problems in reading comprehension. Characters (5 points): The protagonist himself is an ordinary person commonly seen in ordinary novels. He does not show anything special in any aspect. Even his performance in the battle at the end of the volume is not outstanding. As for the other characters, they are more like the character settings in the light novel than the crime novel. Even some characters, such as the second female lead, have obvious inconsistencies in their combat power in order to show contrasting cuteness. It feels like the shaping is still a bit too casual. However, the lead female lead's cute performance is pretty good, and may be the biggest highlight of this book. Plot (5 points): The plot of Invincible is usually not easy to write, and the pretentious and slap-in-the-face routine is unavoidable. But if there is no plot to reveal the saint in front of anyone. It will appear very bland. It is indeed a good choice to add reversal at this time. But the reversal in this book feels very blunt. One sentence is for the truth and one sentence is for the world, which seems to be a sufficient reason to destroy the world. It is inevitable that the persuasiveness is somewhat lacking. As for the settings of the shelter and the real world, to be honest, they don't fit well with the tone of unknown and fear. Settings (5 points): The settings of more than a dozen ectoplasm schools sound good, but in fact, at least as far as I have read, they are just a piece of cake. The descriptions of each school are basically a general description. It seems that you may want to imitate the school of DND or the mysterious way. But the performance is too rough. In addition, the protagonist is of such a high level, and when fighting against a high-level being, he still uses the skills of the mortal school, which feels quite extraordinary. Thoughts (6 points): A story about a demon king with little motivation who saves the world? At least we should have a positive attitude towards human nature.

Reading progress: Volume 3, Chapter 54: Personal Welcome Reading score: 34 points, recommended Summary of review: This is a historical text with very detailed research. The writing is relatively sophisticated, the characters are well-drawn, the plot is basically reasonable, and the theme is still the historical struggle for hegemony. Writing style (7 points): The dialogues between the characters are quite old-fashioned, the description of the scenes is not enough, the fighting on the battlefield is pretty good, the description of the situation is quite clear, and some of the voice-overs are a bit fashionable. Overall feeling good. Characters (6 points): The protagonist's ambition is well developed. Some writing has also been put into the characterization of original and historical figures. But after all, it is a historical novel in the hegemony genre. There are many characters appearing, but there are too few who can really leave an impression on people. It can only be said that as a cluster, it can leave a stereotyped image, but when it comes to people, it is very vague. Even the beauties collected by the protagonist quickly become passers-by after a few chapters of the guide. All I can say is, well, let's keep it safe in large quantities. Plot (6 points): There is basically nothing outstanding about the plot of a historical novel. If you don't change the history, it will be boring to read. If you change it too much, it will be purely self-indulgent. I can only say that the interpretation of the overall situation in this article is basically reasonable. As for the part involving tactics and strategy, well, I actually don't understand it. I can only say that I don't understand it. As for the plot of "Captain of Beauty", I can't go into details. It's better to watch it as a short video between the scenes. Setting (9 points): The most detailed historical text I have seen since starting my studies. Whether it is humanities, geography, official system, or military system, at least it seems quite reliable. The author often opens separate chapters to explain, which feels like a lot of effort has been put into it. Thought (6 points): Prospering the people will be painful, and destroying the people will be painful. When the wheels of time roll over, who can truly control their own destiny?

Reading progress: Chapter 403 Order of the Phoenix Reading score: 32 points, recommended Review summary: The main fun lies in the protagonist's words. Some of the original characters are well developed. Other aspects are hard to describe. Writing style (7 points): The writing style is very funny, especially the frequent ethnic jokes mainly about dementors in the early stage are very interesting. The dialogue involving the protagonist is full of humor while being funny. As for the descriptions of various environments, characters, scenes, actions, etc., They are all okay. They do not reflect the weird children's literature flavor of the original work, but there is nothing out of the ordinary. Characters (7 points): The descriptions of the protagonist and the original characters around him are quite good. The character's image is based more on interaction than direct description. Of course, there are some deliberately funny parts, but overall it's quite likable. However, the characters in the original work are very briefly portrayed, and they are basically just tools for the plot. Plot (6 points): Although it seems that a lot of work has been done, the main plot still follows the original work or the main line of the original protagonist group. As a fan work, it's not a shortcoming. However, the original plots are mixed, and some of the plots involving family relationships are remarkable, allowing people to feel the warmth of family affection and the beauty of humanity. However, there are also some parts of the plot that are very average, and can even be said to be perfunctory. It feels like it is simply a waste of words. Setting (6 points): Overall, the good and evil value system does not have a high sense of existence. It can only be said to give the protagonist some motivation to jump left and right. To be honest, apart from the dementors, the main character's own bloodline seems to be useless. It is simply a tool to create parental status and drag out the plot. The rest of the story doesn't interpret or expand much on the original setting. The core is still the dementors in the title. Thoughts (6 points): The admiration for family and friendship deserves recognition. Cruelty to strangers is open to question.

Reading progress: Chapter 607 Escape Reading score: 33 points, recommended Summary of the review: As you can tell from the title, it is a novel with cross talk as its main selling point. Apart from the core selling point, the rest of the book is mediocre, but the overall reading experience is good. However, it may not be suitable for readers who pursue a hardcore Greek world view. Writing style (8 points): The writing style is very testing for radio waves. Fans of cross talk and folk art may regard it as a treasure. If you are not interested in language performances, you may find it inexplicable. But being able to integrate traditional cross talk storytelling and singing into fantasy and adventure online articles, I personally think it is a moderate innovation. Apart from the treasure show, the writing is smooth, the scene descriptions are not good, the action scenes are not exciting, but the visuals are okay. Character (7 points): The protagonist who keeps sneaking around and playing tricks is indeed very unique. Although I always feel that his change of thinking about the different world is a bit abrupt, it has little impact on the direction of the story. The heroine is a bit yandere, which may be a bit picky for readers. The other human characters are generally more than funny but lack depth, so they can be considered role players. In particular, although there are a large number of K-type gods in the book, due to the comic style of the book, all the gods are made into comedians, which is far from the gloomy and mysterious style of the original K-type books. Setting (6 points): The main background is modern European punk style. The setting weakens the performance of the K-type gods, and the indescribable performances are also popularized for the purpose of sensory distortion, psychological stimulation and information infusion. These are all routine operations of popular K-type novels. The reason why the protagonist is immune to SAN by sneaking around has never been made clear, and it can only be regarded as a special talent. As for the settings such as various abnormal items and spells, they are basically generic, even a little rough, but it's innocuous. Plot (6 points): Although the language is quite folk-artistic, and the game often does side jobs and plays tricks, the main plot is still a smooth RPG group run, where you take a few fixed group members on adventures. The advantage is that the overall frame is very stable and there is basically no sign of loss of control. The disadvantage is that there are no exciting points, except for the main character's work, it is even a bit boring. Thoughts (6 points): Generally speaking, it still encourages good values. The courage and wisdom of the protagonist team are worthy of recognition, but it is not too awkward with the background of the Ke world.

Reading progress: Chapter 676: Brother, are you here? Reading score: 35 points, recommended Summary of the review: A novel about cannibalism and abortion in another world by a mentally abnormal person? The world of cultivation with hundreds of schools and thousands of cultivators in the world is quite interesting. Writing style (7 points): The overall atmosphere is quite cheerful, and the driving is often cryptic. The scene description is okay. There are not many descriptions of characters. For now, the fighting scenes are still on the scale of street fights. The picture is not sharp, but it is quite clear. Characters (7 points): There are many characters, and it is quite refreshing to finalize the characters. The characters of the protagonist group are very clear, but the specific portrayal is relatively monotonous. The villains basically give people a greasy and funny feeling, and they look like they are trying too hard. The protagonist's neurosis is interesting at first glance, but later it turns into a traditional cool novel style, which is a pity. The interaction between the heroine and the supporting characters is quite interesting, but if you watch it too much, it just seems to be the same pattern. Generally speaking, as a web novel, the traditional characters are played quite smoothly. Plot (7 points): The plot is fast-paced and easy to make. The overall structure is relatively compact. It is a relatively standard type of cool writing. The main plot is more like a reskinned underworld struggle for hegemony. In the early stage, it is brave and fierce, in the middle stage, it is a battle for territory, and in the later stage, it begins to develop upwards. Each sub-plot is not enough, and social experience can be seen, but the reflection in the plot is only a superficial taste. Setting (7 points): The setting of hundreds of gates in the world and thousands of cultivators in the world is very huge. The maps of dark stars, wormholes, and Earth are not too small either. It's just that except for the Taoist sect that the protagonist majors in, the settings of the other Taoist sects are relatively simple, even perfunctory, which is still a bit regretful. Although somewhat disguised, the protagonist's growth path is basically a typical cannibalism. Readers who are resistant to this may need to be cautious. The rest of the settings regarding practice, time, cultivation, and popularity are relatively random, and even have a very limited impact on the plot. Thoughts (7 points): The protagonist's values ​​are generally quite orthodox, and the theme is still based on punishing evil and promoting good. It's a happy feud with Jianghu characteristics.

Reading progress: 134 Dear Hermione, do you have any misunderstanding about me? Reading score: 27 points, not recommended. Summary of review: The entire content is basically just the title, The Adventures of Jack Su in the Sub-Era. The writing is more to my liking. In terms of plot, there is nothing innovative, not interesting, and a bit toxic. Readers who like Jack Su's set may be familiar with Dianbo. Writing style (7 points): While the writing style is smooth, it also incorporates a large number of translation accents from the Sherlock Holmes collected translations, and incorporates a large number of complex popular memes. It is a type that will be quite interesting when it hits the airwaves. Of course, if it doesn't match up, it will feel stiff and abrupt. There are not many detailed descriptions of scenes and actions, and the sense of the picture relies more on understanding the original work. There are some passages copied from the original text, but fortunately not many. Characters (6 points): The shot version of Detective Sherlock Holmes is a more classic Jack Sue. The psychological behavior is very close to the middle-aged detective in the original work. It's very reductive at best, but from a physical and psychological point of view, I don't want to be an 11 or 12-year-old child. The performance of HP's original characters is relatively restored. Except for Principal Dumbledore who seems to be too weak, the rest of the characters are restored well. Plot (4 points): Basically, Jack Su leads the protagonist group of the original work to complete the plot in the original work. Basically, no innovative reconstruction is seen, and it is just a simple manifestation of the saint in front of people. The original detective plots do not seem to have much meaning at present. They neither deepen the interpretation of the original work nor form new foreshadowing, or are in vain. So far, there are three poisonous points in my personal understanding. One of them masturbated the cat that McGonagall transformed into in the first Transfiguration class. This was completely inexplicable and the protagonist already knew that it was Professor McGonagall. I didn't know the necessity of this behavior. The other one is that the protagonist dissected his classmate's pet toad. This is no longer a simple prank or school bullying, this is a perversion that requires psychological intervention! The third and most troublesome one is that in the plot of the Sorcerer's Stone, in the potion puzzle, the operation of using the elixir of blessing to exchange the potion appears inexplicably. There is no foreshadowing at all! Forcibly embedded in an important main plot, just to show off in order to bring Jack Su into the final battle, it is simply an insult to the IQ. In short, the almost straightforward plot of the original work is mixed with inexplicable detective stories and weird poisonous points, which makes people feel a little stomachache. Setting (5 points): The protagonist's character is basically that of Sherlock Holmes and a magic genius. Well, it's a typical Jack Su character. The rest of the HP part has not changed much, it is basically the same as the original work. It also does not reflect any exploration or interpretation of the magical field by Holmes using deductive methods. Among them, the private setting of the Fuling Elixir seriously affects the rationality of the plot. All I can say is, just be happy. Thoughts (5 points): It's nice to have a protagonist who insists on justice, but the practice of privately executing a classmate's innocent pet is very disgusting. Basically, he is just a wanton Jack Su, leading his younger brothers on a rampage.

Reading progress: Chapter 128 Reading score: 28 points, not recommended. Storytelling summary: It has a bit of storyteller style, the characters are relatively solid, the plot turns are a bit offbeat, and the setting is quite powerful. Writing style (6 points): The writing style is smooth and has a somewhat funny storytelling style. There aren't many detailed scenes or exciting action descriptions. It's not enough to be scary or mysterious, but the little knowledge about the three religions and nine streams that are embellished during the period is quite interesting. Characters (5 points): The character description is relatively weak, probably because you have to run around every time you touch a corpse, and the tendency of facial makeup is very obvious. The protagonist's own performance is a bit off, from the cautious and cautious Taoist to the decisive and decisive Immortal Knight, from the heartless zombie who only wants to collect corpses to the chivalrous and tender character who only loves the black cat. How can I put it, there is no growth trajectory or turning events, and it is not surprising to say that the character was changed midway. The rest of the characters are nothing worth mentioning except that Mao Mao is indeed cute. If you write about the common people, you should write about the common people. If you write about the merits and saints, you should write about the merits and saints. When combined, it will inevitably give a mixed feeling. By the way, all the villains are extremely evil, which is somewhat deliberate. Plot (6 points): The previous plot mainly focused on vulgar development, but when it comes to saving the son and mother, he starts to show off. The whole tone feels a little off-key. Judging from the previous plot of the prince's repeated assassinations, the overall pattern is not big, and it is somewhat forced. For example, the son of the neighbor's paper shop got the first place in the scholar examination (the head of the case), incidentally hooked up with a prince with a different surname (it seems that he will rebel later), a 400-year-old cat demon suddenly came to join him, a rough messenger maid descended from the sky, etc. There are heavy traces of arrangement. Of course, if you want to understand it as a classic section, it's not impossible to play it back if you like. Setting (5 points): The protagonist's plug-in is very powerful. Touching the corpse will make you red, and you can even find the best items that the original owner did not have. Experience is unlimited, and you can learn skills at will. Moreover, I feel that the protagonist's zombie bloodline is obtained from the large light ball with unlimited flow. There are basically no disadvantages. He is not afraid of sunlight or glutinous rice, has flexible limbs and a sound mind. He is a great evil cult who can swallow yin energy and is not afraid of yang energy. He basically has nothing to do with zombies. There is no sense of violation if the setting of raising corpses is changed to raising ghosts and demons. As for the background of the last years of the dynasty, it is really a background. It is mentioned occasionally, but it has no actual impact on the protagonist or the direction of the plot. Thoughts (6 points): There is nothing wrong with a worldview with a clear black and white view. Whether it is to survive in troubled times or to be a heroic hero serving the country and the people, there is no right or wrong. Doing good deeds and making good corpses cannot always be said to be wrong.

Reading progress: Chapter 59: Sniper Major Reading score: 29 points, not recommended. Summary of review: The writing is smooth, the protagonist's image is quite distinct, the plot description is a bit superficial, and there is no problem in setting the general direction, but the details are difficult to compliment. Generally speaking, it is another egoist's adventure in the world. I wrote it for a long time and revised it repeatedly. It was prompted that there was a sensitive word, but I didn't say it was a shady sensitive word. I used several software and still couldn't detect it. It's amazing! Tired, that's it. However, no recommendation means no recommendation.

Reading progress: Chapter 197 Oh, the Box of Abundance Reading score: 33 points, recommended Summary of review: The overall style is relatively stable. The characters are distinct. The plot is average. The settings can be self-consistent. There is not much heavy foreshadowing and in-depth thinking. Writing style (6 points): The writing style is smooth and relatively plain. The creation of a thriller, suspense or horror atmosphere is relatively weak, but the overall atmosphere still has a certain sense of substitution and can carry the unfolding of the story. Characters (7 points): The characters of the protagonist group are very distinct, and most of their language and behaviors are consistent with the characters. However, due to the amnesia of all members, the background is very blurred and the overall image is thin. Plot (7 points): Mainly a unit-style road (navigation) adventure, the weird atmosphere of each island is well created, and there is no obvious inflection in the adventure process. However, they are basically the type of memetic pollution, such as memory tampering, body distortion, and human malice. If you watch it too much, you will inevitably feel a sense of instantaneity. At present, supernatural confrontations between people are beginning to appear. I wonder if it will turn into a supernatural brawl in the future. Setting (7 points): A big adventure in a doomsday setting, the navigation process does not have a strong sense of existence. The protagonist's special physique and memes still play a role in advancing the plot. The memetic contamination of the characters largely overshadows the characters themselves. Thoughts (6 points): The moral level of the protagonist group is basically above the passing line, but the maliciousness of the outside world is very obvious. How to say, you can only live for the sake of living.

Reading progress: Chapter 134 Carefully cooked breakfast Reading score: 27 points, not recommended Review summary: This book itself is quite enjoyable to read, and is suitable for readers who have little knowledge of the original DC work. There are many mechanical deities in the plot, which makes it feel rather abrupt. The protagonist is a rare good guy, um, he raises the moral ceiling of the DC world as a whole. Writing style (6 points): The reading is smooth, some of the jokes and small details that make people laugh are quite funny, and the overall style is relatively cheerful. The book likes to use narration very much, but the grasp of it is average, which only adds to the confusion. Character (6 points): The protagonist has a relatively high moral standard, but the specific performance is more innocent than a virgin. Compared with the darker style of DC, it feels more suitable for a beautiful fairy tale. The descriptions of the original characters are okay, there is no in-depth structure, and there is no novel interpretation, but there is no obvious OOC. To be honest, it is okay. Plot (5 points): So far, the system is using the protagonist to perform various mechanical deifications. It can be said that all the plots, including the system itself, have a significant sense of abruptness and even fragmentation. The interaction between the original characters, the group and the protagonist always has a sense of child's play, especially the inexplicable trust between them, such as Harvey's trust in the protagonist at the critical moment of life and death, and the protagonist's trust in the unstable group of street children. This doesn't feel like Gotham, the sin city in American comics, but rather like some kind of fairy tale world, with only facial makeup of bad guys and good guys surrounding the protagonist. In addition, the plot of Gotham's New Prison gives people a sense of absurdity, and the wanton tossing of the original villains does not give people the pleasure of punishing evil and promoting good. On the contrary, it seems to be disrespectful of the original work. Setting (4 points): The most failed system is probably the so-called system of working hard and getting rich through hard work. The entire system is an absolute core support for the protagonist. But the protagonist himself has not developed or actively used it. It is obviously a setting that one can become stronger through hard work, but it is portrayed as a carefree and muddle-headed image. The most ridiculous thing is that most of the protagonist's current assets should actually be considered a windfall. It is completely contradictory to the original setting of earning legal and reasonable remuneration! In addition, the temporary mission issued by the system is actually a deus ex machina, forcibly inserting the protagonist into the original story. Coupled with the contradiction between the protagonist's own innocent attributes and Gotham's background, this is a pot of Laba porridge with an unknown taste. It may suit the taste of some readers, maybe... Thoughts (6 points): The protagonist is indeed naive, but he is also a good person with quite good moral standards. As for the twisted sense of joy shown in the book, that's not the protagonist's problem, it's the story's.

Reading progress: 841 Kamiya River, God! Reading score: 34 points, recommended Review summary: A very good Japanese light novel about gods and monsters, focusing on relaxed daily life and relatively dark folk mythology. Writing style (7 points): Based on the light novel's usual lively tone, the description of the action scenes is pretty good. The scenes of the God War in the later stages feel a little confusing and homogeneous, but the interesting daily descriptions are still remarkable. Characters (7 points): The protagonist himself is not very outstanding, he is basically just a tool for painting pictures. The two heroines, Prajna and Mari, are both taciturn types, with a mediocre sense of interaction. Except for the battle scenes, they just serve tea and pour water or pay silently. On the contrary, the two apprentices who are supporting characters feel more friendly. The shikigami are highlighted in their respective chapters, but as the protagonist group expands, they are gradually and inevitably symbolized. Poor Scrat is rather impressive. Plot (7 points): Generally speaking, it does not belong to the type of strong plot. It is still mainly about painting and adventure. The main storyline of encountering demons, the reconstruction of Takamagahara, and the divine battle with the underworld forces are not very urgent tasks. It will inevitably make the whole look a little loose. The main plots of each map are pretty good, basically based on redemption, and it is inevitable that there will be sad emotions. But the daily little plots are still a plus, and there are often interactions that make people laugh. Setting (7 points): The settings of the inner and outer worlds are not new, the routines for defeating monsters and upgrading have a long history, and the setting of the resurrection of the gods is quite similar to Soul Travel. Others, such as belief in gods, eight million ghosts and gods, are basically the conventional settings of Japanese folk customs. The combination is very good, and the understanding and explanation of the system are quite reasonable, and it can be regarded as a fairly self-consistent setting. Thoughts (6 points): It can be considered a typical brave adventure, with desires and responsibilities. Good and evil have their own destiny. Amid the wreckage are survivors seeking redemption.

Reading progress: Chapter 396 Half Immortal Reading score: 38 points, recommended. Storytelling summary: Under the guise of mental illness, he engages in the business of tormenting the protagonist. Phenomenal Chinese style works. The depiction of extreme scenes is quite good. One of the most miserable protagonists struggles to survive. Under the dark setting, the protagonist's struggle reveals a different kind of bad taste, and the readership of Zuowangdao adds a lot of color to him. Writing (7 points): The writing is smooth, especially the description of the weird atmosphere and painful emotions. Character (8 points): Probably one of the most miserable protagonists, but rather than being mentally ill, he is actually just an unlucky guy. From a professional point of view, the protagonist does not meet the diagnostic criteria for mental illness. He is tormented by his own abilities. But his situation in the two worlds is indeed different from that of a real psychopath. To a certain extent, this unlucky guy does provide readers with a lot of fun. On the whole, the character creation is very careful. Even the characters who don't appear much can quickly establish their image, behave in a regular manner, and interact with ingenuity. Plot (8 points): There are not many novels that can torment the protagonist to this point. But the biggest highlight is the various distinct conflicts that exist throughout the book. Whether it is the conflict between the protagonist's own spiritual and physical levels, the conflict between the protagonist's thoughts and the crazy world, the conflict between the two world backgrounds, etc. The highlighting and resolution of countless conflicts allow readers to be more deeply immersed in the atmosphere of the story. Setting (8 points): Although it borrows many elements of mental illness, strictly speaking, it has nothing to do with mental illness. It is a variant of traveling between two realms. However, this very clever use of the conflict between the two realms of vision creates many desperate scenes. It is so cruel and shocking! And the protagonist's ability is particularly suitable for torturing himself. The combat method of the self-inflicted sacrifice style is very similar to the mental patient in another work on this site, but that one is really mentally ill. As for the crazy world, weird skills, perverted human hearts, etc., They are not particularly interesting, but at least they are self-consistent in the context of restraint. Thoughts (7 points): The protagonist has a bottom line, not much, and there are occasional breakthroughs, but it is better than none. Overall, at least in the weird world, darkness and despair are the main colors. However, the paragraph and chapter commentaries in this book are very interesting, and book friends who are sitting and forgetting to read will be busy with their work all the time.

Reading progress: 115, Pregnancy Reading score: 30 points, recommended Review summary: The overall atmosphere is quite good, but it is not suitable for delving into the plot and settings. The characters are not distinctive. The story has not yet left the early stage of struggling to survive. Writing style (7 points): The author's writing has a unique charm. Especially when describing the weird and terrifying plot, the atmosphere is very strong, which helps readers to immerse themselves in the story. The descriptions of scenes and actions are good, with a rather freehand feel, but the description of details is a bit vague. Maybe my own imagination is not enough. Characters (6 points): Among all the characters currently on the stage, I am most optimistic about Grandpa, who is shrewd and simple. Relatively speaking, the protagonist's indifference and numbness inevitably have a sinister, even vicious feeling when advancing the plot. And when he saw "Grandpa" again, he seemed a little naive and weak. There is a slight sense of middle school. Not very likable. The female characters are mainly virtuous, but have no special characteristics. The rest of the characters are not very impressive, so I won't comment on them. Plot (5 points): The plot line is relatively complex and chaotic, mainly revolving around the protagonist's many "life shells". Many things are gathered together. At first glance, it seems to be very dangerous, but because many lines are intertwined, it makes people feel that the story is not told clearly. It just feels like the whole world is targeting the protagonist from the beginning, but the protagonist and the audience are both in a state of confusion, and it is easy to feel rushed and confused. I can only say that it looks wonderful, but it is difficult to understand. Setting (6 points): Looking at the unfolding of the world of Traveler and Box Garden, the settings of the ghosts, demons, secular gods, and gods are quite folkloric, reflecting the author's consistent skills. However, the overall setting is a bit vague. The acquisition of various abilities, the distinction between various gods and monsters, and even the life and death of the plot characters are not clear. The clouds and mountains are shrouded in fog, and it is unclear. After seeing it, I felt that it was mainly about oral pleasure. Thoughts (6 points): The protagonist's indifference and numbness push the entire plot into the category of a survival game. The special box garden in Shenzhou Luchen has yet to be explored. It is still unclear where the atmosphere of holding children from each family will eventually go.

Reading progress: Chapter 20 Madmen, bastards, scoundrels and fools Reading score: 26 points, not recommended Storytelling summary: The writing is plain, the description is simple, the characters are mediocre, the plot needs to be polished, the setting is not new, and it feels a bit like a running story. Writing style (5): Too much discussion, descriptions of scenes, characters, actions and expressions are very brief, and the overall story is very plain. It's more difficult to put into context. Characters (5): It may be because the plot has not really unfolded yet, but even the protagonist himself does not have a distinct image. Whether it is the original classmates, professors, or the original orphanage characters, they all appear vague and general, making it difficult to leave an impression. Plot (5): The main plots we have seen so far are mainly Mag's admission guidelines, the protagonist's first trip to school, the process of being divided into clubs after being sorted into schools, the dilemma of the whole school sleeping in the hall, and the scams encountered during club assessments. There isn't actually much content, but it feels like it was rushed, with missing details and a narrow viewing angle. For example, McGonagall directly took the protagonist to Apparition to Diagon Alley without notifying the person in charge of the orphanage. There was an obvious lack of details in communicating with the orphanage. It is not impossible to use anti-fraud as a symbol of wisdom in the club assessment, but it completely ignores the objective fact that the young wizards are only 11 years old, and the senior students of Hogwarts are basically adults. Setting (5): I don't see any original settings. The protagonist has neither a system nor a unique talent. The story background has not been expanded for the time being. If you are not a fan of HP, it is probably difficult for readers to persist through the first three chapters. In addition, the setting of Yingyuan's small club is, how should I put it, a bit too detailed. Thought (6): It is difficult for ordinary people and ordinary people to imagine why the protagonist wants to wade into the muddy waters of the original work.

Reading progress: Chapter 170: Bombardment of the Ministry of Magic Reading score: 34 points, recommended. Review summary: The Hogwarts adventure of the original generation. The protagonist should be of indigenous origin, with a somewhat evil background. The writing is smooth and full of joy. The character creation is consistent with the original work, and the interpretation can be justified. The expanded mythological background is not too obtrusive. The affirmation of "love" is quite positive. Writing style (7): The writing is smooth. The description of the environment is acceptable, but I think it lacks the weirdness of the original work where dreams and evil coexist. However, most fans don't pay attention to the weird atmosphere of children's literature, and they can't force it. There are not many action scenes, basically no big scenes. The language description is very brilliant, especially the inner talk of the protagonist, which is one of the biggest highlights of this article. The details of the writing are well grasped, especially the description of the expressions in the verbal confrontation is very careful. Character (8): It seems that he is not a time-traveling protagonist at the moment. The title says it's about evil thoughts, so naturally it's impossible to expect a lawful good protagonist. But judging from the description of the inner drama, when the protagonist appears on the stage, he has relatively obvious malice towards beings other than his mother. Personally, I think the description of the original characters in the original novel is consistent with the original novel, especially the portrayal of James and his gang is relatively likable. The creation of female characters is also relatively full. Whether it is the mother, Lily or the follower, they all show their own thinking and persistence, rather than just facial makeup. This kind of skill is quite rare in today's online novels. However, it must be pointed out that as 11-year-old children, the students' behavior was a bit too mature. I'm afraid it will be difficult to show the trajectory of growth as the plot progresses. Plot (6): The overall pace of the plot is slow, with more than 400,000 words, only half a year has passed. I'm afraid this is not for 5 million words. There is basically no poisonous point, and there is no plot that is obviously mentally retarded. However, many key plot points seem a bit deliberate and a bit staged. Setting (6): The current plot mainly expands the worldview of Western biblical stories and fantasy novels. The protagonist's djinn ability is actually very powerful. It currently displays limited wishes, 7 times damage back, soul control, etc. In order to prevent the plot from getting out of control, many patches were made and restrictions were made through deliberate plot coincidences. Overall, it can be said to be interesting, but not outstanding. Thought (7): The main character is not a good person. However, the overall tone of the novel is still an affirmation of "love". Whether it is the maternal love of the mother, Lily's fraternity, the friendship between James and Sirius, Dumbledore's love for his relatives, and even the protagonist's "doting" for his mother, there are highlights worthy of appreciation.